STREET HEAT: Deth to bar nigga

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  1. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    3 rounds,48 bar cap for rounds 2 and 3.

    BATTLE ORDER

    Round 1--BAR NIGGA-DETH-BAR NIGGA

    Round 2--DETH-BAR NIGGA

    Round 3--BAR NIGGA-DETH


    Bar nigga has the unique advantage of extra bars being counted for him in this battle,as his verse starting Round 1 ( opens with "my raps is saga's,street testaments...") and his flip of my response to his first round verse ("deth couldn't stryque me with picketin signs...") are all Round 1.That's okay,I have confidence that my quality bars will outperform his quantity.I accept the disadvantage.


    JUDGING


    Aight keep it simple for judging,guys.You guys vote as you always have just use the categories listed know their definitions,explain your decisions,be ready to justify them and be open to the concerns of the lyricists in this battle,yo. Throw out the point system unless you feel the battle between me and bar is very close.The categories and definitions of categories remain the same.The fact that all judges must use bars from each lyricist to validate their perspective and must explain each of their votes on each category is the same (not:"bar nigga kilt that nigga in punches" but a REAL explanation with comparison and contrast using my bars and his).The ability to challenge a judge's decisions on the basis of the definition of categories remain the same.Neither lyricist can challenge a judge's decision in all categories,only half of the categories; this way a judge's decision carries weight no matter what happens.Judges have to justify their challenged decisions based upon the definition of the categories and how they interpreted that category in the battle (a better version of KING OF THE DOT),at which point the other judges decide if the judge who's been challenged has answered properly the challenge brought by the lyricist (think NFL challenge of a referee's call on an American or Canadian football play). If the lyricist still got beef,he can bring it to the mod.

    CATEGORIES FOR JUDGING ARE STILL:

    Punchlines
    Personals
    Flips
    Rhyme Scheme
    Word Play
    Sound Manipulation
    Metaphor
    Flow
    Vocab
    Creativity
    Opener
    Closer
    Attitude


    the definitions for each category come from the dictionary,the rap dictionary,music definitions,and poetry.We all are pretty familiar with these.Just judge these categories and decide a winner.If a lyricist challenges a judge's decision on a category,that's when definition of the category and how the lyricist and judge interpreted the definition gets explained,and the other judges determine if the challenge is valid or if the judge has turned the challenge back.If the lyricist still got beef,then the judges' decisions stand until and unless the mod overlooks the decisions and overrules the judges.Mod Reversal almost NEVER happens,but it's a crucial option to ensure fairness.

    Judges and Mods have the power to insist on a Sudden Death round.That almost never happens either in a 3 round battle,but I've seen it before.This Sudden Death can be used to resolve particularly bitter disputes that have merit that cropped up in more than one round.

    We got 3 judges so far: JASON ANTHONY,RAZPUTIN,COUP DE'TAT,and we need at least 1 (preferably 2) more.LYRICAL PRIEST,are you in?
    test
  2. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    EDIT TO PROVE NO CHEATING. I JUST REALIZED THAT SOME OF THE TERMS I USED NEED LINKS FOR EXPLAINING:


    MYTZYLPLK IS SUPERMAN'S ENEMY AND CAN ONLY BE BEATEN BY BEING TRICKED INTO SAYING HIS NAME BACKWARDS:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mister_Mxyzptlk

    OBAMA ORDERED NAVY SEALS TO SNIPE SOMALIAN PIRATES:http://en.rian.ru/world/20090413/121075017.html

    CORSICANS:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Barbary_corsairs

    CANING TORTURE:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Caning_in_Singapore


    TERRAPINS:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Diamondback_terrapin


    *double edit: I WAS ASKED TO GIVE MORE EXPO'S. IT'S 11:15 AM PST
    I read a thread where it was asked of me to reduce my bar length in this drop or it was thought to be a good idea to drop a number of my bars so more people will read the battle,so I dropped 24 bars.Hope you guys read the whole thing and vote on the categories.Thanx.


    FALCHION (sounds like FAL-CHIN): European sword.

    TEXAN/16 GALLON CAP: Texans wear 16 gallon cowboy hats

    QABAL: part of Jewish religion and magic


    DIRK: It's a sharp heavy dagger




    This is ROUND 1. Here's bar nigga's drop against me:





