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  1. Alphabetical

    Alphabetical Superstar Producer

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  2. Wizdumb The MC

    Wizdumb The MC NICK FURY

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    U gotta link to ur page man, it wont play off site.
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  3. KO Beats

    KO Beats I'm Killin Em

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    ok, sample is hot.....ok....u killin it......multies is SERIOUS toward the beginning......LMFAO, @ this hook....

    well @ least u dont beat around the bush...lol


    good drop fam
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  4. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    nice quality :) i wish i had a setup

    good flow, serious solid verses 'n straight hook. keep this shit up b! ima bonafine hiphop superstar
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  5. Alphabetical

    Alphabetical Superstar Producer

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    Thanks.

    ALL LINKS RETURNED.
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  6. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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  7. Paragraaaf

    Paragraaaf New Member

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    ok listenin

    beats aiight...not a fan of devize but he got some ill beats...ur forcin ur voice real hard, not feelin that...multies are ill...flow is real bouncy...follows the beat lol...DEAD @ THIS HOOK...thats so real too lmfao...2nd verse starts ill...mic presence could use a little tuning...not much needed tho...

    hit me up...http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=915620
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  8. Infinite Skillz

    Infinite Skillz R.E.A.L. Emcee

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    Voice is kind of distracting. Lyrics or rather the your diction within your rhymes shows you got vocab. My apologies if that is how you sound in real life but your rap voice just sounds forced. I liked the song despite the voice deal so.....do what you do.


    Get at me.
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  9. Alphabetical

    Alphabetical Superstar Producer

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    Word, this aint my normal steeze.....Just tryin something new
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  10. Alphabetical

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  11. l_dopa

    l_dopa New Member

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    This is not the kinda of stuff I listen to but I'm going to try to stay objective in my criticism. Overall your cadence can be better also the transition from verse to hook needs to be clearer. The beat just does a mild switch up. I think the sound quality (mixdown, clarity of vocals, and punch of the beat) could have been better. If you improve these things I think people are going to give your stuff a harder listen to find out what the message of the song is. Check my shit out in my signature.
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  12. SadistiK1

    SadistiK1 Washingtonian

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    Beats pretty cool... Drums sound VERY much like early Necro drums....

    Youre comin a lot better in the 2nd verse than the first, sounds natural... I dunno tho, your voice sounds like youre pushin too hard to sound grimy so it aint as fluent as it could be...

    Not feelin the hook much, I think a scratching hook with some Vinnie Paz or rugged cats like that could fit nicely... Overall its cool, I ilke the style, just think it coulda been flipped better..
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  13. Alphabetical

    Alphabetical Superstar Producer

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    thanks for the peeps...
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  14. TOOBxSOCKS

    TOOBxSOCKS Code of the Samurai

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    returnin feed:

    shits pretty nice....beats tight.......ya flows good...sounded like u hesitated a couple times though....lyrics are straight....voice is mad gritty....sounds good with this beat....9/10
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  15. Alphabetical

    Alphabetical Superstar Producer

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    Nice, thanks for the feed.
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  16. Alphabetical

    Alphabetical Superstar Producer

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    Bring it on.
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  17. AzeussuezA

    AzeussuezA The Mods Are Gay

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    hahahahahh @ how you say "Door"

    hahahahahahahahah

    I listened to you say that word 4x and laughed everytime
    Hold on....I'm gonna listen to it again:

    HAHAHAHAAHA

    Awww fuck, you sound like a Cartoon Character man
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  18. Alphabetical

    Alphabetical Superstar Producer

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    door???

    I didnt say door in this song.
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  19. Nimrod

    Nimrod Nimi Hendrix

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    this beat is sick, but i absolutely HATE the kicks


    ur delivery is hard, but im thikning ur trying to sound too hard, sounds bit over the top to me, like u should be a tad more laid back with ur delivery, i think u'd sound sicker that way


    dont feel the hook at all man, sounded tacky


    i like the 2nd verse more than the first


    solid drop man, u got some talent, good shit


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=12478577#post12478577


    check out my new shit when u get the time 1
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  20. Alphabetical

    Alphabetical Superstar Producer

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    Thanks for the time Nim.
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