Street Instrumentality feat. J.Keeper (Pain), No Good and Nu ...

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  1. Nu'maaN

    Nu'maaN Anu'naki, Nuqqa.

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    J.Keeper:

    Street lights flicker, the fiends might get ya,
    If your flowin' downtown on the green light river,
    The weed dime hits ya, it's another night of darkness,
    The demons n heathens have reasons to spark shit,
    They got hope but are heartless,
    Seein' you as targets, the market's the corner pocket,
    The 8 ball's in play, the weight calls ya name,
    But the game's got hustlas, they'll take all ya change,
    Your great God's away, don't bother to pray,
    Night time in the city, where they're callin' you prey,
    Cuz that dude on the corner became a father today,
    And he'll be damned if his son sets without ballin' away,
    And you got the means to make doo-wop the theme,
    Cuz they said fuck needin' two jobs to eat,
    Yea, that's how it goes when the sun goes down,
    All sounds, get muted, till the gun goes, "blaow."


    nO gOoD!:

    The night starts to creep, the deadliest game
    These cursed alleys and streets serve as memory lane
    I stay ahead of the game with two shots o' jack
    sick with the verbs, I need a flu shot to rap.
    My demons they dont fight fair, its like they're
    out to snuff me. I close my eyes - nightmares.
    I'm not leavin this earth... until I stop breathin,*
    I'm not even makin this up, I'm not readin
    This is real life, no make-up - special effects,
    if you don't like this film, there's no pressin eject
    And if I close the curtain, will the game be in-flu-enced?
    You'll get it - if you read the same sheet of music.
    Hip hop moved into this space of mine..
    Replaced my taste for crime, so I chased some dimes.
    I found one, be assured that I never like to snitch,
    I said goodbye to my mother when I learned life's a bitch.


    Nu:

    The devils poisoned the good, little boys n the hood.
    He gave me choices I could, but the voice said I should.
    Enticed me with vice, fulfill my duty on the streets.
    And in the process, embraced all the beauty of the beast.
    Who taught me talk is cheap, meaning graffiti is a whore.
    I had my back against it, never read the writings on the wall.
    Can't go back against it, all the evil it wreaks.
    Coz I got tongue tied, giving my freedom of speech.
    I miss the knowledge of the street, all the theories in chalk.
    On the sidewalks I walked, with the cleanest of thoughts.
    But now sleeping on floors, within four metre walls.
    I carve regrets with my nails, in the coffin I sought.
    I got one foot in the grave, until I'm six feet underground.
    As I stand behind these bars, rhyming bars with no sound.
    If I was free, I'd slice limbs just to sell 'em on the street.
    The beast is in my belly, fuck the belly of the beast.


    and, it's a rap ...

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  2. J Keeper

    J Keeper Super Jesus

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    Finallyyy.

    Dope shit fellas, worth the wait.
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  3. Nu'maaN

    Nu'maaN Anu'naki, Nuqqa.

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    had too much shit going on, didn't have time to write until this weekend.

    i was at fault, ng had his verse up a while ago ...

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  4. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    Nu' I only finished this morning lol, we were both at fault. But I was the last to finish.
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  5. Nu'maaN

    Nu'maaN Anu'naki, Nuqqa.

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    all good.

    should have a voting thing for collab verses.

    cunts should vote on who had the best verse.

    it'll encourage users to write with more vigour and thought ...

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  6. miscreant

    miscreant 1996 was the shit

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    real nice would like to hear it, couldn't find the flow here and there when i tried it over a beat.

    this was nice,
    Your great God's away, don't bother to pray,
    Night time in the city, where they're callin' you prey,

    and i liked this from nogood,
    I stay ahead of the game with two shots o' jack
    sick with the verbs, I need a flu shot to rap.

    nu this was nice,
    If I was free, I'd slice limbs just to sell 'em on the street.
    The beast is in my belly, fuck the belly of the beast.

    but really i liked all of it.
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  7. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    this is being slept on
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  8. J Keeper

    J Keeper Super Jesus

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    ^Hard.

    askjhsakj
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  9. Artiphax

    Artiphax New Member

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    yea this shit was nice ..i too would like to hear how it sounds
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  10. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    2 replies on this wow..
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  11. Scrolls-Oracle of Omen

    Scrolls-Oracle of Omen *DBS*--*A.B.C*

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    Shit was nice Yall...every verse was unique in its own way. Liked it alot. Jkeeper ddnt know u were pain...sup my dude
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  12. Lment

    Lment New Member

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    i liked nu's verse the best j and no good was offical too all of this was on point good shit yall nikkaz make me wanna step my rhyme structuring game up peace

    reply to my rhyme
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  13. OutLaw613

    OutLaw613 Well-Known Member

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    Fav verse

    Nu
    j Keep
    No GOoD

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    If I was free, I'd slice limbs just to sell 'em on the street.
    The beast is in my belly, fuck the belly of the beast.


    Yea, that's how it goes when the sun goes down,
    All sounds, get muted, till the gun goes, "blaow."


    I stay ahead of the game with two shots o' jack
    sick with the verbs, I need a flu shot to rap.
    (I liked this but its played out)

    be assured that I never like to snitch,
    I said goodbye to my mother when I learned life's a bitch.
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  14. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    "The beast is in my belly, fuck the belly of the beast."
    i almost wanted to hear an adlib saying "get in my belly"
    lol
    all in all, all these verses had a very unique discpriptive feature about them and all where repetitive, that of the streets and evil.

    i almost wish that the artist could have reached deeper! touched upon topics more delicate and more vulnerable.

    well, its rules i must critique before i can post my own shit.. i havent been on RM since '05 and i join in 2000... i remember them days, rap has changed ...

    hope i see that same rawness i used to seee back then, its been 10 years!

    good job guys!
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