Discussion in 'Post Ya Audios & Videos Here! - feedback forum' started by killa_bone, Jul 24, 2005.
ok nah one more time
uppin one LAST time because u bitches who say 'oh yeah i WILL leave feedback if give me some' never feed shit and im hungry
sorry it took me so long. I haven't been to the site in days. I don't have anything against UK rappers at all. your intro is too long. i thought the concept was maad funny. you did a good job of riding the beat. peeps are definitely snoozing. keep doing your thing though.
no worries skillz, i have corrected the intro problem... i just took the fucker out. maybe just leave that other version for another day.
u got a heavy accent...lyrics are iight...beat feels a bit dry and a bit too busy...for this kinda track...doesn't really match ya lyrics well....like this track feels like it should b more light CONTENT-WISE...ur flow/delivery is consistent....but this isn't meshin' very well to my ears....i could b wrong tho...
props on ya shit cuzzo
Just gonna comment on your verses...
Hmm... Ight... Flow is on point for the most part. Got a few awkward pauses in there. Although its nothing too serious, so good job... Doubles are on point, good job. I notice a lack of adlibs. Should definitely add em in on a song like this, when u talkin about some semi-comical shit u nah mean? Uve got a bit of presence behind the mic, so thas good as well. Dont wanna be monotone...Hook is eh...Its decent, nothing above average though. Although, im not sure u were even tryna go for that vibe so... The 3rd verse is better than the first in my opinion. Got a few sound effects and what not poppin off. A lil more energy as well. Altogether though, this song was alright. Solid drop. Stay up. 1
yeah i prefer the 3rd verse too, i really have trouble writing hooks you know, it's gettin quite annoying...
thanks a lot for the feedback lads, appreciated.
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