Sinister (2008)

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  1. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

    Mar 8, 2005
    Demonic illusions.
    Thats what psychiatrist diagnosed me with.
    Hallucinations. Seeing things that don't
    really exist.
    "What an imagination.."
    They'd say, while disreguarding the truth.
    When evil lurks, I'm as restless as a souless
    A sinister youth. I deserve these
    For mutilating this woman with child in the
    I was under his power and control,
    scowling in the cold for hours.
    Possessed by the molding force, that left
    them devoured.
    Enslaved in my own skin, shackled and
    barred from release.
    Hidden beyond the rattled extent, of this
    demon that scarred me.
    It's haunting my every thought, stirring up
    plots of insanity.
    "Kill herrr, kill himmm", screaming through
    my mind like a banshee.
    To some understanding, my evaluation was
    After 7 yrs of shock treatment, I pretty
    much became mellow.
    Then relapsed to my addiction, my prior
    convictions remerged.
    Bcuz the pipe dreams I did have, had
    nothing to do with how dick worked.
    1st it was crack and coc, the high life made
    things worse.
    Then it was sex and assualt I abused, when
    raping girls in the church.
    As I think back to the tower incodent, it was
    dark and foggy.
    She was 5 months pregnant and standing
    out in the lobby.
    I advized her to come with me, she didn't
    have a ride for the night.
    It was too cold to walk, and my car was
    parked outside.
    Green eyes and red hair, her supple breast
    could make Stevie stare.
    Part of her pants kinda sagged, so I
    spotted polka dot underwear.
    Her panting made my heart pound, as I
    proceeded to touch.
    Groping and stroking her pussy violently,
    way before she could nut.
    Inserting my fingers, her sugar walls were
    so soft.
    Assuming she liked it rough, I ripped her
    panties right off.
    She told me to stop, and just take her home
    So I drove to the tower pissed, and
    speeded expeditiously.
    My heart was still racing, but I apologized
    for mistakingly..
    ..reading her wrong, like all the women I'm
    She fell for it, so I manipulated the
    situation with ease.
    I took her forgiveness for weakness, and
    asked for a cup of tea.
    She let me in, with a grin, not knowing
    what's next.
    When the door shut, I locked it.Then
    dragged her up the steps.
    I hada hand full of hair, while mumbling
    under her breath.
    She was begging me to stop, putting the
    knife in her chest.
    As she was gasping for air in pain, my eyes
    zoned into hers.
    Watching her pupils dialate, while the blood
    continued to squirt.
    Splashing in my face, as she was caughing
    it up.
    Telling me she forgives me, and that there's
    still love.
    I stopped as her breath left.... and sat still
    as a painting.
    Closed her eyes with my finger tips, and
    started thinking.
    "What have I done?? How could I do sucha
    As I broke out in a loud cry, those demons
    were taunting.
    And its the truth, Your Honor. I didn't
    mean to do it.
    I blacked out with hallucinations, that I
    thought caused this delusion.
    I didn't know what I was doing, I swear to
    god on my life.
    I'll prove it. If I'm lying, I'll stab myself with
    that knife.
    What I did was unthinkable, I know that
    And yes I do feel remorse, for cutting her
    baby right out.
    I'm sick and I know it, but it's not my fault.
    I told you, when evil lurks? Satan waits in
    the dark.
    I don't know what else to say, nor what
    else to do.
    But if you decide, "death is what's right!",
    than I'll do it for you.
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  2. patrown

    patrown student for life

    Dec 5, 2011
    well, you just blew me the fuck away Jai. I didn't know you hit topicals.
    this is sick and twisted in the best of worst ways.
  3. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

    Mar 8, 2005
    Thankz bro. Before I got into battle shit, this was my forte. I use to have about 50 piecez on this site, but they got lost as the yrz went on.

    I'll post some more oldiez but goodiez, so keep a lookout.
  4. GaLaTeA

    GaLaTeA Well-Known Member

    Jun 10, 2010
  5. ComptonRiLLO

    ComptonRiLLO New Member

    Apr 11, 2012
    it is very long. but you paint a beautiful portrait. you have a unique flow. its nowhere near mainstream hip hop. but it is beautiful. your words are very cleverly placed. i can understand what your saying. i see you put in alot of work around here.
  6. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

    Mar 8, 2005
    Yea, I wrote it n about 3hrz. Whn I write topicalz, I usually thnk of a concept and jst let my pen start talking... I listen.

    Thanx every1. Glad u enjoyed.
  7. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

    Mar 8, 2005
    Thanx sweety. ;)
  8. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

    Apr 18, 2001
    this was pretty damn dope. simple scheme, and mechanics. but everything else was in place. Loved it
    Biotch! You wish you had a phone like mine...
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