Summer Slam: Final 5 West. (1. Charles vs 2. Demik)

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  1. FórmÅl LôGíc

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    Rules:
    Lines Required
    -4 Lines for a no show.
    -Max 30 Lines
    -Min 10 Lines
    -You dont have to agree on lines though.

    Before The Battle
    -You must check into your battle thread atleast 6 hours before the verse is due.
    -No biting obviously.
    -No Swaying. (Ill make the prediction thread)
    -Extensions will be granted as long as you ask me 6 hours in advance.
    -Both people are allowed a check in post, any others a vote will be deucted.
    -Same applies to people in the tourny going into another persons thread.

    During & After The Battle
    -You must vote on 3 battles & post links in the your thread, but your incourged to vote on more.
    -If it comes down to a tie my fellow helpers will do the deciding votes.
    -You may up as many times as you want, but there is no swaying, and arguing in the thread. For every time I see either two, I will deduct one vote. Same applies to people outside of the battle if your in the tourny.

    Due Date
    -Verses due Saturday 1:59am Eastern Time/9:59pm Pacific Time
    -Votes due Monday 12 midnight.

    If you need to talk to someone get at: Formal Logic (Aim: MrWriteswell, Email: InvisionTheEnd@hotmail.com), rapter2k(aim: askkaboutme, email: askkaboutme@aol.com), Courtesy or Yo momma 2nd. Ill get their aim's and email soon.
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  2. Torch1

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    1st rank v 2nd rank


    lets make it a classic dude
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  3. Charles

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    Classics are usually close, so come dope, and be almost close to getting a vote, k?
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  4. Torch1

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    the cockyness makes me not like you as much as i used to [game]
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  5. Charles

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    My cockyness is one of my net traits, sorry if you dont like it.

    Niqqas like me for my verses, not my wuvy duvy ness.

    Now dont post till u got ya verse, pz.
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  6. Torch1

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    rm was down all last night


    this//
    is//
    my//
    verse//


    it was down, ask jeff


    so dq me if you must

    not my fault....
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  7. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Word, when can we post our verses?
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  8. FórmÅl LôGíc

    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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    You've got til tonight.
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  9. -ion-

    -ion- Tough Guys Wear Pink

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    finals baby
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  10. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    The king is here,

    Demik huh? Pfff, check it ya'll..

    Your the same as every rm battler, i'll better ya rhymin',
    ..And stomp this carbon copy, till he resembles a diamond,
    Rock dypers kid, cuz when i drop it, ya beds soft,
    Tails tween ya legs..
    .. & Knuckles in ya face, like u was Sonic the Hedgehog,
    Dumbfuck, i'll drop u in the ocean right out, at depth,
    Have you stuck at sea, kinda like when u try the alphabet,
    Im feared even when im simple, cuz i'll rap and win it,
    U jus a white bitch gettin fucked on the net, like Paris Hilton,
    You shouldnt even be here, faggot, your hardly a man,
    Histroy shoulda repeated itself, and it been Charlie n Nam,
    I dont give a fuck bout points, im rapin the truest thugs
    After this beatin, only thing peeps'll be donatin to you, is blood,
    I hate people with fake names too, cuz theyre rockin it wrong
    How the fuck you a Torch when you're never hot off the top?
    I dont think u get the system homie, i reckon ya thick,
    Cuz lookin at ya rep level..
    ..U prolly thought it was how kg's u can bench press at the gym,
    Im known as a fighter, i fuck faggots up when in mass brawls
    But peeps bounce far as they can wen u try ballin', like Slamball
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  11. Torch1

    Torch1 Speak Pimp Fluently

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    he posted late


    i win
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  12. kaLeeF

    kaLeeF me and weed go waaay back

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    demik you gonna post ya verse??
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  13. Huggy Dokelbert

    Huggy Dokelbert New Member

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    Im sorry...was.....was that verse directed at me?

    i dont wanna win by no show, id rather smash this cocky faggot

    AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA, omg, DUUUUUUUUCK move




    I gotta be honest, Ill bomb kids when I drop shit
    Funny that PBA started suckin when you had to face adonis
    Outta luck dude, this bet hurts while i easily roast his svripture
    Duck move? it gets worse, this fag was too scared to even post a picture
    imma set the tone...get the message slow; you losin, you needa let it go
    i aint seen this many flipped punches, since the power rangers episodes
    ya average at most, need a wing 'n a prayer if u wanna battle me ho..
    when charles's so under the radar, Al Quieda's takin strategy notes
    A fight?, no, leavin with a broken nose in a hard scrap
    with rings around your eyes big enough to throw darts at
    His punches are played, lame...im sorry, i dont feel
    To the point that the Parker Brothers are finalizing the board game deal
    Phony textcee, you want my life, you're a fake livin off bitch fame
    & Ya only highlight was the one line that actually mentioned my name
    Shoulda ducked me, too gay to over power your fate
    & You KNOW you're scared when you post 2 Days and 3 Hours late
    OMG IM GETTIN THE WIN, nah, i stil remain calm and shit
    because sayin 'I BEAT CHARLES', was never an accomplishment
    you on me? your wins? you aint earn three im settin a trial
    cause the ONLY thing you killed in this tourny was Resin's style
    Kids needa remember, he never had the win, did he?
    Charlie cant replace this fox...like Spin City
    He's done, watch as you see his flow go
    I think i woulda got by just as easy if i had accepted his no show


    bring the noise, bitch
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  14. Mr. Inkwell

    Mr. Inkwell the real.

