Stamina.....

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  1. D. MonEy25

    D. MonEy25 Gifted With The Words

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    Keep my head steady....
    my legs planted firmly as the sounds around me are blocked
    mentally dilligent...
    heart pounds feircly as the anticipation grows...
    in the zone pacing myself it seems like an eternity....
    the shot rings out...
    my stride increases
    the speed of my heart is rapid....
    my eyes fixed on the goal....
    sweat dripping perfusely from my brow..
    i can feel the heat the preperation for this has been heavy...
    years of training....
    years of dreams...
    the time has finally come
    my stamina is great...
    keeping my position, my stance never lingers...
    penetration with one single thrust...
    now its over i guess it was just lust!


    i know its kinda short
    test
  2. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    dope piece, like the way u didnt really tell what you were talkin about, and left it for the reader to figure out. Good job

    one luv
    test
  3. lpoet

    lpoet POET

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    i likes...but what are u talkin bout....i got several different ideas..but i dont wanna sound stupid......holla back
    test
  4. Feme Sole

    Feme Sole Mrs. _Evil

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    liked the last few lines.....
    test
  5. mocha_licious

    mocha_licious New Member

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    very nice...this was an emotion piece i think...from what i read..about ur inner feelings about life or someone...good job...~one love
    test
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