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Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by lpoet, Nov 27, 2003.

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  1. Brown_Menace

    Brown_Menace Honey Hitta

    Aug 9, 2003
    i like the part where you said you had the shell of a man on the sides of your face. the end seemed off but it had its own radiance as well.
  2. FukkedUPKidR

    FukkedUPKidR Guest

    Hey, wow whoa eek psssha!

    I read the piece, and was like damn.. then I looked back up and saw the title of the poem. [heart] Hello! Even better.

    I honestly really enjoyed it.

    "So I

    tore into the bible as well as
    countless other religious texts
    Until again I found myself…
    Questing the very essence
    Of God, Jesus and the credibility
    Of the authors whose books I read

    It was when I came across the lost gospels of
    And Mary Magdalene that I realized

    This could all be a lie

    for some stories Go forever untold
    I’ve tried my hardest not to perceive this
    But this seems to be the only

    illuminated road"

    You wrapped that up very eloquently =)

    pz lpoet.
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