summer semi's: 07- insanity V 27- leeharveyoswald

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  1. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    SEMI-FINALS

    ::TOPIC::

    "describe your dislike and likes of each of the 4 seasons"


    verses due wed. @ 11:59pm eastern
    votes due sat. @ 11:59am eastern

    20 bar min ... 40 bar max

    good luck





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  2. bigKEN

    bigKEN Hoosier Daddy??

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    hey Demmy... good luck

    checkin' in
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  3. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    hooray for everything
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  4. bigKEN

    bigKEN Hoosier Daddy??

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    ahh!! running out of time. Got to work

    keystyle for y'all

    I’ll start with autumn; the setting is depressed and solemn
    Leaves that have fallen, crunch beneath each step when walkin’
    It’s a time for college parties, first semester is always neat when
    You don’t go to school to think, just to drink on the weekends
    Girls become freaks when, alcohol limits inhibitions
    And it gives’em intuitions, that Ken’s equipped to hit’em
    Not to mention my birthday, comes every October
    Every year as I got older, I spent less time not sober
    And in winter it got colder, snowy, and not a lively time
    I had an apartment were I’d be fine, partying like ‘99
    With no college party scene, winter grows old fast
    Riches don’t last, and Christmas leaves me broke ass
    My wallet’s busted, I haven’t nutted, winter ain’t great to me
    So I aim to see, Springtime, shiverin as I wait patiently
    Then comes Spring, the parties magically come back again
    Girls once again have passion in, getting drunk and attractin’ men
    Having spunk blast at them… god I love the spring time
    Every girl wants to be loved… and I got the right words to feed dimes
    Then the school year ends, and in summer your annoyed
    You see all the high school kids, you’ve tried to avoid
    All the past drama resurfaces, whole attitude is nervousness
    All the women you’ve been twistin’ wonder where the pervert is
    And why you never called, and why you don’t hang out
    Like it’s ever your fault, things proceeded from when you made out
    Into getting’ laid out and banged out, so I stay at my apartment
    Waiting for a new school year, so I can get out these undergarments
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  5. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    i hate this topic so much

    its giving me a head ache
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  6. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    Team Demik is on to the finals


    Winter, the birth of a new year, plains covered in snow
    Mother nature's time to rest, animals pick up and go
    Some find winter saddening, failing to see the true beauty
    One needs to see the whole picture to appreciate it truely
    Because for seeds to be planted, winter comes first
    On the coat tails of winter comes the melting to spring's birth

    On to spring, better weather conditions and new things
    Seeds, Babies and rain fall is what this season brings
    Her peak of activity, because after spring, nature is spent
    With things dieing all the time, spring replenishes them
    My favourite season of them all, and this is the truth
    Because if it stands for anything, spring stands for youth

    Next is the month of June, and school kids know what that means
    Last month of school and the longest of all months it seems
    Not my favourite, but next in line for it's rest and relaxation
    Wonders for my sex life, even eye candy for your bikini fixation
    Then august, summer ends and the leaves turn their darkest
    The start of the dark seasons growth, along with fall harvest

    Pumpkin patches and Halloween couldnt lighten this dreary time
    Showing death and dryness make it the least favourite of mine
    Weather changes and school is back, near the end of the cycle
    But a new end leads to a new beginning, for those to be insightful
    However, the end leads to winter, the snow...and the it melts
    On to Decmber, January and the cycle repeats itself



    Hard Nipples
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  7. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    damn the non-voters
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  8. Resilient.

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    Insanity - You verse I enjoyed alot. Had comedy, and alot of truths in it as well. Your flow was onpoint throughout, and you had some effective multies in there. The shit about Winter and Summer I liked especially because you added more comedic lines in there reflecting on truth. Nice Verse..

    Demik - Although you had a nice verse with some great points and alot of truths ('cept your sex life part), you didn't follow up with the topic. You described the seasons, the topic was to tell how you liked and disliked them. But good verse nonetheless

    Vote - Insanity

    -Weez
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  9. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    i cant help it [game]

    the topic was hard...it was such an oprah magazine type thing.....
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  10. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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  11. vengeance

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    Insanity - Funny piece, you took it more laid back, kinda like a pop song, but honestly, the only season that was ill that you did was summer, the rest were straight.

    Demik - More serious approach, more in depth, except summer, but whatever, topicals are usually about detail and being specific, and thats what you had over big Ken. And also why you took it.

    Vote- Demik
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  12. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    im sexier than big ken



    yah...i said it


    *runs off naked into sunset*
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  13. Macabre

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    Insanity-
    A nice verse, had some great imagery at the beginning. Had a nice flow, and you took more of a 'description into how seasons affect your life' approach.

    Demik-
    Took a unique approach to the topic. Had everything organized and really described the seasons. Had the flow, imagery, and description needed to make the topic work.

    Vote- Demik, I liked his approach to the topic more, and how he described the cycle of it all. Insanity took a different approach, and kinda ran off topic when talking about sex...lol
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  14. LeeHarveyOswald

    LeeHarveyOswald I Rape Children

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    big penis


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  15. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    lol...team demik to the finals

    im going for demik as well...both verses were aight, but i liked demiks more due to the fact each switch from season to season gave me more detail and imagery, insanity's was aight, but just not enough
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  16. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    winner: demik
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