spoken poetry --- no beat --- dear lord --- links and feedback welcome

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  1. RhYmE KiLLa 187

    RhYmE KiLLa 187 New Member

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    there's no beat on this nor was it altered at all just spoken


    if you feel it or not just let me know.....


    Dear Lord - LO
    Dear Lord - HI

    oNe
    test
  2. Revo1

    Revo1 Rhythms & Sounds

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    Amen, poet. Nice ending. Intense, passionate, powerful, fierce spirit, demanding, and fevering of the word. Good job, Rhyme. Feel free to share some more, kid. peaCe Poetry.. It'sallHiphop..
    test
  3. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    You may want to back away from the mic and deliver this poem with the intensity the words demand.
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  4. I think it was intense enough, more would have been overdoing it. I was feeling it, it flowed nice and seemed really sincere.

    stay up
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  5. Infonation

    Infonation Info for the Nation

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    It was kinda scary, when you started gettin loud. But it had a good message, and i could feel your emotion, throughout your voice.

    ^One
    test
  6. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    I'm playing it again. There is distortion from being a little too close to the mic. Back away a little. and a little more emotion can be pulled off if some method acting is applied. I think that if anyone actually wants to be serious about the art of spoken word poetry, take an acting class, if only it's just one small introductory class.

    Good piece. Just back up at least 4 inches from the mic. I'd say a foot or so and really let it go, nah mean?
    test
  7. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    this was nice no doubtt
    test
  8. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    Yeah that shit was real nice...it startled me because it came in loud as hell. lol How did you upload that, cuz I wanna do some audio shit too...I mean can you just record that shit straight to a computer file or some shit without having to upload an MP3 or what-not?
    test
  9. RhYmE KiLLa 187

    RhYmE KiLLa 187 New Member

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    Word to everyone that replied, and augee yea I actually just made this on sound recorder on my computer. But to make rap audios i just use cool edit pro to mix my beats and lyrics...

    oNe
    test
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