Summer GRB Semis: Hibernation vs. Non$en$e

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  1. Neyedus

    Neyedus Active Member

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    I think if Non would have used a different beat this woulda been a lot closer. I thought it was a nice battle, good listen.
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  2. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    Yea I know
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  3. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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  4. enef

    enef voting against DZK in every round.

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    i agree
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  5. Hibernation

    Hibernation Well-Known Member

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    And non, I'm guessing our little "feud" has died out. But regaurding your comment on why nobody has left a comment as to why they have voted for me... Look @ your 25 reply dispute with my first voter who left an indepth, fair reply. That's what's I find unfair, I don't get no love or critique because my voters feel reluctant to even break it down knowing the consequences will be a scorning. I don't blame them though, its hard being the ref in a boxing match knowing the one who lost is a poor sport with a temper who will punch you in the face.
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  6. Skrybe SK

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    hibe if you hate voted me back and I lose by 1 vote....YOU DIE!!
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  7. EmceeGoddess

    EmceeGoddess Disgruntled Man

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    Here you go, Nonny, you little fucking baby.

    Hibernation:

    Excellent beat choice, this Ras Kass instrumental is a perfect pick for a battle. Your opener is pretty dope to me now, but it was slightly less dope to me when I first heard it as I couldn't make out what you were saying in some parts of the scheme.

    The Katrina victims scheme would've been nuts had it been pronounced clearer because I honestly can't understand like 4 of the words you're saying in there. The Steven Urkel and Lisa Turtle scheme that follows it was very sick.

    I'm Hibernation the Don, so why am I facing favian's date to the prom?
    You gay little fraud
    I'll put my foot so deep in your ass
    That your inner man will be able to sniff the crotch of your favorite thong

    Came off insanely ill, both the lyrics, flow and delivery were great on this line. The ender is very descriptive and vivid, heh.

    I hate the crap about the reality shows. It could've been flipped better, but just randomly naming the show titles was corn to me.

    You just a fake New York wannabe thug with no content
    And if you speaking to me as if you wanna meet in the streets
    I'll have police on the scene covering up Nonsense
    Like Aesop Rock fans claiming his stuff is just complex

    Definitely the best shit in this battle, one of the sickest lines I've heard in the tourney, and it's sad that people don't understand how dope this bar is. Very few people grasp the difficulty of forming a group of lines with an interweving ABBA type rhyme scheme, that actually makes sense, flows perfect, and ends with a disgusting punch that is backed up by a setup that makes total sense. It's really sad.

    Passing semi's so fast/World's Wildest Police Chases line was sick, but like I said earlier, I think it should've stood out more, as you kinda rushed over it and it's doubtful many people caught it. Although, to be honest, it's kind of an obscure reference, which is probably why I like it, it's kinda subtle and hard to catch.

    Everything after carbon copy was straight murder. I absolutely hate this beat, ugh, why'd you switch. Babies come from line was gay as shit and came off super forced. Just wasn't hard hitting at all. Frend request was kinda cool for some neat filler.

    You came off like a psycho who wanted to end rap careers and not waste time cracking random jokes. Solid verse.

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    Non$en$e:

    Intro is gay and takes too long. You should've jumped right into it like you wanted his head. This beat is absolutely awful for a battle beat, sir. I'm sorry, but it's so hard to take you serious singing, "I'm on that kill Hibe shit!" to this beat. It's way too friendly and nonbattly.

    First line is filler as hell. Someone looks exceedingly odd? Not very hard hitting. House arrest line is basic. Live on the net is pretty good. Lottery ticket is corn, lol and makes little sense. I don't look at Hibe's post count and see a piece of paper. Yeah, yeah, I get the line, he posts a lot, it still sucks.

    The Tetris line is forced. I'll be honest, I do not get the Yogi The Bear line. His voice box is like Yogi The Bear, his voice boxes like Yogi The Bear? He sounds like Yogi The Bear? Sorry, pal, I have no idea. Again, dissing people who have nothing to do with anything is insanely gay and not needed. It was corny when Nimrod did it and it's corny when you're doing it.

    Hibe gets another unfunny and uncreative line about how Hibe is fat, wow, never heard that concept before. Funny since you said you'd "skip over the fat jokes" like 20 seconds before, but whatever.

    Total filler and boredom until Mexican, which is so simple and bland that you should feel cheated for ruining a funny concept with the most basic execution. Last week line came off very sick, flowed good and was delivered tight, although it's untrue that Hibe cheats, so it's kinda weak you're attacking that so vehemently, but if you really believe it, then it's fine.

