"Suicide of Thought"

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  1. $oda Pop

    $oda Pop Polar Bearz like me...

    Aug 23, 2003
    My mind sways like a leafy tree in the breeze...
    Trying to relax and calm down only to think to another degree;
    I try to train it, so i can black-out images long stored...
    Of child abuse, jail and family, but they cannot be ignored;

    So this second of October, i'm going to leave as i came...
    A peaceful boy, now a man, that just couldn't stand the pain;
    I've gone thru diffrent stages, diffrent theropy, diffrent dreams...
    But in the end there simply was no place, to put my thots between;

    I would've liked to have a childhood, of riches and love...
    A friend that would be for a lifetime and always be there to hug;
    But as i realize i have nothing left, and my evil mind prevails...
    My suicide of thought is what was breaking me down and leaving me in despair;

    Replies plz. I'm trying to decide if i want to add more to this and and a different ending even tho the one i have is good i believe.
    But tell me what u think. Pz
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