South: 11. Text Vs 7. Patriarch

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Nebz, Sep 6, 2003.

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  1. Nebz

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    13. You've been murdered. After death you have a chance to come back and do what you feel needs done..so what would that be? Tell someone or do something yourself? Room for creativity-Macaþre
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    I remember a sudden pain, my body washed upon on a muddy terrain
    A death in vain, dealt to me from a man labeled insane
    My last moment's held me in a trance, as i took an upper glance
    I was no longer with my body, but had recived a second chance
    Now i feel nothing but rage, & it's time to deal with the blame
    I stare at my body draining the rain,
    My reflextion denied, from the near by window pane.
    But no longer can i shed a tear, no longer do i suffer from fear
    So it's time to persevere, & take my revenge, so sincere..
    A serging storm of memory's flood my mind, as my eye's fly blind
    Retracing my step's as my current state & former emotion's lock intertwined
    I sense my killer's presance close, & he better belive in ghost's
    Cause im going to leave him frozen, from his head to his toe's
    My sense's lead me to a distant house, here in my revenge i will douse,
    I enter the building via the wall's, a building infested with louse
    It's time to strike my strife, to this bitter man's life,
    My face lie's expressionless as from the side i reach out for a knife
    & i feel no rapport, as i make my way to the second floor,
    remaining remorseless as i have no feeling's anymore, i enter the door
    A shanty bedroom, with the old man lying down on a matress
    As i lit up the room, he awoke, i threw the knife, & told him to catch this
    He screamed in terror, but still lived on, altho i really did'nt miss
    As he ran at me to resist, i thrived upon the blood leaking from his wrist
    The creaking of the floorboard's surrounded, the forest he headed toward's
    A game of cat & mouse sprung, as i followed to reek my reward's
    I thrieved upon the weakling's plea's, & his distant scream's
    Staying closly behind as he ran in between the tree's, then he sprung to his knee's
    The tear's flowing out of his eye's, suddenly made me realise,
    That keeping him alive to stalk & torure, would be a more defying prize
    So ill hold up's his journey to hell, & turn up the heat to the level of larva
    & after all, this is the least a son could grant to his father.......
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  4. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    Text wins.
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