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    v - Demik

    Why?

    I gotta be honest, Ill bomb kids when I drop shit
    Funny that PBA started suckin when you had to face adonis

    imma set the tone...get the message slow; you losin, you needa let it go
    i aint seen this many flipped punches, since the power rangers episodes
    ya average at most, need a wing 'n a prayer if u wanna battle me ho..
    when charles's so under the radar, Al Quieda's takin strategy notes
    A fight?, no, leavin with a broken nose in a hard scrap
    with rings around your eyes big enough to throw darts at

    Bang bang, killer shit there.

    I liked these by Charles though:
    You shouldnt even be here, faggot, your hardly a man,
    Histroy shoulda repeated itself, and it been Charlie n Nam,

    I hate people with fake names too, cuz theyre rockin it wrong
    How the fuck you a Torch when you're never hot off the top?

    That Torch line was fucking fire, problem is though that Charles didn't bring enough of said fire to win the battle.

    Good shit.
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  15. FórmÅl LôGíc

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    1-0 Demik. Ill let both late verses slide.
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  16. -Oz-

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    Charles

    Funny, Whitty, Dope


    Iunno what happened, Charles one of my favs, cause you always come with some dope original shit, but it just wasnt happening this time, the 2 I quoted were dope, but other than that, it was just mediocrity everywhere. Tho. no one really care bout onslought matches.

    Demik



    Kids needa remember, he never had the win, did he?
    Charlie cant replace this fox...like Spin City
    He's done, watch as you see his flow go
    I think i woulda got by just as easy if i had accepted his no show

    Decent too.

    Iunno, close type shit. Demik had some good personals, his creative lines werent doing it for me tho, but both had a ton of lines that were unimpressive. It came down to both having a couple good lines, and I think charles had the line of the battle, but Demik personals were hitting pretty hard to me.

    On a side note...im sick of seeing these "style punches", its the same shit everytime, just insert different textcee name, shit is done to death. I wouldnt recommend anyone using them unless your gonna be original and creative with shit like that.

    Still, Close battle...

    Vote Demik His personals were solid enough to edge this out
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  17. jweaksfromdapike

    jweaksfromdapike The Pain and the Poetry

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    Charles

    Your the same as every rm battler, i'll better ya rhymin',
    ..And stomp this carbon copy, till he resembles a diamond,
    ok opener...seen lines like this before
    Rock dypers kid, cuz when i drop it, ya beds soft,
    Tails tween ya legs..
    .. & Knuckles in ya face, like u was Sonic the Hedgehog,
    creative...but came out decent
    Dumbfuck, i'll drop u in the ocean right out, at depth,
    Have you stuck at sea, kinda like when u try the alphabet,
    lol...coo
    Im feared even when im simple, cuz i'll rap and win it,
    U jus a white bitch gettin fucked on the net, like Paris Hilton,
    decent
    You shouldnt even be here, faggot, your hardly a man,
    Histroy shoulda repeated itself, and it been Charlie n Nam,
    really creative..i like this one..nice
    I dont give a fuck bout points, im rapin the truest thugs
    After this beatin, only thing peeps'll be donatin to you, is blood,
    weak
    I hate people with fake names too, cuz theyre rockin it wrong
    How the fuck you a Torch when you're never hot off the top?
    weak attempt at a play on his name
    I dont think u get the system homie, i reckon ya thick,
    Cuz lookin at ya rep level..
    ..U prolly thought it was how kg's u can bench press at the gym,
    ok..nothin special
    Im known as a fighter, i fuck faggots up when in mass brawls
    But peeps bounce far as they can wen u try ballin', like Slamball
    kinda of a weak closer

    started off really good..but about mid verse the level of creativity in the punches went down ..didnt stay consistant the whole way through..but still a lot better then a lot of verses i see on here

