South: 1. Dahlohner Vs 13. J.Christ

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Nebz, Sep 6, 2003.

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  1. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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  2. DahLohner

    DahLohner Straight Up Un-Holy

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    Being a grad student is hard,.

    But I'll try to squeeze this in.

    SIGNING IN.

    IMOUT
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  3. J.Christ

    J.Christ Registered User

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    im here Dah

    lets make it supercool

    i'll go with topic 3
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  4. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    get that crap outta here!
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  5. J.Christ

    J.Christ Registered User

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    if you show up before the deadline i'll post my verse

    until then

    topic - youre a stray bullet

    i flew outta the gun
    and shot someone
    oh how much fun
    it is to be a bullet in a gun
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  6. DahLohner

    DahLohner Straight Up Un-Holy

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    Same topic...

    First the flesh bruised as I went through, each red tube
    Burst, splurging red juice, what the fuck was I sent through?
    A stressed dude screamed as I splintered a bone
    It's like fresh food but ya eating dinner alone
    I was excited, but had none else to share it with
    The blood flow slowed, I started getting scared and shit
    Like "If he dies, Maybe I might die with him!"
    His name is on me, so I'm told, but did I listen?
    No, instead, I'm a stray bullet, well I found a home
    Caught this victim while he dissed someone on the phone
    Yellin and screamin, you'd think it was his wife, perhaps
    Now he's dying, someone took his life for laughs
    Maybe shits and giggles, cuz he's got a smile where he scowled
    And death is like a plunger, he released the bile in his bowel
    ...

    But I guess I'm just a little bit ahead of myself
    Before a gun is shot, ya gotta find the hand where it's held
    And the one in my case had dirt under the nails
    Some angry brotha skipped Miranda, hurdled to jail
    Runnin from cops at top speed, hopin they'd stop
    I was one of the hot slugs that float from his glock
    Cuz busy intersections are deathtraps, ya never know
    When ya number's called to ride that "forever road"
    ...

    And as senseless as it is, don't pity the victim
    Cuz now his kid knows that Jesus will listen
    If you pray hard enough for your father's demise
    After he's deep inside you, doesn't bother to hide
    His crime by disposing of the cum-ridden knee-highs
    The blood stained skirts, Momma bought these last week
    The night before, he put in her mouth, "you didn't even ask me!"
    And the man's wife had trouble supportin his habit
    She sold sex for coke to important drug addicts
    Only to get ripped off quick after the fucking
    And come home to her husband, all frantic and buggin
    He got violent every time he needed his fix
    So she braced herself for the immediate licks
    From the wet leather belt, how the skeletons fall
    When a closet gets demolished and the elegant sprawl
    ...
    How do I know this? simple..I pierced his heart
    From the soft outer layer to the fiercest part
    Where his hate for the nig.gers and the J.ews resided
    Horowitz sold this gun, and a black dude decided
    To shoot at whoever stood in his way that hot day
    And it happened to be this guy who cannot say
    "Lord, forgive me for the sins I've commited
    and give me strength to fix the damage inflicted
    On my family and friends, I'm trying badly to end
    These evil trends,God, give me the strength to repent"
    But naww.. what came out his mouth were curses and lies
    The kind of man whose evil's what the earth'll despise
    Until the rise of a people, kind, loving and innoccent
    Until then..you can call "Justice" ..Coincidence.

    IMOUT
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  7. Atheist

    Atheist Storyteller

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    Vote: Dahloner.


    Hot.
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  8. Vadik

    Vadik New Member

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    WTF.

    Vote = Dah
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  9. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    I'm waiting for J. Christ to walk on water here...

    until then vote: Dahloner
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  10. DahLohner

    DahLohner Straight Up Un-Holy

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  11. Text

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    vote- Dah
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  12. TRAP.

    TRAP. i'm soo old school.

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    dahs style is so similar to mine its uncanny ... we're like brothers ... you really couldn't do too much w/ that topic to make it out of the ordinary ... so you worked real well w/ it to keep my attention. pce.
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  13. TeKneeK

    TeKneeK The Heart and Soul of RM

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    Dahlohner wins.
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