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  1. JobOne

    JobOne Man of the Hour

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    I'm not Chinese so I can't really comment.

    Also, I'm usually offended when I hear white people rap though so I didn't listen.
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  2. Mock Turtle

    Mock Turtle ✂ Touche Douche ツ ✗○✗○✗○☂

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    yo bobba! that rap was


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  3. bobbaforce

    bobbaforce I don't give a nada

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    haha i know. i dont think lala or seattle is either
    t'was the joke!

    and


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  4. ScimonomicS

    ScimonomicS New Member

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    Since I didn't post one my original post here's a poem I wrote a couple weeks ago for class. The assignment was to come up with a unique form that incorporated a few different rules/restrictions (meter, syllable count, structure, etc.) and post it to our online discussion board then pick someone else's form from the class and write a poem in it. I can elaborate more if need be. This is a second draft and is pretty much finished.

    Midnight-Oil Baron

    No sleep tonight. When
    the brain begins wobbling, write
    twelve more paragraphs.
    As a second example,
    please consider how some-

    one's mood might affect
    persuasion in all the ways
    we've postulated.
    Also consider the role
    self-involvement likely plays.

    The buzz will push you.
    When a man with loopy eyes
    ask for help finding
    his bike, avoid staring at
    the jagged fence-posts through which

    the question travelled.
    In mid-swing, do not posture
    for the audience
    at home. Don't spend too much time
    on the psychology under-

    lying the sleeper
    effect and forget to cite
    the proper sources.

    -Lane Patrick '11



    and here is another one from earlier in the class (couple months ago) that's finished.

    Cold Souls

    Before you left, we used to drink and smoke
    until the ashes fell (or were they torn)
    away. From where I stand its hard to call.
    The years have blurred the sketches in my mind.

    The time the snow immobilized the cars
    we roamed the streets. The river cracked apart
    beneath our feet and we retreated back
    onto the dock. The spotlight moon stood watch
    above us floating through the town like ghosts.

    -Lane Patrick '11
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  5. JobOne

    JobOne Man of the Hour

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  6. Gwame

    Gwame no luckycharms in ireland

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    I'm a living legend and I'm known as a bad dude
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  7. larry word

    larry word get sauced n dip

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    that's quite rude*

    :funny: haven't thought of that line in about a year
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  8. im-niglo

    im-niglo gimme da penis avy

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    i also do stencils, kinda faggy form of graff but whatever
    shouts to reznik

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  9. SpecialOhEmPics

    SpecialOhEmPics Well-Known Member

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    any1 who does any kind of vocals hit me up for a collab :)
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  10. Kaysersoze

    Kaysersoze New Member

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    thank you sir...take a stab at the meaning! i'm interested in what you think
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