Something To Say (Produced by BestPaul) DROP LINKS DROP LINKS

Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by habeascorpus, Jul 15, 2009.

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  1. Les W

    Les W Was Helped By Point Game

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    ur right I messed up I call the "callback" hooks A/B lol

    Your hook is too jumbled too many syllables I would rewrite it for you to see, but trim it down yourself and spit it again and you will notice it will jump out, dubbing it as is will make it louder but even more jumbled ya dig?

    There is no energetic, contextual or rhythmic climax in your hook, the verses are powerful so this makes the hook a break in verse rather than a selling point to the song

    This is what jumped out at me when I heard the mp3

    Sorry I don't like talking to much for two reasons
    1. I don't know who I am dealin with online
    2. This is theory we are all growing so I don't want to impose my thoughts too much better you discover and understand than I just speak on it
    test
  2. habeascorpus

    habeascorpus The Future

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    werd, i get it, thanx for the in depth look at my song. i want whatever ur smoking
    test
  3. C. STEAKS

    C. STEAKS New Member

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    fuckin fire foo, lets take this back to the top.
    test
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