Strike vs Razputin

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  1. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

    PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT New Member

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    14 lines
    due friday
    500 post to vote
    its not to many lines give a good vote.
    and if you feel you dont get a line please dont vote and hit the dojo numerous times
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  2. KroniK

    KroniK R.I.P. U

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    ill be here late tonight
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  3. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

    PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT New Member

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    I keep barrels smokin when facin jokers...
    Call me a crack kid I was born knowin what dope is...
    So ill put you on notice homey dont even show...
    When you cant even flow like pee when its froze
    I keeps the kiddie jokes so you homo's can follow..
    This aint blow for blow cause if so kron would try to swallow
    Now dont even push me yer style is poor and all that
    Cuz talk is all cheap… and you cant even afford that
    yer whole crew is fag text is lackin inginuity...
    See I’d hand you your ass but you’d jump the opportunity….

    all you get man im pressed for time
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  4. KroniK

    KroniK R.I.P. U

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    you hella wack on rm now watch me murk ya content
    u tend 'too lose on a board' like unlucky siamese twins inna surfin contest
    ya style is outdated which explains y I'm cappin quicker
    ya stuck in the millenium similiar to han solo action figures
    looks like SP gotta new recruit..to add to the weak, garbage
    cuz after last night..i'm thinkin ya chik is ALSO a street prophet
    exceed ya knowledge but i'll prolly think twice bout punchin ya shit
    cuz flow really scares me..when it's that time of the month for my bitch
    ya name doesn't fit wit ya rhymes..he's knowin it's wack
    so go back an re-register..an replace tha flow witta PATH
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  5. KroniK

    KroniK R.I.P. U

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  6. Nebulaz

    Nebulaz fear God, not man

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    I'mma have to give it to Flow. Kron you ended it nicely, but Flow had a more solid, consistent piece.
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  7. A.P.O.S.

    A.P.O.S. New Member

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    that kronik shit was so fucking computerized. surfin siamese twins surfin board? spit that in a street battle and get lumps just for being a fuckin android.

    dont be a fucking retard. go outside.

    vote=flowetik
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  8. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

    PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT New Member

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    1-0 apos thanx for votin and lol @ yer comment.. but 500 posts to vote so unless yer an alias I cant count it.. good lookin on droppin a vote tho.. if I see a match with yer name on it Ill return the favor
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  9. A.P.O.S.

    A.P.O.S. New Member

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    i am an alias. im an alias of KroniK. I hate my verse yo. I cant believe I spit such retarded shit. I admit I suck. I mean I sat hard for 3 days on contemplating a siamese twin surf board trying to figure how I could make that a punch and thats all I could think of. I conceit. I suck.

    2-0 flowetic

    up for votes. kill me quick.
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  10. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    I keep barrels smokin when facin jokers...
    Call me a crack kid I was born knowin what dope is...
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    you hella wack on rm now watch me murk ya content
    u tend 'too lose on a board' like unlucky siamese twins inna surfin contest

    flow's shit is basic, and very played...drugs? im dope? welcome to 2000...
    Kron's line was more creative, original concept, just worded pretty bad...edge-kron

    So ill put you on notice homey dont even show...
    When you cant even flow like pee when its froze
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    ya style is outdated which explains y I'm cappin quicker
    ya stuck in the millenium similiar to han solo action figures

    flow had flow, coo scheme, played ass concept....i used a line in 02, like you've got no flow, like a frozen water hose...now it wasnt a bad line, jsut a lil dated...
    Kron's line made me laugh, good wordplay, set up, and punch...the wordplay is there, and hard personal, i laughed because i read flow's verse first...edge-kron

    I keeps the kiddie jokes so you homo's can follow..
    This aint blow for blow cause if so kron would try to swallow
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    looks like SP gotta new recruit..to add to the weak, garbage
    cuz after last night..i'm thinkin ya chik is ALSO a street prophet

    ok, again, a cool line on flow's part, seems dated, but i feel it did get the better of kron's line...although it seems dated, the sp line is pretty much whatsgoin around...-edge-flow