    my raps is saga's
    street testaments, real life tales of
    what i invested my essence in
    so fuck ya pseudo knowledge and philisophical messages
    u a fraud and a dyke a dog wit all bark and no bite
    i know viewers is like..this nigga delusional right?
    thinkin his raps is the nicest
    he got offended i was callin'em white..
    readin ya rhymes a nigga i figured u wasnt the slightest..
    but dont be mad nigga its all in ya writin...
    then postin videos, u not a man u a mice
    couldnt beat me wit all of his might
    i'm 6'6 240, i'd break his jaw wit a right
    this nigga venacular polite u'd get mauled in a fight
    or get shot up at night, pockets ran and carved wit a knife
    and if u gettin pussy nigga, its all for a price
    sucka nigga, type to fall in love in a night
    newsflash nigga u gone be broke and short all of ya life
    u fightin male pattern baldness and napoleon syndrome
    talkin bout online is where ya skills get honed
    fuck online, outside is where the real get shown
    no indictments..
    no videos of guns at my home
    its a best kept secret concealin the chrome
    and plus, i'ma black radical off words alone
    already a threat, if i posted that they'd
    think terror was homegrown
    u got these guys online
    they lives is worthless
    till death strikes'em and they fall in cyphers murdered
    can tell by his routine this guys a virgin,
    website lurker, beatin'em himself like tyler durden
    ya lyin sure is
    a minor burden...on gettin vagina i'm certain..
    so naw i cant just let some lame dude push me
    he can't whoop me
    deathstrike do karate, he can't do pussy
    I'll break bricks over ya head to prove you too head strong
    and do some shit to ya moms BIG said on dead wrong








    It's been...3 hours since I been sayin I'm uh split his wig
    This nigga been online on mine WAITIN like THE BITCH HE IS!
    I'm done nuttin in ya wife dude! Ya fuckin life's through believe me!!
    I'll SLUG YA BEAN til your BLOOD'S ONSCREEN like PIRU TV!!

    Ayo...
    I said at 6pm I'd char the wig uh bar nigga n leave his neck broken
    But at 6:24pm I had his bitch in thee scorpion, fuckin her clit with thee force of ten
    Corsicans...while he's on the PC like:"WHEN IS DETH POSTIN?"
    (Hahaha...)


    My TEN N TEK HOSIN gitcha face stubble blazed off
    Bitch my gauge grumbles n sprays off flame like space shuttle take-offs!
    Let the 8 off n bake niggas like Adolf! Knock ya fade off!
    Fill ya mug with slugs n skate off cuz I got the judge paid off
    Talkin all that like you wanna brawl Black uh gitcha jaw cracked!
    I'll have ya Ma clapped n strung up to a light post by her bra strap!
    So fall back! My raw Mac makes ya cap melt faster,chile!
    Sicc n karate so I'm dickin ya hottie BLACK BELT MASTER STYLE
    Give ya ass welts n daggers while my sicc scheme smash his raps tuh shreds
    FUCK STL,YOU'LL LOOK TEXAN when I 16 GALLON CAP YA HEAD
    Fifth beam ya shit team n snatch ya bread! My gaugin's blazin ya arrogance!
    My gun uh blam n YOU'LL BE ONE WITH THE LAND like NATIVE AMERICANS!!
    SHELLS WETCHA like BATHIN TERRAPINS til ya weak free's baked
    Plus I'll decease these fakes while spittin scriptures like TD JAKES!!
    See these snakes like bar nigga? He's a ignorant snitch Benedict!
    Said I'm White cuz I'm articulate...WHEN BLACK FOLKS INVENTED IT!
    That stupid shit uh gitcha hat smacked like CRACKED YOLK n SIZZLED WITH
    A missile spit through ya twisted shit n outcha grizzled clit!
    You said I'm a mice...I know karate...so I'll SPLINTER KICK YA DENTURES QUICK
    N pistol whip ya gristle split for sayin all that senseless shit
    Bar nigga,I'll dick ya bitch "aggin"(again)! That's "nigga" backwards like MYTZYLPLICK
    Gitcha pickle nickle clipped! My scripts demolish ya trife spits
    MY HYPER WRITES GITCHA SNIPED LIKE SOMALIAN PIRATES!!
    Scaldin ya rhyme with heat cookin you like the cauldron of tyrants
    My raps pack magic like Qabalian papyrus! Yo raps lack power
    I AIN'T WHITE, I'm "chocolate 24/7!" Call me BLACK BAUER, (24/7 JACK BAUER)
    My raps blast cowards like clapped SAUERS! Man you a Herb//herb like ECHINACEA
    I'll smash ya wakk speak n pack ya ass cheeks with plastique n detonate ya!
    Flex uh phrase tuh devastate cha hair brained pure lies!
    I'll KNOCK YOU FLYIN AROUND THE GREAT OUTDOORS like AIRPLANE TOUR GUIDES
    My RARE FLAME SURE FRIES guys who claim they heata's bustin
    Now they'll NEVER BE SICC IN THEY LIFE like JESUS TOUCHED 'EM!!
    My free's just crushed him! Deth's in MERK MODE when my SKILL DROP
    Chill,ock on them ganxta lies! You ain't served coke or let the pill pop
    Cuz BAR NIGGA AIN'T STREET like DIRT ROADS on a HILL TOP
    DIRK SKULLS til GRILL'S CHOPPED! Then Tiger Claw fist you
    Talk shit dude I'll saw splitchoo n Nazi Auschwitz OFF SWITCH YOU
    I'm the top karate Block Qadafi n my Tek's the torch
    That uh vanish you so the detective force can't detect ya corpse!!
    I'm Tupac spliced with Obama Snoop Dogg combined with Osama
    Ignitin the drama snipin the llama n knifin yo mama!
    I'm Malcolm X swingin a falchion blessed tuh savage you!
    I brung the war to Gandalf n Dumbledore vanish you!!
    I'll blam the tube n cancel you with speech like chrome tuh peel ya dome
    I'll drop asteroids on ya wakk shit boy n ratchet ya granny's senior home!!
    I'll have thee jammy beam ya dome n let the Matic R (automatic AR) be sinful
    YOU'RE TWICE THE JACKASS like THE MOVIE n DEMOCRATIC PARTY SYMBOL!!
    Disassemble ya markish wimp flows! My rhymin's smackin you poor has beens
    Plus my cannons are known tuh ROAR like LIONS HAVIN ORGASMS

