Summer Slam: West Rd. 1 (1. Charles vs. 16. Blessense)

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  1. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    Rules:
    Lines Required
    -4 Lines for a no show.
    -Max 14 Lines
    -Min 10 Lines
    -You dont have to agree on lines though.

    Before The Battle
    -You must check into your battle thread atleast 6 hours before the verse is due.
    -No biting obviously.
    -No Swaying. (Ill make the prediction thread)
    -Extensions will be granted as long as you ask me 6 hours in advance.
    -Both people are allowed a check in post, any others a vote will be deucted.
    -Same applies to people in the tourny going into another persons thread.

    During & After The Battle
    -You must vote on 3 battles & post links in the your thread, but your incourged to vote on more.
    -If it comes down to a tie my fellow helpers will do the deciding votes.
    -You may up as many times as you want, but there is no swaying, and arguing in the thread. For every time I see either two, I will deduct one vote. Same applies to people outside of the battle if your in the tourny.

    Due Date
    -Ill be getting the threads up after everyone checks in. Ill give them until Sunday. After that Ill find replacements. But threads will up by Monday morning, & verses will be due the next Saturday. You'll have plenty of time to write, because Ill have the brackets up.
    -Verses due Saturday 1:59am Eastern Time/9:59pm Pacific Time

    If you need to talk to someone get at: Formal Logic (Aim: MrWriteswell, Email: InvisionTheEnd@hotmail.com), rapter2k(aim: askkaboutme, email: askkaboutme@aol.com), Courtesy or Yo momma 2nd. Ill get their aim's and email soon.
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  2. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Aww yeaaahhh

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  3. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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  4. 6th_plague

    6th_plague More then meets the eye

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    Up come one children... I know people in perverted places... Post up
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  5. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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    CHARLES WHO?


    done macd ya wifey, n aint jus fist the girls spaces
    shit id even got my knee on walls, like las vegas..
    face it.. 'fore goin ahead ta write ya nonsense
    fuck around, an accident'll happen.. like ya moms kids
    far as live show spittin id hand em a mic, n thing is
    NO ONE'll see charlie like camron diaz n em other bitches
    left me in stitches, wid his game, cuz it aint nothin when
    he call me a pussy, all bcuz he, cant fuck with em
    sall a bluff fam gettin signed- ask em, sho' enough
    hiroshima's the only time seein charlie blowin up
    flawed lines lookin like dude from fight club hurt you
    cuz somebodys beatin himself up whenever in circles
    my cipers hurtful, given enough ta rough n murk you
    u'll make a show of yaself like fat bitch from colour purple
    first- all, dudes words receive more huhs? than Nasif's
    n ya claims of intelligence yea, still i'm sayiN as if..



    Hahaaaa..

    16 mawfukaa
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  6. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Faggot

    Try and understand the music,fool.. Ya get twisted up like a rubix cube
    When ya first post in this thread describes what the crowd always do to you
    I practice medevil arts,my torture shit will leave ya scarred n twirled
    .. With mase hit after mase hit, like back in the prime days of Harlem World
    Ya wack,i fuckin hate this.. cause i can win even when my stuff is basic
    ..Like havin ya mug leakin all over the floor like i was a clumsy waitress
    Come and you'll get smacked over, u get hard when fags are dressin
    This dumbfuck only checks the pawn shop ^^ when he he has erections
    Virgin ass muthafucker, we all know behind closed doors bein gays a hobbie
    The only rubber you ever slid between legs is when ur playin hockey
    Im a legend in this bitch, i'll better ya shit.. leave u battered badly
    U only ever doin 'it' cause ya bitch looks like that cousin offa the Adams family
    You can be KO'd in the first round EASY, all my shit will better ya verse
    Ya only tie to an Ali..
    ... Is that ya always shook, plus thats where ya parents left you at birth..

    Sleep,Nicca
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  7. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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  8. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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    i'll edit votes in here..
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  9. Insense

    Insense take one...

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    blessense-your lines were ok, but nothing really WOW'd me...the color purple line was dope though

    charles-your verse was better then blessense and it was filled with more punches.

    vote=charles
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  10. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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  11. word up

    word up i spell gud

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    vote charles


    he had a better verse
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  12. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Blessence was pretty consistent. He had some decent concepts, but werent worded that great. Overall the verse was pretty good, jus gotta work on the wording to make the punches impact more. Charles had more quotables, his multis were pretty nice too. He was consistent with nice hard punches. Good battle.

    Vote: Charles
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  13. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    Thank you for showing.
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  14. Courtesy

    Courtesy Level With Me

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    vote:charles

    ..nice ass punches, some crazy ass flow, other cat lacked some important mediocre skills, wasnt feelin his verse..charles had the upperhand since the beginning
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  15. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    charles wins....haha one of the few dudes who has long lines that actually has a good verse....punches were just on a higher level than other dud
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    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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