Summer GRB Rd 1: Punches vs. Laws

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  1. Arkon

    Arkon ''Ozone check ya PMs''

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    - $1000.00 prize money will be donated by NDesigns Screen Printing
    - $700 additional prize money will be divided up into the final round.




    GRB Summer 2006 Rules - First Round

    - First Round Audios are DUE Wed Night May 24th at 11.59 pm cst. Theme: up to 2-3+ Minutes must be about your opponent(s)
    - You must mention their BOARD name(s). Must be atleast 2 minutes.
    - If audio is not two minutes, you must contest it if you want a DQ.
    - One mp3 File Must Be posted Wed Night May 24th at 11.59 pm cst.- We will not store any audio files.
    - YOU MUST post using your board name that is registered to the match. Others will be DQ'ed.
    - Voting for Round 1 will start once all verses are up.
    - Voting links will be posted and votes will be shown.
    - No Comments allowed on battle post until voting links are posted.
    - Can post videos
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  2. L e S

    L e S New Member

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  3. Punches

    Punches a.k.a UH OH

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  5. TunK

    TunK Active Member

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    Beat - Laws
    Flow - Laws
    Wordplay - Laws
    Personals - Punches
    Delivery - Laws
    Punches - Laws
    Creativity - Laws

    Vote = Laws
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    Janitor Guest

    u need to click the link to vote.... your voting comments wont be allowed
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  7. Taiyamo Denku

    Taiyamo Denku W.A.S.T.E.L.A.N.D.S.

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    Punches - Man you got dope lines... , You just need to delivery them and flow them to where they impact better, need to polish as a emcee. You have the lyrics dats not the problem. i think you kinda overused the SNoop dogg reference, you based a large portion of your ish on dat including the intro. Overall though nice disses yo word up..

    LAWS - WOW, you murdered this beat , flow delivery, Loved dat "Insert generic Punchline" , Overall I like how you deliver your lines they impact alot harder you have perfected dat, which is what alot of emcees can't do. Overall dope ish , Liked the acapella ish at the end too..

    Vote - Laws

    Good battle here like I said Punches you got skill just need to perfect your style better. you could have got this if your punmches or lines impacted harder, feel me, if you don;t know what i mean hit me up I will show ya some examples...

    drop a honest vote on my battle if you havn't would appreciate.

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  8. Scribe

    Scribe IMQ8

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    I was admittedly scared to vote on this, because I heard Punches was the vindictive type. Oh well, I see my opponent is already in here with a vote so....

    Punches you did your thing, but this Laws track could have beaten any other battle. It's not so much that you came wack, but he absolutely murked this. Up there with the best tracks for the 1st round.

    Vote- Laws
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  9. Punches

    Punches a.k.a UH OH

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    LOL, are you kiddding me?
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  10. Scribe

    Scribe IMQ8

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    lmao, just what i thought fam. you came nice (pause), but Laws had the illest track of the entire round. its hard to beat that.
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  11. comPleXNY

    comPleXNY Illest Alive

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    laws- sick beat sick flow ill lines hard punches insert punch here hahahaha shyt is nice son i like this alot dope battle

    punches- sick flow nice lines delivering them seems to be ya problem! just work on that and u would be ill overall niceness though

    but i think

    laws got this

    nice battle yall
    good shyt

    vote on my battle if yall get the chance

    peace
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  12. Punches

    Punches a.k.a UH OH

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    ^Haha nah the vote is cool...but I'm curious to know the backing of hearing that I'm the "vindicative type"

    it's just funny to me...
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  13. Envizioneri

    Envizioneri Gifted n' Prolific

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    this is a dope battle, fa sho
    Laws--yeah, that "insert generic punchline here" was a dope flip...woulda been nicer if punches actually used generic punchlines,
    however, punches lived up to his name, cuz he had the better of it lyrically...definitely flipped ya name better than you did his...and the miss-punches, florida voting flip was ill...
    I'd give this to punches in a second, but I feel like I gotta go wit laws based on delivery...if the punches were made with more force, then the opposite would have been the result

    vote=laws
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  14. JohnnyBoot

    JohnnyBoot New Member

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    "I block punches like,INSERT GENERIC PUNCHLINE"....I don't know why but I think that was my favorite 4 lines this round...maybe cuz it was risky and straight to the point...I do know I actually laughed @ that...laws came nice..."safe in his trailer","parappa the rappa"

    punches was just pitted against a vet that's seasoned like cajun food...

    good show by both..

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  15. Non$en$e

    Non$en$e The Truth

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    Vote = Laws

    Laws came in the battle like he wanted the win...shit was hot I liked it...punches was nice too, but I feel as though laws was more aggresive and onpoint. Get shit from the both of ya'll...peace
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  16. Purple Haze

    Purple Haze pop warner hof

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    BTW, Ty Law isn't on the Jets anymore.
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  17. ssssslawk

    ssssslawk A wah di bloodclat dis

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    *holds nose*

    insert generic punchline

    O
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    GOODNESS





    rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrawl

    punches man your sound simply isnt as polished. you do got punches though. im a guy that votes mainly on overall enjoyability and laws took that for me. you camenice though.
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  18. KooL La!d

    KooL La!d iRock Cafe

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    " I block punches like, Insert generic punchline"...omg....that would have to be the best 4 lines in your whole entire verse, not to say that your verse wasn't hot, it was fire, but that stood out to me, had me laughing. But yea basically was Dirt said, filling up blanks", parappa the rapper"...hot verse.....punches, just wasn't doing it to me, your flow was nice, delivery was too..but just didn't compare to laws ish.

    vote-Laws.
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  19. Punches

    Punches a.k.a UH OH

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    Well, it's been fun

    Good luck and make me proud!
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  20. kingauthor

    kingauthor Active Member

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    Punches- U had some lines kid, with a bit more experience and polishing u would be real nice

    Laws- Just on another level. Good patterns, control and lines.

    V.Laws
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