suicide show

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  1. sticks zdinya

    sticks zdinya New Member

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    I just got my wrist slit, oh god I missed this
    I looped the noose the one I know i'll be lynch with
    I'm waiting to be on top, but you're debatin me non-stop
    I'm a lost dog, laid wasted, impatient and dropped off
    so pile views aside, I got wild news of suicide
    Life's so brutal, damn I just found another bruise to hide
    I'll never let you decide, cause this berretta just blew my mind
    it's a, quick way to the sky, I'm tired of making you cry
    27 years and I've forgotten my youth, please lord stop me for I know not what I do
    I'm livin' dead with my body in two,
    my time of deaths, the same day that my audience grew, who knew?
    Today I overdosed, me and my broken nose
    now I'm comatosed, hit the ground and my shoulders broke
    run screamin, the cuts deepen, bloods streamin'
    it's just enough reason, to trust this rough demon
    It's hard to miss the head scan, they call me mr. deadpan
    I leave a scar with my left hand, I'm harnassing a red tan
    a black night, held together with a crack pipe
    this is my last try, and I hope it won't pass by
    lookin' through glass eyes, and viewin' the vast skies
    in the paper, a man replied a fat-ass died
    denying to check the priest, these lies they request to teach
    I'm trying to except defeat, cause I'm dying to rest in peace
    test
  2. BLACKANGEL

    BLACKANGEL Angelic Professor

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    i loved it... the picture was painted very well and the flow was beautiful...
    test
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