    Demik

    I gotta be honest, Ill bomb kids when I drop shit
    Funny that PBA started suckin when you had to face adonis
    nice personal opener
    Outta luck dude, this bet hurts while i easily roast his svripture
    Duck move? it gets worse, this fag was too scared to even post a picture
    kinda weak personal
    imma set the tone...get the message slow; you losin, you needa let it go
    i aint seen this many flipped punches, since the power rangers episodes
    decent
    ya average at most, need a wing 'n a prayer if u wanna battle me ho..
    when charles's so under the radar, Al Quieda's takin strategy notes
    weak
    A fight?, no, leavin with a broken nose in a hard scrap
    with rings around your eyes big enough to throw darts at
    ok...but doesnt have a huge impact
    His punches are played, lame...im sorry, i dont feel
    To the point that the Parker Brothers are finalizing the board game deal
    not feeling it
    Phony textcee, you want my life, you're a fake livin off bitch fame
    & Ya only highlight was the one line that actually mentioned my name
    ok...but doesnt hit hard
    Shoulda ducked me, too gay to over power your fate
    & You KNOW you're scared when you post 2 Days and 3 Hours late
    decent personal
    OMG IM GETTIN THE WIN, nah, i stil remain calm and shit
    because sayin 'I BEAT CHARLES', was never an accomplishment
    weak
    you on me? your wins? you aint earn three im settin a trial
    cause the ONLY thing you killed in this tourny was Resin's style
    nice personal
    Kids needa remember, he never had the win, did he?
    Charlie cant replace this fox...like Spin City
    hahah..good shit..i like this
    He's done, watch as you see his flow go
    I think i woulda got by just as easy if i had accepted his no show
    coo closer

    demik you were aobut just the same as charles..didnt stay consitant in your verse...but you starte to heat up a bit towards the end...right now its around dead even...but i think..

    vote=charles..i believe he just barely edged it out...a line or two better/more creative punces...

    good match fellas
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  18. MANchyld

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    nice battle yall....

    charles

    Your the same as every rm battler, i'll better ya rhymin',
    ..And stomp this carbon copy, till he resembles a diamond,
    ok opener

    Rock dypers kid, cuz when i drop it, ya beds soft,
    Tails tween ya legs..
    .. & Knuckles in ya face, like u was Sonic the Hedgehog,
    nice

    Dumbfuck, i'll drop u in the ocean right out, at depth,
    Have you stuck at sea, kinda like when u try the alphabet,
    ok

    Im feared even when im simple, cuz i'll rap and win it,
    U jus a white bitch gettin fucked on the net, like Paris Hilton,
    lol

    You shouldnt even be here, faggot, your hardly a man,
    Histroy shoulda repeated itself, and it been Charlie n Nam,
    eehhh

    I dont give a fuck bout points, im rapin the truest thugs
    After this beatin, only thing peeps'll be donatin to you, is blood,
    nice one

    I hate people with fake names too, cuz theyre rockin it wrong
    How the fuck you a Torch when you're never hot off the top?
    eehhh

    I dont think u get the system homie, i reckon ya thick,
    Cuz lookin at ya rep level..
    ..U prolly thought it was how kg's u can bench press at the gym,
    ok

    Im known as a fighter, i fuck faggots up when in mass brawls
    But peeps bounce far as they can wen u try ballin', like Slamball
    weak closer

    Demik
    I gotta be honest, Ill bomb kids when I drop shit
    Funny that PBA started suckin when you had to face adonis
    nice opener

    Outta luck dude, this bet hurts while i easily roast his svripture
    Duck move? it gets worse, this fag was too scared to even post a picture
    ok

    imma set the tone...get the message slow; you losin, you needa let it go
    i aint seen this many flipped punches, since the power rangers episodes
    eehh

    ya average at most, need a wing 'n a prayer if u wanna battle me ho..
    when charles's so under the radar, Al Quieda's takin strategy notes
    lol.. nice one

    A fight?, no, leavin with a broken nose in a hard scrap
    with rings around your eyes big enough to throw darts at
    nice...

    His punches are played, lame...im sorry, i dont feel
    To the point that the Parker Brothers are finalizing the board game deal
    eehhh

    Phony textcee, you want my life, you're a fake livin off bitch fame
    & Ya only highlight was the one line that actually mentioned my name
    cool

    Shoulda ducked me, too gay to over power your fate
    & You KNOW you're scared when you post 2 Days and 3 Hours late
    good one, even tho you posted after him...

    OMG IM GETTIN THE WIN, nah, i stil remain calm and shit
    because sayin 'I BEAT CHARLES', was never an accomplishment
    ok

    you on me? your wins? you aint earn three im settin a trial
    cause the ONLY thing you killed in this tourny was Resin's style
    nice personal

    Kids needa remember, he never had the win, did he?
    Charlie cant replace this fox...like Spin City
    weak

    He's done, watch as you see his flow go
    I think i woulda got by just as easy if i had accepted his no show
    ok closer


    with that breakdown... gotta give this to Demik
    he had the better personals and better flows
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  19. Charles

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    Niqqaz lucky i posted first and was pressed fa time, cuz if ida had time for 30 and to write more, dude wuda been fucked.

    Nice to see you did your research on me when i don't know who the fuck you are! Plus, u posted after me, so how is me postin late showin im scared?

    Whateva's whateva, love me or hate me, biach!

    For the record, i had 19 exams in 2 weeks, im suprised i had time for thixs tourney at all, wait till next tourney ya'll, i got a year of no exams, so charles'll be back in full effect.

    props on the verse tho, was kinda nice,

    3-1..
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