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  1. cram oremor

    cram oremor New Member

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    so stressed that i've regressed to a chest full of nicotine

    i guess its betta then a razor to my artery

    or a 7.6239 meltin my brainz

    past regrets and fetishes is evidence that at the top of the fence lies death hauntin a phien.

    my heart is hardening dyin for a martyring

    and every part of me is cryin for you to pardon me

    from everything ive seen im spiritually collapased

    need you to intervene because the inner me is a trance

    my enemy is steadily offering me everything that leads me everywhere but pack to the path

    im hearin demons laugh

    but they wont get the last

    Christ took the sin off my back and washed it clean

    He's the King of kings everything i need fallin to my knees im faltered but hes alterin me

    as i hang from a string with fire beneath my wings
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  2. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    GREAT PIECE MY GUY GREAT PIECE.. i think we all go thru that same struggle on a certain level...

    God loves u for who u are.. he just loves u so much that he wants to change u for the better!
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  3. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    not bad man it read quick pretty good multis maybe work on the structure and dont forget to get them links up
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  4. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    r we supposed to put links on our posts?
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  5. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    yeah to prove you gave feedback to two other drops
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  6. cram oremor

    cram oremor New Member

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    r we supposed to put links in every post? i did in the begining but thought after that we didnt have to post links anymore.
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  7. T.R.C....

    T.R.C.... New Member

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    yeah in every post its to keep this active otherwise people would just post what they want and not comment or read anybody elses stuff
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  8. cram oremor

    cram oremor New Member

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    oh, my bad ill do dat from now on.
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  9. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    this was really nice ... i think a lot of us can relate ... flow was straight too, dude .. i see you got another one ... im bout to look at it
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