    I researched this jerk and I really found shit
    seventh chakra got a sig dats pointing to his soundclick

    It's lines like these that bring down your verse. We saw your picture, what the fuck are you telling us this again for, are we stupid? Just look at this line, Non, look at it.. it brings absolutely nothing to the table (much like nearly all of your other lines) and is so fucking basic and unneeded that it's annoying. Horrible setup, too, what the fuck does, "I really found shit" even mean? Also, is it impossible for you to have a bar that ever exceeds more than 1 single multi at the end of it? It's bore city man.

    my stomach hurting...from laughing so hard/
    and to think, people really thought you actually hard/

    What the fuck is this shit? Okay, your stomach is hurting from laughing so hard (amazing setup, by the way) because he has aliases, and people thought he was actually hard? What the fuck does him being hard have to do with ANYTHING? You are honestly fucking HORRIBLE at writing and terribly mediocre at rapping.

    Your lines say absolutely nothing. Your rapping says absolutely nothing that your lyrics in text alone can't. Boring, boring, boring. Total snoozefest.

    (hah) you lost dog, I'm just trynna be honest
    cause It's all over hibe like emceegoddess

    Probably your best bar to be honest, although it's not true at all.

    I done seen better versus in a game of street fighter/

    Verses/Versus lines are insanely overdone, and your line is flipped awful and basic. Why don't you try stepping a line up with a bit of ••••••••••?

    ya tracks like a time clock all I hear is punchins/

    Pretty good line.

    damn you wack, ya flow sucks, you nusaince/
    you just caught the beat down like a new crip/

    Doesn't rhyme and the crip part has nothing to do with anything.

    now you think you ill cause ya people feel/
    that they gotta tell you lies just so ya'll can try to keep it real/

    Flowed pretty tight, but that's about it with this line.

    Overall, your beat is awful, your flow is boring and rarely (see: NEVER) switches up and does anything different. You follow the same structure throughout your entire verse which made it a total snoozefest.

    Your lines are super basic and boring as well. Instead of merely TELLING us something, try and make it clever, that's the difference between you and Hibe. Your creativity in punchlines rarely exceeds "He's a ?? like a ??" and it gets boring.

    Basically all of your lines are insanely simple and basic and easy to write (to be honest, I freestyle with better rhymes than you've written in this battle) and Hibe's shit is insanely complex and delivered with the ferociousness and intensity that you lack. He switches up his style throughout (even though you all label it as the same OMG HE HAS A COOL DELIVERY crap) and keeps listeners interested and rewinding shit. Your whole verse is the same style on repeat.

    So, I vote for Hibe.
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  8. LordHysider

    LordHysider Bawler

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    EXACTLY! Ur dope, love ya tracks, but to me, ya battles aren't hard hittin, where the lines at? u rush mad lines and switch up the beat at awkard moments, cats voting on how grimey u rhyming, what does that have to do with lyrics, in my opinion, when u battle, ur suppose to lyrically "clown" your opponent with clever lines while ripping a dope beat, as hard as u can, and u cannot sit there with a straight face and say you seriously beat beige, I know when u heard his verse, you were like oh shit, I hope I make it pass this round cuz that dude ripped me hard. U survived that round.

    Simple lines that hit hard is with a decent flow (and personals if applicable ie. pics or stories) is all u need to win battles. -/+ Dope intro or outro. But that is my preference, feel me.

    No Beef.

    and emcess goddess try to relax, this is only MY opinion. go to a porn site if u feel like buffering cock.
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  9. EmceeGoddess

    EmceeGoddess Disgruntled Man

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    its hard to take your opinion seriously when you consistently say the DUMBEST shit eive ever heard
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  10. Hibernation

    Hibernation Well-Known Member

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    Thanks to Emceegoddess for actually understanding hip hop and appreciating hard work

    But to lord hysider, I'm alright with someone thinking a I took a loss, its all opinion.. As long as more opinions support me, that's all that matters in the end to be honest. As far as the people constantly downplaying my whole approach, ..I won't allow that to happen. Because I know what you as a viewer want to see, you come here and peep a few battles with expectations of getting some laughs, and whoever gave you the most chuckles won... Bullshit

    Don't come at me like "where were ur lines", uhh, all over? They just weren't meant to be g-rated humorous quips. this is a tourney full of experienced battlers who know the technical aspects a good diss requires.. either wise I would have made a bunch of generic jokes made to appease the general audience as if this was a live freestyle battle. For instance, I could have flipped the script an dissed him for being thin (he's as skinny as a stripper pole, u could grate cheese with his ribs, he has to wear spandex condoms), or maybe even exaggerate the size of his nose (his nostrils are the size of the cave I hibernate in, he has hired landscapers to trim his nose hairs) or how about a good old clowning on his voice? (His voice is higher than my blood pressure, his voice is higher than nick nolte in his mugshot)

    But that shit is not fucking funny or ill to me, it takes two seconds to think of, and one second to set up.. its not like I can't do it, I just tried to break the mold by being different..

