Star Screen vs. Pivotal

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  1. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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    Yall Know The Deal Already​
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  2. Pivotal

    Pivotal yo

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  3. Stars€reen

    Stars€reen forever

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  4. Pivotal

    Pivotal yo

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    yo dude I thought that sig was kinda cool, till I got a hint first,
    That its just ur plea to voters, after u drop a shit verse,*
    So stop acting wasteful dammit, I can see ur face is manic,
    Im scarier bro, leave u in a different area code till ur in a state of panic,
    Got ways to plan it, but this bitch has sold his rep,
    Close to vet?,
    He tried taking pictures with a guitar, an still couldn’t pose a fret,
    I diss an tease, leave malicious geeks with vicious bleeds,
    Thinks he ahead in this battle, But even his time zone disagrees,
    Got sicker reads, im sick of screens, this guys waste,
    I wanted epic/a pic in this battle, instead he gave me his myspace,
    Every single rhymes graced, put flows in the right place,
    Id say u were holding a nice pace,
    But we all know you acidic/as a dick like sodium nitrate,
    Don’t fight mate ur light weight, ull never leave dudes elating,
    But if u think u will,
    U got a severer case than I imagined of hallucination,
    Ill give u lessons if u want, im a bars dream maker,
    Im’a monitor that’s outer this world, call me a starscreen saver,
    Ur a cheap hater, getting beat with a Gentle obstacle,
    Wanna get given a-ward, then ill put you in a mental hospital,

    *his sig says open your mind

    peace..
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  5. Stars€reen

    Stars€reen forever

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    Bars on reserve, I'm in a new world..cheif as sufficient an engine
    Piv I'll come smoke with You, then it's up the Creek like the British (Indians)
    So injust, I don't explain much..but this slut cant fuck with me
    Your styles a generic oxycontin..while I'm up to speed
    Introduced to doom..no mecry for you, I'ma prove it soon
    The only chance I'll have a heart..is tryin to shoot the moon
    Your walkin in a dead mans shoes, without socks thats sick
    You had a sheltered childhood, even the chickpox are a risk
    Hey..different strokes for different folks, watch ya sugar and gangs
    You'll get stabbed in the juggular, and cooked to the frame
    You'll never stand like a man, or for any cause in the least
    This fag will draw a line in the sand, with balls underneath
    You drop conscrewed lines, abliged that You'll be mocked in due time
    This bitch better head for the hills, like the Hollywood sign
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  6. Stars€reen

    Stars€reen forever

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    nice shiet btw
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  7. Pivotal

    Pivotal yo

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    Thanks for droppin dude I thought it was gonna be a another wasted battle..
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  8. Chin Kwon

    Chin Kwon The Angkorian

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    fuck it, i'll vote...

    Pivotol

    hmmm....aite

    ok

    Pose a fret? Never heard that expression before

    That's ill!

    ok

    meh....nah

    not feelin it

    aite

    pretty cool closer

    VS

    Starscreen

    uhhhh....nah.

    Speed and oxycontin have no direct contrast, homie. So...no!

    i read this a few time and i still didn't get ur punch.

    no

    ??

    Y
    hmmm...ok i see where u goin, but meh, it didn't sting, bro.

    No


    Break Down: Pivotol takes this one for two reasons. He had a reasonably good verse and also due to the fact that SS had a not so great verse. I like pivotal verse better also because he mixed some nice punches with some great wordplays (albeit some are played) but it did add to the overall intricacy of his verse. SS came in with the right tenacity but your punches were too wild. At times i can't even recognize them...for example:

    The concept was supposed to play around the "shoot for the moon" expression, but i see no type of play on it. Maybe it was an exercise in multis i dunno, but that right there represents much of ur verse in that it's very unclear what ur trying to do or say. But despite all that, i can sense ur aggression and you did came out to fight. If i'm not correct, this was probably a rushed verse.


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