Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by Phene, Jul 26, 2005.
wooo Preciate' the feed.
Oh shit dunny, this is serious..
This beat is danger. Flow got a dope bounce, im feeling your swagga. 2nd verse is type vicious. I wasnt feeling the "taste the story" but it got catchy through out the song. hott joint man.
"Taste The Story" ????? LOL!!!
it's "These The stories"...
Thanks for the feedback homie.
lmao@taste the stories...
this shit was ill Phene, you already know ya music is a daily hit from this side of the house... ya clockwork joint is still one of the tracks I bump while on my 5am trip to DC every morning..
just wanted to know if you could hit this up:
I dont think a name like senorsnatchface is conducive to me producing more for people on here
Phene Dot Net
but you already know what it is
my name ring bells like tinker.
get at me
TrackAddictz/Phene it makes sense dont it?
i honestly didnt feel the hook much for some reason, don tknow why, but i thought u shoulda done something over that
anyways, u murdered track
i love the rawness in ur delivery, and how u just get a aggressive for a couple words sometimes
content is fire on this all together, flow and all that, delivery, u know the deal on that
very sick shit man
the hook grew on me as the track went along, but still woulda been iller if u said at least a couple words over it every bar or some shit
sick track son
peep my new shit sometime when u get time
Take me Away
keep it moving
Ima check that then.
the track's pretty str8, I like that sample as well, it's nicely harmonic, same with the harp and piano in the back, your quality's nice as fuck, flow is well done too, keepin' the ish on point whole way through, you're definitely comfortable with yourself, delivery and emotion all nicely flows and is put down with confidence, hook is nice, once again the sample's bomb, lyrical content's deep and true, could use some double ups, the adlibs were a nice touch, overall this is definitely a nice track fam, keep bringin' the heat, One Love, Holla, Peace
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