Strawberry Cough

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  1. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    I'm sorry to each and everyone of you.
    I was the gum you chewed.
    Was the fun you used.
    On soles of shoes run through roots.
    Illegible. An incredible imbecile too.
    Tomato juice drunk down artery trough.
    My loss, is gained in strawberry cough.
    Love, laugh, life. Force it.
    Just as pinnacle then in invincible pause
    I was the rum you boozed
    So sorry to each and everyone of you.
    I was the rooster you cooped.
    The pun overused.
    Truth.

    Staring.
    Empty skeleton.
    Wherein. Plenty therein.
    When is my identical twin ?
    Both are expendable. It has been.
    Medical niacin chocking oxygen.
    In my mind as elephant.
    So Roll it up as medicine.
    Set it all up as bowling pin.

    Delineate in all my way.
    Blind my eyes to charcoal haze.
    Dye my mind in mid April-May
    It has been. Water. Purple rain.
    Daisy if I do. Daily regimen.
    Flying under sky adrenaline.
    Exhibit my mental picture.
    Exquisite little sick bird.
    Crush me with a rolling pin.
    I was normal in a loony bin.
    So lost in the Sim City sim.


    To be continued...
    test
  2. jesuit223

    jesuit223 Member

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    wow you caught me in the middle and i began to reread it, and it was really real! :)
    That said, it was extremely original, so much props!!!
    test
  3. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    thanks. I see you...colab will be sent.
    test
  4. jesuit223

    jesuit223 Member

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    its all good then lets get it cracking
    test
  5. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    crackalackin
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    lol i haven't heard that in a long time...
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  7. MC Shogun

    MC Shogun New Member

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    I liked the rhyme structure
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