    And you're damn right I'm going to defend myself, I'm not some big headed jaded fucknut who feels the need to ignore everyone and just go to finals carelessly.. I'm winning 13 - 2, so its not like I'm bitching, I'm just disappointed and feel overlooked, regardless of how much I win by

    Moral of the story, fuck your laughs, I'm the original jokester of this website, I know how to make people laugh... However, I don't think humor is a genre of skill in music
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  11. Skrybe SK

    Skrybe SK Guest

    fuck hibernation....hahahahahahahahaha
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  12. Skrybe SK

    Skrybe SK Guest

    seriously tho hibe...can I do your intro for the finals?
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  13. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    Hibernation I swear to god you're the dumbest motherfucker I've ever seen in my life. You act like I'm the only one in this thread that said you didn't talk about shit in your verse, and all you have going for you is delivery. You said you're gonna defend yourself when someone downplays your approach...and what you think I ain't gonna do the same thing??? Who told you that your opinion was so right that everybody else has to agree.?The main reason why more people AREN'T speaking up about it, is because they know how much you're gonna bitch about it.
    Plus you're all buddy buddy with all the voters.

    As soon as someone says they didn't like your verse, you and your boyfriend emceegoddess are all over them like how could you not like the verse, it had all these dope lines which nobody can quote. You're all like I'm hibernation I'm lyricall above everyone else, if you didn't get it you're dumb. Kid your verse wasn't even hard hitting, you didn't have shit going for you. I like the fact that you can downplay my verse, but let me speak on your verse, and it's oh no you can't do that, this is hibernation I'm lyrically on a level where I have to lower myself many levels. Fuck outta here ass crack man.
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  14. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    And I'll just make my response to emceegoddess quick

    This message is hidden because EmceeGoddess is on your ignore list

    hahaha.. & With that I'm Out!!
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  15. EmceeGoddess

    EmceeGoddess Disgruntled Man

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    what does this have to do with anything? honestly, what are you babbling about? when people say things that totally stupid to me i speak about them. u do the same fuckin thing, as soon as i said you were fuckin wack and hibe got you, you started bitching and calling me a hate voter and a dickrider. shut the fuck up.

    honestly, i gave u the biggest and fairest vote post ever and you still whine like a girl, u didnt even thank me for relistening to that wack ass verse of yours. you pretending you are getting the shaft is fuckin SICKENING and its pathetic as all hell.
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  16. EmceeGoddess

    EmceeGoddess Disgruntled Man

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    word, whatever makes it easier to pretend i hate vote, eh? real fair, i spend time out of my schedule to listen your CORNY, UNFUNNY, BORING, piece of SHIT verse for a SECOND TIME and you go back to being gay as shit. classic.
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  17. Noodles

    Noodles The People's Champion

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    ^^ did i go on for six pages with you goddess?


    damn i think i accepted your vote like... within a page and a half at maximum

    now stop bickering.. this battle is 1000 votes close to taking me from 2nd favorite hibe battle damnit
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  18. SmiRk

    SmiRk Logic or Death

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    Non: "play off your downfalls"...eh.. "on your arm, your shoulder and back".. HAHAHA.. "CDL driver".. nice... "i thought he was mexican".. ha... "color blind"... dope... "online vet".. heh

    hahaha @ RM's Flava Flav

    Hibe: "big L's bulemic lesbian sister"... lmfao... "after I laugh it off at you".. sick... "screech by lisa"... heh.. "like aesop rock fans"... haha... "waiters for anorexics"... wow... "shooter mcgavin".. haha... "white for a day"... eh.. "dont mean he's conceited".. sick...

    Hibe killed this in my opinion. Guess the votes will decide.
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  19. Verbatim

    Verbatim Mr Write

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    Sleepy Brown - I love this beat....lesbian sister line cool...hand my ass..aiight....the delete you writtens series flow and scheme was serious....reality show series was tight...lol@the Aesop Rock line...nice...second beat your flow is so much better.....less to the table..nice...call me shooter mcgavin..lol.."you eat shit for breakfast"..lol....when little kids in school ask "where do babies come from" the teacher holds up a picture of you...lmao..nice..nonsense full of himself..nice closer

    Not Making Cents - love the New York shit beat still...flow is better than Hibe...post count look like a lottery ticket, lol,..tetris line cool...voice box like Yogi the bear....ass crack on arm your shoulder and back...lmao..oh shit..lol...mexican line nice...all registered last week..haha.talks about himself in first second and third person..micro machine man trying to rap...then you get your dogs/no wonder you call yourself an online vet...clever indeed

    wow..I thought Hibe was gonna take this after I heard his ver but Non came pretty ill...he had some lince that coulda been done without, some places his scheme was forced as shit but when he had a punch/diss it hit hard...Hibe I feel what your saying bout the whole joke thing but without some of those the verse just sounds like a generic battle type verse...it almost doesnt sound like a diss, gotta mix it up, at least in my opinion

    aaaaannnyway

    Vote= Nonsense even though it seems Hibe has got this shit in a bag like shit...in a bag
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  20. Hibernation

    Hibernation Well-Known Member

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    Thanks For The Votes Peoples
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