~sincere~ vs Sm0ke

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by Sm0ke God, Nov 30, 2003.

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  1. Sm0ke God

    Sm0ke God "Fuck You Haters"

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    aight 10-12 lines

    3 votes
    no crew votes etc.
    explained votes only....
    drop when u can
    test
  2. Sm0ke God

    Sm0ke God "Fuck You Haters"

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    Aight Here It Is.........

    Rapidly Roastin' This Dike Cuz You's A Joke When Ya Write
    Ya Fuckin' Hopeless In Fights Cuz Ya Can't Focus Ya Might
    Rawool Duke, You Might Pass As Average.. In Your World
    When You Spit Its Like Ya Get In Touch With Ya Inner-Girl
    Cuz Dawg, Your Tha Laughin' Stock Tha Way Ya Graspin' Cocks
    Ya Mad At Everyone On BBoys Cuz You'll Never Be Half As Hot
    I Throw Bolders, Try To Keep Up With Me And Get Rolled Over
    My Lyrics Teach You A Lesson, So Except This Defeat As A Blessin
    A Condom Under Ya Pillow Is Tha Only Way Ya Sleep With Protection
    Even When This Geek's In Pefection He Stills Throws Punches
    With Tha Least Of Direction
    Ya Think Ya Lyrics Are Nasty - Until You See Your Reflection

    grimey
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  3. Sm0ke God

    Sm0ke God "Fuck You Haters"

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    u not gonna drop?
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  4. ~sincere~

    ~sincere~ New Member

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    I'll drop when I get back from getting a hair cut.
    test
  5. ~sincere~

    ~sincere~ New Member

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    Pretty hot verse you got there....say good night.

    That condem line was hot, you deserve an encore~
    but there's only 1 problem... I heard it before~
    I hate 'Yous'(•••s) like Nazis waving a German flag~
    the Rug'll have you duck-in shells like a Hermit Crab~
    let's be serious now, don't talk about my focus~
    your rhyme's nursery...like my fucking daughter wrote it~
    whats with you and the gay shit, stop dick suckin'~
    your careers over soon as hit the submit button~
    what's this kid puffin'? you gotta be high~
    I'll leave you walking with a cain like that Monopoly guy~

    Let's go
    test
  6. bigKEN

    bigKEN Hoosier Daddy??

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    Smoke- nice rhyme scheme and flow definately. It's refreshing to see cats with not many posts put up multies. Your wordplay was a lil forced, you were lacking good punches. This is more of a freestyle audio type piece than a text piece. Keep buildin' cuz you showing a lot of potential

    sincere- came with much better wordplay, mets, and punches. Obviously you have more text battling experience. You're creativity put you way over in this one. It wasn't very close.

    vote- Sincere
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  7. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    haha...sincere got this easy...just better punches altogether...better construction...just an overall better verse
    vote=sincere
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  8. ~sincere~

    ~sincere~ New Member

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    are you really from Alaska, I use to fuck a broad from Alaska, she was in the Navy. She used to hook a brother up cause she get's money for being and Alaskan....those where the days.
    test
  9. chudsta3000

    chudsta3000 BudSmokahzOnly

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    Both Mc's done well but sincere was in there like boom!!
    Dont give up dawg you got potential!!!
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  10. ~sincere~

    ~sincere~ New Member

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    shit TKO like a mothafucka.

    Good verse though Smoke, keep at it, and peep me in the RBL, Top 30 this week, yeah baby
    test
  11. Sm0ke God

    Sm0ke God "Fuck You Haters"

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    thanks, at least my first loss wasnt to sumone whack!
    test
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