Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by Sm0ke God, Nov 30, 2003.
aight 10-12 lines
no crew votes etc.
explained votes only....
drop when u can
Aight Here It Is.........
Rapidly Roastin' This Dike Cuz You's A Joke When Ya Write
Ya Fuckin' Hopeless In Fights Cuz Ya Can't Focus Ya Might
Rawool Duke, You Might Pass As Average.. In Your World
When You Spit Its Like Ya Get In Touch With Ya Inner-Girl
Cuz Dawg, Your Tha Laughin' Stock Tha Way Ya Graspin' Cocks
Ya Mad At Everyone On BBoys Cuz You'll Never Be Half As Hot
I Throw Bolders, Try To Keep Up With Me And Get Rolled Over
My Lyrics Teach You A Lesson, So Except This Defeat As A Blessin
A Condom Under Ya Pillow Is Tha Only Way Ya Sleep With Protection
Even When This Geek's In Pefection He Stills Throws Punches
With Tha Least Of Direction
Ya Think Ya Lyrics Are Nasty - Until You See Your Reflection
u not gonna drop?
I'll drop when I get back from getting a hair cut.
Pretty hot verse you got there....say good night.
That condem line was hot, you deserve an encore~
but there's only 1 problem... I heard it before~
I hate 'Yous'(•••s) like Nazis waving a German flag~
the Rug'll have you duck-in shells like a Hermit Crab~
let's be serious now, don't talk about my focus~
your rhyme's nursery...like my fucking daughter wrote it~
whats with you and the gay shit, stop dick suckin'~
your careers over soon as hit the submit button~
what's this kid puffin'? you gotta be high~
I'll leave you walking with a cain like that Monopoly guy~
Smoke- nice rhyme scheme and flow definately. It's refreshing to see cats with not many posts put up multies. Your wordplay was a lil forced, you were lacking good punches. This is more of a freestyle audio type piece than a text piece. Keep buildin' cuz you showing a lot of potential
sincere- came with much better wordplay, mets, and punches. Obviously you have more text battling experience. You're creativity put you way over in this one. It wasn't very close.
haha...sincere got this easy...just better punches altogether...better construction...just an overall better verse
are you really from Alaska, I use to fuck a broad from Alaska, she was in the Navy. She used to hook a brother up cause she get's money for being and Alaskan....those where the days.
Both Mc's done well but sincere was in there like boom!!
Dont give up dawg you got potential!!!
shit TKO like a mothafucka.
Good verse though Smoke, keep at it, and peep me in the RBL, Top 30 this week, yeah baby
thanks, at least my first loss wasnt to sumone whack!
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