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  1. habeascorpus

    habeascorpus The Future

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    BestPaul on the beat, he's gonna re-pattern the beat to fit around the hook and verses better since it sounds a tad repetitive, this isn't the official last mix of the song...this is more of a universal type of track and not as experimental as my other songs

    I RE-RECORDED THE HOOK, IT SOUNDS MUCH BETTER AS FAR AS THE FLOW AND BEING ON BEAT WITH THE COHESIVENESS OF THE SONG...I RE-MIXED THE VOCALS BUT THIS STILL ISN'T THE OFFICIAL ALBUM VERSION

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  2. harsh_times86

    harsh_times86 Maserito

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    beat is tight. i like the flow of the first verse but the quality isnt that good. maybe its the bass that makes it sound blurry. the hook is decent but doesnt have enough energy. the thing i like best about this track is the lyrics. lyrically this shit is on point, the flow has potential though. i usually dont like tracks about rapping but this is like a who wants to battle call out. the hook is kind of catchy too. decent track hit me back..
    http://board.rapmusic.com/post-ya-audios-videos-here/1167787-big-paper-hot-new-track-will-return-feedback.html
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  3. urboyeon

    urboyeon New Member

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    appreciate you coming through holmes, n yes that was a voice tag hahaha diz guy...the beat was nice, matched up with the topic. delivery was coo but i think you coulda went harder on that with those bars you had out. lyrics were nice, some nice punches here n there i liked. quality wasnt the best but overall this was pretty good my man. keep dropping that goood
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  4. Methisyourdad

    Methisyourdad Methixonline.com

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    yeah i'm likin this this is one of those beats that as soon as you hear it you instantly like it...

    i like your flow the way you flow and shit is nice i like it real refreshing type of style...

    your messege and everything in this joint is on point i like this man much respect!
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  5. habeascorpus

    habeascorpus The Future

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    thanx man much love, felt the same about ur shit
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  6. Revalation03

    Revalation03 The Difference

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    I like the message behind the song. I'm not gonna lie I'm not big on the chorus, it needs to be more head noddable. In other words, the chorus should be the cleanest part and there are some parts where it has too many syllables or words so it breaks the head nodding or rhythm. Verses are nice lyrically, delivery is different but in a good way. I think more presence would be good since you doing some braggadocio type rhymin. Beat is dope, it does need some more changes as you said. Overall though the track is dope, couple tweaks here and there and this shit will be a lil banga right here.
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  7. Revalation03

    Revalation03 The Difference

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    oh btw, thanks for the feed on the M-Dot joint, that's my crew mate. Peep below I left the link for his mixtape so you can peep him. Tape features Agallah, Termanology, Singapore Kane, Trademarc (of East Coast Avengers), Nabo Rawk (of Porn Theatre Ushers) and more. Beats by Domingo, DC the MIDI Alien, Expilizit One (Special Teams 1st album), D-Sharp, and more. Peace!

    http://www.zshare.net/download/599930511baa73fe/
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  8. Enigman

    Enigman PIG LORD

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    your shit is mad fat. flow is deadly onpoint. kicking a style with that many multies your always gonna be walking a tightrope where the slightest slip will have you sounding like a fucking faggot with forced rhymes and compromised content. you however managed to pull it off and all the bars were relevant. the bars have a nice narritive feel to them aswell, the bars relate to one another without that outrageous forced jumpoff/street battle goofy style of rhyming.

    im definetely feelng it

    check mine

    http://board.rapmusic.com/post-ya-a...ding-toilet-rap-will-return-feed-o-c-3-a.html
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  9. habeascorpus

    habeascorpus The Future

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    thanx for the feed guys
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  10. TheVibes

    TheVibes New Member

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    Returning the love...

    Flow is on point, energy could be more intense, lyrically you doin ya thing tho, I would say just work on your energy/presence and style and you'll be in good shape...

    keep up the good work
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  11. habeascorpus

    habeascorpus The Future

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    werd thanx for returning the feed
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  12. MisterE

    MisterE Look @ His Face Now!

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    daaaaamn habers, this shit is dope juice



    BTW, what was the file name of that beat u sent me?? i cant find it anywhere, u might need to resend it
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  15. Paranoid

    Paranoid Jawn Raw

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    this beat is pretty slick im feelin the vibe. it def has its own harmony though which im lovin. lyrically your good there, no doubt. i like ya flow and swagger on the mic dude, really feelin the way you go with ya hip hop. delivery is pretty cool throughout, you could throw a little more emotion to hype it up a little more with ya verses. overall this is a pretty solid track though, im bumpin my head to this dude, nice drop man.

    hit me back here
    http://board.rapmusic.com/post-ya-audios-videos-here/1168860-jawn-p-prices-ya-head.html
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  16. habeascorpus

    habeascorpus The Future

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    might have been this beat i just rocked, that might be bad news...we can put something else together
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  17. Tony B

    Tony B New Member

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    hmm, quality/mix is umm....bad lol sorry
    yea not feelin the hook.
    honestly man, work on ya flow cuz its mad choppy
    i like wut you're sayin but u gotta get polished n say it in a way
    that'll have listeners wanting to hear more
    beat is iight tho. sample gets a little annoying after a while tho

    keep droppin man
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  18. Tech-Omega

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    Okay I won't comment on the mixing of the vocals b/c it's an unmixed version. Flow was pretty much on point, but I'd say try punch ins/outs on this. Your attempting to get alot into your verse and it'll sound more effective better if you take the time to do punch ins and punch outs. The chorus was okay, but it sounds to much like a verse. Find a way to differ it from your verses. Beat is cool. Gonna lil repatitive after awile, but it's dope and gets the job done.

    dope track though fam. Return the feedback
    http://board.rapmusic.com/audio-emc...st-i-do-show-yall-ima-mutha-f-kn-problem.html
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  19. habeascorpus

    habeascorpus The Future

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    lmao
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    habeascorpus The Future

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