Still vent'n * freestyle

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by mr.redeyez, Aug 27, 2010.

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  1. mr.redeyez

    mr.redeyez Member

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    Ok
    ok

    check.....
    U an ya squad
    an i'm mob
    money ova bytchez, or money ova god
    an i rob, u an ya squad
    some say i'm worthless
    till i surface, stick em' up then i jog
    away from tha scene
    duck tape in my jeans
    i'm ungrateful an mean
    society made me turn grinch like
    i earn badges...pen striped
    yeah.. Welcome to tha mind of maniac
    greed, make me want what i dont need
    i bleed, for tha home team
    my city, my state, suicidal dream'z
    i' do my own thing, fukk hand out's i buy my own lean
    y niggahz turn pussi when they see tha chrome bling?
    Bang... An i aint talk'n blood shyt
    i'm talkn blood shed, under tha rug bytch
    i neva killed, my index a virgin
    i'm sumthin like a surgeon
    i'm spiteful
    i swear, left hand on my heart right hand on my rifle
    if i die, please let me fry
    bury me a g, an bury me alive
    i know i'm kinda sick in tha head
    but if u look deeper, you'll see my wisdom is rare
    did u see tha visual there?
    My vocab ill...critical care
    i freestyle it'z a ritual here
    ev'ry bar i spit, iz like piss in ya hair
    i beat tha pussi up i'm jon fitchin here pear
    i mean peach, i'm submit'n here yeah
    tap out...........
    I;m gone
    test
  2. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Fire drop homie ... wish I could elaborate but my battery goin dead. Nice job.
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  3. CobraMortal

    CobraMortal New Member

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    That rhyme was tight. You have a sweet flow I can hear on a beat.
    test
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