SmittyRhythm vs. IamBenT

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  1. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    12 bars of hot fire.

    First to um.. 5 votes?

    I'll give you a few days. I will be editing this with my verse soon.

    GL
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  2. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Slappin Smitty in the Face

    Any claim to fame, just like ya brain, I'm removing it-/
    Don't stress about getting it back, like Fax, you're barely using it-/
    NO excuses, bitch, did you forget you're script is too civil? -/
    You couldnt' break the law of gravity, I suspend what you scribble-/
    You use little disses that dribble out, my mouth is Vince Carter-/
    You couldn't grow a pair and drop hard if you were a dick farmer-/
    Crowbar flow dog, you'll never nail me,-/
    like a chick with hot breasts in wood shop tests, ya gonna fail, C..-/
    Rub it in ya face, feed you lye soap, still won't rap cleanly-/
    Smitty begged two fags to join RBL like "Yo, TAG TEAM me!"-/
    Ya amateur methods, I hang like clothes up, you fucking abortion!-/
    Rhythmless like RapMusic froze up after this war's done...

    Son.
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  3. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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  4. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Happy Easter, nicca.

    Write a verse lol
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  5. smittyrhythm

    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    shiit my fault bent I forgot all about this battle, just read your verse I'll have sum'm up in a few minutes. My bad.
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  6. smittyrhythm

    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    A fagot position for a name, this dude is hardly a threat...
    I normally bend the bitches over - but you were already bent
    So its safe to say this Loser loves gettin raped and impaled
    Cuz you was made for bendin gay males into the shape of an L
    I'm 'twice as down' \/\/ I 'double YOU' and stomp your crew into puddled puke
    Bitch you aint 'sick' you got the flu and just get bent over stomach juice
    So how are you a fuckin crook? You dont shoot straight in a battle
    You got the wrists of a T-Rex, he scraps and it looks like a doggy paddle
    So watch me break this crooked man and lay em out with his spine crushed
    And he wont be fingering his fade like this when he has to 'point at the line-up' ^
    I mean from your signature to your scriptures, even your picture is gay
    He loves thinking 'long and hard' (bout dick) and gives it his 'brain'

    meh...rushed it out. GL
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  7. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    votes please, votes everyone thank you
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  8. Daracke

    Daracke Member

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    After reading both of your guys's bars a few times, im gonna have to say smitty has my vote.

    Bent, your line
    "Rub it in ya face, feed you lye soap, still won't rap cleanly-/
    Smitty begged two fags to join RBL like "Yo, TAG TEAM me!"-/"
    i gotta say was really good, and creative.


    Smitty first line got me to laugh though
    "A fagot position for a name, this dude is hardly a threat...
    I normally bend the bitches over - but you were already bent"

    So smitty has got my vote.
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  9. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    hey thanks homie.. lets get a few more in
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  10. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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    This vote somewhat sums up my vote too,but I have to emphasize that bar for bar smitty had the more direct more powerful punches.The short battle direct diss style is right up smitty's alley,and it's hard to beat him there.You gotta flex something different to deal with his arsenal of slick wordplay and potent,funny disses. IAB you got madd potential and you're already head and shoulders above most of the people that I've seen write onsite.Just incorporate more different methods of punching in your arsenal,and you'll be even crazier.Do NOT stop throwing those intelligent haymakers man,just add more varied kinds of punches PER BAR like funny punches,creative punches that get that:"ohhhh" or "dayamn" from the crowd,ALONG WITH YOUR intelligent haymakers.You'll have a more complete arsenal of lyrical weaponry then.G/L. smitty is a beast man; you did well against him.
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  11. G Force

    G Force Member

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    Smitty gets my vote here. Generally i think he was more direct at his opponent in terms of scheme with attacking Bent's name etc and was more consistant with power, line for line. IamBent had some decent lines but i just feel in a battle of such a small bar limit you have to really hit hard every single line.
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  12. smittyrhythm

    smittyrhythm you love 2 hate me

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    uppin...not that there's anyone on here
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  13. Benigno

    Benigno you can lose your life.

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    smitty!! nice job bro' i have to give my vote to Smitty

    after reading both verses i had to say that his verse was all around better.

    bent - good try

    Smitty - I feel you, i used to text battle back in 98 and it used to be poppin' i was surprised to see it so dead. ill be lurking around tryna catch rec where ever i can. let me know if you know where any good text battles are going on


    FW
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  14. M C Carnage

    M C Carnage New Member

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    Vote - Bent

    I thought Smitty started nice but dropped off midway thru.

    Bent's verse just seemed to have better consistency/structure. Well thought out punches.
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  15. DethStryque

    DethStryque DethStryque theInvincible

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  16. bombtharhymes

    bombtharhymes New Member

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    vote: Smitty
    was direct and had some good punchies
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