    BAR NIGGA'S POST WITH HIS NEW VERSE IS THE FIRST VERSE OF ROUND 2.I'LL BE GETTIN AT HIM AFTER THE GAMES ON NEW YEAR'S DAY IS OVER.RIGHT NOW I'M BOUT TO BOUNCE TO A NEW YEAR'S EVE PARTY.
    test
  3. Bar nigga

    Bar nigga 314 STL Ancient of daze..

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    deth couldn't "strike me" with picketin signs
    im textn sickenin lines and his not sicker than mine
    u drop trash u should be gettin litterin fines..


    u get no respect from those pitiful rhymes..
    sayin u Ill well u's a lyrical lie..

    so this chump is my victim?
    in his posts i heard nothin but bitchin
    bickerin claimin he somethin he isnt

    playin touchie feelie wit his boys,groin hittin
    his flow is inconsistent rhyme patterns nonexistant
    u got mad off uh constructive criticsm
    on this site, the shit that u type...isnt lyricism, its tripe..
    dethstryque..u sound like a dyke and u not convincin..
    frontin like, u was lifin but u didnt flash might
    the lil nigga maxed out 200 when benchin an thats light..
    Watch me scholar a menace conquer an kill'em n thats life
    u on rap sites aint even earnin'honorable mentions..
    you one of the oddest uh niggaz..
    only time he hustled was...
    comicbook_flippin at comic conventions..
    this guy won't earn a single dollar from spittin..
    on the other hand, Bar's an incomparable legend...
    this the prodical's lesson
    deth had called me out, i'ma shock n depress'em
    ya pops fathered a faggot, shoulda wore the proper protection
    can tell by ya bars this not ya profession
    u got no hands, and u like touchin niggaz...go tryout for wrestlin
    or go shoot ya eyeout wit weapons,
    give in to those manic depressions suicide'll end ya stresses..
    can tell that ya text fake,
    look like u halfway thru a sex change
    u got man boobs feminine chest plates
    i'll shoot shots at ya tits got docs stitchin ya chest straight
    On these boards I'm beatin Ya check-mate
    i play life like a chess game, u snitch like u Fresh made
    this what i'm meanin bruh, you no spitta..
    ole tellin ass nigga...ross is a known tipster...
    raped by his own sister...
    35 and like batman
    lol well go figure..
    prolly work for the cops
    since he like to choke niggaz..i'm sayin..

    he fold quicker, deth? dry snitchin, a hoe nigga
    fibbin like u hold pistols, naw u told quicker
    get under pressure and crack, u old swisher...
    ha
    bar is a heathen
    so he dethstryque?
    musta thought he was a reaper
    i already threw'em a heater, gave death strikes

    he was swingin and missin
    typin and geekin
    u net dyke
    tookem 3 nights to get his text right and
    still didnt kill it
    u look like a cartoon villian that got smacked wit a skillet
    ya fraud raps was all wack
    u got man tits on some tran shit..
    u a broad with a bald patch
    need a good bra wit a strong strap?
    gotta fucked up hairline
    her go some advice buy ALL CAPS...
    test
  4. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    what up cuzzin my president is black, bloodethix still reigns supreme

    after a full read through of your first verse I thought it was sick, its just not everyday you get a street cat posting battle rhymes on here and that it definately the case, while there might not have been a lot of straight forward set up punches, it was more like a diss track, i kept thinkin it was written by Nas or prodigy or sum shit, hope this battle gets cleaned up a bit and yall match each others bars

    Deth just had way too much lyrical prowess in his verse, while sum of his punches were over my head he had more bars which made up for it, overall still a close battle

    props to both so far
    test
  5. J o o k

    J o o k Win your battles before they’ve even been fought.

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    Only votes from here on out.

    Thank you.
    test
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