Sleep And Dream **track Will Be On My Album**

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  1. L-M-INT

    L-M-INT New Member

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    when i wake up i think.....

    when i wake up i constantly think i dream
    of many things and who i became to be
    i dont like what i see but its part of what makes you think
    the desicions i make will chosoe the path i lead
    theres so many people with the same struggle as me
    its like a desease for the deseased
    will there ever be peace?theres 2 many strays to see
    of everything i wish i could bring
    love and happiness for those in need
    but im not god im just another human being
    in the same process of growth
    i get wiser as days go by hoping i dont choke
    n ask for a helping hand
    cuz the time we live in someone would rather just stand
    there n see u stuck not really giving a fuck
    about ur life, struggles n such...n such no 1 really gives a fuck

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    when i sleep i dream
    n when i wake up reality hits me
    but then as the as the day goes by
    i start to dream constantly i think n i dream

    i choose to get high to get by to hide
    from everything that bothering me in the inside
    but on the outside is where i want it to hide
    i try n try to do things right
    but oh well i guess thats life
    messing up everything time to time
    youll get over it
    just just put ur shoulder up a little bit
    and stand strong i knew we had it in us all along
    this song is the song for those that think like me
    always having to question everything
    feeling like you got nobody but yourself
    living in hell,trapped n locked like a cell
    no one can stop the knowledge I speak
    and its towards everyone that is just like me
    I hate my life that I live
    Pushin needles and caps I wish I was dead
    Then everyone whould see who I really am
    Reflect it upon there life and see I was the definition of a man

    (CHORUS 2X)
    when i sleep i dream
    n when i wake up reality hits me
    but then as the as the day goes by
    i start to dream constantly i think n i dream

    I dream that my mind would block out the negative
    Kids can have the good life they were ment 2 live
    We do enough sufferage and pain for our kids to be free
    But I guess life wants a little to much of everything
    If I had the perfect voice I would sing
    The most beautifull song to uplift everybody
    Some people may not feel this but I have a dream
    N I will keep bumpin this till somebody listens to me
    Keep speakin whats on my mind
    Because it will get me far in life
    Ill just keep travelin these long paths
    I wont look back and I have enough courage to not collapse
    If I start to gasp and need a breath of air
    I hope there is just that one specail person in my life to be there
    N if she leaves, the good thing is that I still got me…
    I wish my dreams would become reality
    I wish I could see everthing that I dream
    And everything that I dream would happen to me..
    I have to get high to see my dreams..but actually im just dreaming
    Im just dreaming
    test
  2. L-M-INT

    L-M-INT New Member

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    UPPPPPPPPPPP A DAISY
    test
  3. L-M-INT

    L-M-INT New Member

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    cmon poeople tell me what u think
    test
  4. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    Decent word choice here, the length balanced out in each verse. Hopefully you have a right sound for the beat to match the lyrics or it won't work. Those lyrics are unique, so you may need a unique beat, as well.. Well, you probably already know that, but just refreshing the mind. Other than that, I found it decent, pretty nice to hear, but to read, it isn't anything amazing or spectacular. Athough, your emotion is your emotion, so anything you drop is well though out and good << That's truth, as well. My blessings..
    test
  5. h.wood

    h.wood IMAGINATION SUPER STAR

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    i like it- identifiable and seems real (like your speaking directly) ^
    test
  6. L-M-INT

    L-M-INT New Member

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    TAHNX PEEPS..... KEEP REPLIES COMIN....
    L-M-INT
    test
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    L-M-INT New Member

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    keep comin
    test
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