So Y'all Cats Really Like DZK's "Torcher", eh?? Peep this....

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  1. TreyOnePound

    TreyOnePound New Member

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    This is a track y'all wouldn't expect from me....some straight fire....all links will be returned w/ love....

    HI-FI HEAT
    LO-FI HEAT

    Lemme know what y'all cats think of this shit...

    Flow: Kollision
    Beat/Mixing: Chris Stylez
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  2. SIN

    SIN Sincerely

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    lololol

    "and if yo' ass don't feel me/you're probably Divinity"



    LOLOLOL



    Holla!!!
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  3. TreyOnePound

    TreyOnePound New Member

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    haha whatup sin...good looks....

    upppppppppppp
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  4. SIN

    SIN Sincerely

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    Whats good, B?
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  5. TreyOnePound

    TreyOnePound New Member

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    chylllin....i got this kid Kraze recordin at my crib now...he knows ur bro Dynamic...

    UPPPPPPPPPP
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  6. TreyOnePound

    TreyOnePound New Member

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  8. menaz

    menaz Avant Garde

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    WOW...this is tight. Sound click has to be the reason people sleeping. FLow is tight, you kinda on dzk's dick lyrically with the adderral talk and sounding like marz. Lyrics are ok but, you need to say more than just flow.<feel me! on level with dzks torcher<naw, but you can keep rapping your shits good enough to continue. you're not on eternals wack ass level thats forsure.

    peace yo!
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  9. TreyOnePound

    TreyOnePound New Member

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    lyrics?? haha u have to listen close, i got some punchlines in that bitch.....
    example....
    "bring a representative, if u think he's better than...kollision/ and if u got money then bet it then/ if u really feel offended then/ i don't give a fuck u see black and white photos in my mouth becuz i'm speakin negative/"

    -come on fam...only reason i titled it with DZK's name in it b/c that's the track he's well known for and i think this is equal

    thanks for the reply tho, it's appreciated
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  10. Aramis

    Aramis That Guy

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    i like that guliotine line...there are lots of good lines in there...hand shake playin with analong...nice....push keys like a piano man...heat......always feeling yours tracks..nice nice.
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  11. TreyOnePound

    TreyOnePound New Member

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    no doubt, much appreciated fam
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  12. _Organik_

    _Organik_ Deaf Villian This Guy's

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    Listenin Now....


    nice voice... grimey shit... beat is iLL .... flow is dope......lyrics are mad nice


    dope concept

    some nice multi's dope punches

    all in all its a downloader

    worth listenin to 4 sure

    peace the fuck out
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  13. TreyOnePound

    TreyOnePound New Member

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    no doubt, much appreciated fam
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  14. kCliPze

    kCliPze Not To Be Fucked Wit

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    Feelin this homie u did ya thing on this.. ya flow was dope u kept it coming and ish keepd oing you homie..

    id leave more feed but im extremely tired and just got in from work..

    but likin it and shit its definately worth the listen

    ez
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  15. TreyOnePound

    TreyOnePound New Member

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    no doubt, good lookin out Clipze
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  17. D.Productions

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    FUCING SICK....i will love to produce u a beat and u rip that shit.
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    D.Productions New Member

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    Get at me on AIM. WE can collab also. Venomz86 is my aim
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  19. TreyOnePound

    TreyOnePound New Member

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    no doubt baby....sounds like a plan
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  20. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    listenin .... angry ass flow is aight ...
    the only thing I really want to critique is how you changed youre voice ...
    you dont need to I was peepin youre shit for a minute ...
    the feel to this was ok ...
    overall not bad
    return the fav

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=913630
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