    Now dont even push me yer style is poor and all that
    Cuz talk is all cheap… and you cant even afford that
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    exceed ya knowledge but i'll prolly think twice bout punchin ya shit
    cuz flow really scares me..when it's that time of the month for my bitch

    old concept, thats really all i can say, good flow, w/e...old concept...not to say the girl/flow line isnt old as well, i think it was flipped into a nice personal...edge-Kron

    yer whole crew is fag text is lackin inginuity...
    See I’d hand you your ass but you’d jump the opportunity….
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    ya name doesn't fit wit ya rhymes..he's knowin it's wack
    so go back an re-register..an replace tha flow witta PATH

    the ass line, is ass, and an old ass ass line at that. i have nothing positivie to say about it. Kroniks closer was nice. a great name play, and just a strong finish. edge-kronik



    overall, vote Kronik.

    Better structure, bar for bar, as it pertains to setups and punches. it seemed like flowetic was rhyming some stuff just to rhyme, and for flow, which hurt him in the long run.

    the punchlines he was using were played as fuck. his best line, imo, was one that was rivaled by the everyday SP nameplay...


    honestly, i feel this was onesided as fuck.


    strike, i know u may be a lil rusty...but i give you props, bcause it flowed well, it aseemed like a song...but that cant win you a battle, especially against a typical rm verse right now.


    Kronik came with more originality and creativity./ if you go to the RBL, go to the last page,and click on any random battle, chances are, there are some of strikes concepts there, not to knock strike or anything...you just came with some over all played shit fam, no disrespect.


    Vote kronik, came with original lines, better wordplay, and his closer was dope.

    cool battle, fellas...


    peace...
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  11. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    in addition flowetic had very few setups for his punches, he just threw his shit together...
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  12. KroniK

    KroniK R.I.P. U

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    thanf fer votin A:L and the dope breakdown
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  13. NinemindZ

    NinemindZ Don't look...

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    If it's still open. This was a nice read. I enjoyed it, you both had fresh punch lines and nice structure. Congratulations to you both but my vote goes to Flowetic.
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  14. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    these newbie votes are fuckin horrible


    vote=kronik

    his han solo line was better than strikes entire verse...that shit was horrible strike...i fully understand why ur in that crew now....used a fuckin cum line dog...df was u thinking...kron got this easy
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  15. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

    PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT New Member

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    lmao def.. wich verse did you read.. I didnt even have the word come/cum in my verse...seriously hop of my sack and try not to enter to many threads with my name on it loser
    and by the way I am not claimin my verse was of any high standard... But I know I did enough to win I'd elaborate.. but kron's cool.. so Ill try not to be too much of an asshole..
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  16. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    dog u lost strike.


    even if u didnt say cum, u used lines from the same era....hand u ur ass is just as bad, imo.
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  17. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    "I keeps the kiddie jokes so you homo's can follow..
    This aint blow for blow cause if so kron would try to swallow"

    aka a cum line

    which shows why ur garbage...u did enough to win? strike u didn';t do anything at all...u fuckin suck dog forreal
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  18. PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT

    PrOvOcAtiVeThOuGhT New Member

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    so no one can ever even referr to the word cum again? fuck outta here textcee... every concepts been done every one of em besides last battle I tried here I used concepts one step up from these nothing special and all the people who voted claimed I didnt even have punches.. so now you gon shit on me for dumbin it down? fuck you dickcheese its like I said I did enough to win...
    Im done with this shit.. let the votes come in

    and AL Im not even disagreeing with yer breakdown of MY verse... jus that you as it seems to me yer usin very different standards to judge kron's verse

    Kron Im sorry dukes I dont mean to sway but some shit I jus cant let slide
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  19. Defcon_5

    Defcon_5 Relax and take notes

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    So ill put you on notice homey dont even show...
    When you cant even flow like pee when its froze



    that's all i have to say..u fuckin suck bitch
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  20. G-NaTuRaL

    G-NaTuRaL Registered Offender

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    Def just mad cause he's been slowly falling off. He's just trying to bring some one down before him to break the fall. You suck homo. plain and simple. Just take it like a man: you're done. And yes, this is an alias bitch.
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