So I wrote a short story about Batman goin psycho

Discussion in 'Audio Emcee Hook Ups' started by Instant Legend, Oct 22, 2013.

  1. Instant Legend

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    The shit's being read like crazy, but I'm not seeing a lot of comments coming in yet. If you fuck with Batman, read this shit

    http://horrornovelreviews.com/2013/...-molgaards-the-fall-of-the-dark-knight-zsasz/

    Leave a comment on the site, just tell me if ya liked it or not. I'm thinkin if the reception is generally positive I might turn this into a 6/8 part story and see if I can't get some serious attention from DC.

    Shout @ me folks, it ain't very long, and while it isn't super violent, it's going to be if I keep marchin.
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  2. ENGengENG

    ENGengENG victim of power issues

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    why is the website so shitty

    did a 6 yr old make it ?
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  3. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    I'll check it later. That font is terrible though.
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  4. Instant Legend

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    just pushin it for some feedback
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  5. yayo

    yayo Polar Bear LaFlare

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    I cant read but bump
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  6. Instant Legend

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    hahaha - i appreciate the push homie
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  7. Detroit

    Detroit The d is silent

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    Where ya movie reviews bruh lol u been Mia
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  8. Instant Legend

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    www.best-horror-movies.com - full time staffer there - shit loads of recommendations/reviews

    and if you've got something you're interested in, message me - I got a lot of shit that's either in theaters, not in theaters yet, or not on disc yet. Movie collection is fucking stupid.
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  9. mr.mdz

    mr.mdz Never Lie

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    I think that it was pretty good overall. There was a little too much descriptive build-up for what ended up being a pretty convenient twist.

    I think some changes could be made to show a little bit more why Victor is used as his pawn. There are too many "aha!" moments in the last part of the story.

    I actually liked the story quite a bit up until the twist.
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  10. Instant Legend

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    thanks for the input homie!
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