STUPID bitch (for all u guys who got played by a girl)

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Shibbymet, Feb 10, 2005.

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  1. Shibbymet

    Shibbymet New Member

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    You see back when i thought you were real
    i believed love was all i could feel
    that love blossomed straight into hate
    should have seen it coming after our very first date
    you fucked me over so fucking bad
    i dont no weather to to laugh or be fucking mad
    but you know what they say
    this shit will come back 2 you in the worst way
    so fuck you, go fuck yourself
    ill pick my heart up off the ground and return it to the shelf
    if you expect me to sit back and cry
    baby you must be thinkin of a different guy
    im done with you and all your crap
    so go find another guy who will let you lay down your trap
    and after a couple of years you can look into your soul
    and realize that you have an emptyness that will never be whole
    so dont expect me to call you and be your best friend
    because baby this relationship just came to its end



    peace oh and p.s. Fuck you too sweetheart
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  2. RahRah

    RahRah You Dont Know Me!!!!

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    i liked this, it wa simple but really in depth with the emotions you feel after getting dumped

    nice drop

    peep mine - Suicidal Conversation
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  3. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    I remember these days...hell, the events leave you scarred for a quite a while wether you admit it to yourself or not...but, I liked the honesty behind it, but I know that the story is far from over, so I look forward to reading more from you...
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  4. MC Radical

    MC Radical twitter.com/TheLastHero69

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    DAMN, havent seen something so...from the soul, if I might say.

    Really liked this poem. Nice to see tallent up in here!!!
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  5. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    I agree. Nice little poem here man, room for improvement, but the main thing was there.. emotion. With this within your poems, there's no end to the elevation you can reach.

    I'm feeling it man.
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  6. AlmostFamous

    AlmostFamous U got a problem?

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    nice drop and damn man I know how you feel when it comes to a situation like this.

    Except my approach would of been a little less vulgar!! There's room for improvement, no doubt, but you did a good job of letting your emotions explode into words!! good shit yo

    Famous
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  7. ~Eloquent

    ~Eloquent Narcissistic....

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    man,the problem ive had with women is that i begin to open up to them,and they listen and we develop a friendship...
    but im really lookin forward to see her and she dont feel the same way..
    time changes someones heart in a second...
    damn,im afraid of opening up once again to much,
    and her not understanding my straightforward approach...
    so love is a scary thing for me really,
    the piece was real...
    warm feelings like that suddenly filled with emptiness is a very tough thing..
    stay up,
    time will eventually heal though,
    but if it seems to good to be true,
    then it is...
    peace
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  8. Bhitiah

    Bhitiah Powerful Scriptures

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    "after a couple of years you can look into your soul
    and realize that you have an emptyness that will never be whole"



    This was great, I enjoyed it
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  9. umusbcrazay

    umusbcrazay New Member

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    please. we can negotiate something if needed.

    omg, did you write this for fun?

    i seriously need this verse.

    i would love it, if you're not using it for anything, and that would be amazing.
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  10. umusbcrazay

    umusbcrazay New Member

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    wow. seriously, i need this. money can be involved, but come on help out a nikkah. ;]

    i just need my hands on this.

    pleassE?
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