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  1. RealMS

    RealMS Ne te quaesiveris extra

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    ^Perfect title for this, it kind of symbolizes all-how you feel, life in that particular stage, and the ones that passed away. I think just by writing this out you released a lot of that sadness and emotion out of you which is good, I hope it did anyway.
    -PEACE
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  2. Nu Voice

    Nu Voice the mystery of iniquity

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    Sorry so much for your loss bay. The poetry was very well-written. Keep ya head up. Things will be aight...you have to get thru the night before u can see the sun in the morning.
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  3. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    word to that NV and thanx RMS, your words and advice are taken

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  4. blaquest

    blaquest Yodel At Me

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    sorry about the loss man

    good drop made me remember when my grandma died and stuff dad times great stuff
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  5. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    no doubt B, thanx for the peepage

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  6. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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  7. misspimp

    misspimp a.k.a KATURAH

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    Need an abacus to count times I’ve cried in the night-light


    Damn baby...i felt u on this one...loosing someone close to u is one of the hardest things in the world...esspecially when you loose them to death!
    You expressed great emotion in this piece...and im sure many of us can relate.
    Besides that this poem had pretty good structure anf lowed very well!
    Feeling this one!

    mad love
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  8. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    thanx for the peepage and love

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