Summer GRB Rd 1: O Damnage vs. Spewin

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  1. Arkon

    Arkon ''Ozone check ya PMs''

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    - $1000.00 prize money will be donated by NDesigns Screen Printing
    - $700 additional prize money will be divided up into the final round.




    GRB Summer 2006 Rules - First Round

    - First Round Audios are DUE Wed Night May 24th at 11.59 pm cst. Theme: up to 2-3+ Minutes must be about your opponent(s)
    - You must mention their BOARD name(s). Must be atleast 2 minutes.
    - If audio is not two minutes, you must contest it if you want a DQ.
    - One mp3 File Must Be posted Wed Night May 24th at 11.59 pm cst.- We will not store any audio files.
    - YOU MUST post using your board name that is registered to the match. Others will be DQ'ed.
    - Voting for Round 1 will start once all verses are up.
    - Voting links will be posted and votes will be shown.
    - No Comments allowed on battle post until voting links are posted.
    - Can post videos
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  2. ~Vio~

    ~Vio~ New Member

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    Wut up, 1st off goodluck to Spew, Second off my track link:

    Vz. Spewin
    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=453633

    Lyricz if you like to read along...

    Spewin is a good name, for a cat as wack as you/
    If I spat as lame as you, I’d react with yackin too/
    But of course, I was blessed with a heavenly gift/
    angelic flow, on top of a devilish spit/4
    Man im more konseetid than sydafects opponent/
    I don’t just break down a beat, I decompose it/
    Hold it stop, I ain’t even writin diss lines/
    If you spew rhymes, I’d rather piss and shyt mine/8
    You get beat down for this cake, battered and bruised/
    Like battling bux, this battles just a matter of how bad you will lose/
    suicidal retard, please get this kid help/
    Spew tried to slit his wrist with the razor from nextel/12
    You claim murdaland but you ain’t from harm city/
    So quit rap and start to sing blues like varsity/
    You from the suburbs, so you ain’t no thug/
    You’d have to buy a sobe, to have an adrenaline rush/16
    So lets back it up to 03, when you battled ill wayz/***
    You didn’t win the votes but DAMN you had some ill swayz/***
    But the voters weren’t having that, u suckin savage ass/
    This cat is wack, catch him in the club dancing the cabbage patch/20
    This ain’t even battle rap/
    This is kick a faggits ass, stab his abs, crack his skull until he cant react/
    I don’t think you can handle that/
    So instead find ya pride, hand it here and yeah I’ll take crap on that/24
    Aight wait, I’ma slowdown/
    Just mention ya girl’s a redneck dance party, she’s a hoe-down/
    And its funny that you thought you spit a better song/
    You pushing your luck like a sumo wrestling leprechaun/28
    i lyrically rape and kill kidz, the rap Jeffrey Dharma/
    Ya bitch sweatin me harder than runnin’ track in a sauna/
    is that pussy I smell from under ya skirt/
    The only way you seein round two is lifting up Cire’s shirt/32

    *** post 5, had the ill swayz
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=688982

    umm yeah, evrything else should be pretty self explanatory
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  3. Spewin

    Spewin MD MD

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  4. Arkon

    Arkon ''Ozone check ya PMs''

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  5. TunK

    TunK Active Member

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    I keep forgettin arkon lol. I'll try to remember.
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  6. ~Vio~

    ~Vio~ New Member

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    vote...
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  7. BlackJesus

    BlackJesus ***************

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    Damnage

    Dudes got a real radio friendly voice. But it seems...you might be suited to real songs then net battles...know what I mean? Some decent lines but nothing really mind blowing...but all and all shit was nice to me...

    Spewin

    Christ you name makes me get the vomit taste in my mouth...flow is mos def on point...some nice lines too...I wasnt really feeling the break between beats...your acapella lines were off to me...but all and all a very solid drop...

    VOTe = SPEWIN

    Explained above...this was a good match...congratz to both...pz
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  8. Joey Jooks

    Joey Jooks UnderDog!

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    damnage - much better voice but not as comfortable behind the mic, creative punchlines, original but not as heavy hittin as spewin... spewin does not have an easy voice to listen to but you realize it so I respect that but you was real comfortable behind the mic, came at it like a battle rapper and you kept it pretty strong on a consistant stand point...

    all in all good battle from damnage, just alil more polished on spewin's side
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  9. Atom React

    Atom React aka JAYO

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    this was close but spewin was more polished, and had a little more content that stood out, spewins style better delivered some his shit, still a close battle, upp for more peeps
    keep doin ya'll thing
    vote - spewin
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  10. medevil

    medevil i dont "rap"

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    damnage-i agree with joey jooks u dont sound comfortable on the mic...lines werent as good as spew's........


    spewin-nice beat..ridin shit well...voice is real clear and foward........flow some times fell off..but u got it back...no question about ur track being better....

    vote - spewin
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  11. Cahha The Rocka

    Cahha The Rocka New Member

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    what are yall listening to?

    spew's punches are corny as hell... his setups give away the punch...to predictable.. and his voice is annoying

    dam came nice ... flow was confident... wordplay was better... i admit some of his punches could have been stronger ...they were about even on that

    with that said i could only judge this on flow and wordplay... spew was talking bout his flow when he had to stop after each line just to stay on beat... Dam's was a lot smoother

    vote Damage
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  12. JohnnyBoot

    JohnnyBoot New Member

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    hhhhmmmm.....


    imma go wit spewin cuz he sounds different and has a better line of attack..and more aggression...

    i really dont think this is as one sided as the votes show...
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  13. one der

    one der Nor Cal King

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    Dope battle. Damnage definitely had flow and delivery but not too many notable lines against Spew. Spewin brought a pretty polished flow and delivery but his punchlines gave him the edge in this one. Thats just how im seeing it. Good battle by both.

    Peace
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  14. ~Vio~

    ~Vio~ New Member

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    wird, i heard spew's track and said to myself... damn, this cat beat me... it's all good though, thx to those who left feedback, all be back to drop votes on all other battles when i get off work tonight... once again, good luck in the later rounds spew, bring that win back to MD...
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  15. Blackanese

    Blackanese BlackaneseCantRap.com

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    o damnage....i wasnt feeling yours...no hate.....but i think ya delivery was lacking thats why i couldnt get into it....

    spewin i think you won this out of flow and delivery easy.....lyrics were on point too....


    vote - spewin...
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  16. Spewin

    Spewin MD MD

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    thanks for the love..respect back to u...your flow got a lot smoother on this then the past audios ive heard..keep elevatin my man..
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  17. Wargasms

    Wargasms Neva 2 Old 2 Bust Rhymez

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    O Damnage got one of the dopest voices i heard on here...he just need to step his pen game up to make his words both hit harder. flow more fluidly...

    spewin was dope ..and he had the polished style, and the timing in his delivery that makes punches sting. Spewin took this but damnage can become a force, he seems to have the vocal presense to be a commanding mc.
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  18. Verbatim

    Verbatim Mr Write

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    O Damnage.....that razr shit made me laugh out loud

    Spewin....some ol Spewin, good shit my dude...I see this is pretty much in the bag so I'm not gonna vote
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