Short freestyle

Discussion in 'Open Mic' started by hYpOconDriAdIcT, Sep 26, 2011.

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  1. hYpOconDriAdIcT

    hYpOconDriAdIcT New Member

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    Think u ill? Guess what I'm sicker bitch
    thoughts are black n twisted, my mind is like likorish
    I'll slaughter u regardless of ya skin tone
    Treat ya like romo n stab u in the lung wit ya rib bone
    N leave it collapsed like a west virginia mine shaft
    u are now subject to my minds wrath
    I stab n scar wit ravid bars
    I'll choke u, n leave ya body blue... Avatar
    So high right now I can barely Even see straight
    I'll still pick apart ya flow
    like it was a bud n this track was a weed plate
    N when I attack I ain't takin a hostage
    Break ya legs backwards n leave u walkin like an ostrage
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    test
  2. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    Dope shit bruh. I'm still loving that verse you dropped back in the RSTL.

    "running his search.. As pregnant woman in the crowd rubs her stomach and smirks" However it went, it was ill as fuck lol.

    Anyhow this was sick. Some nice multies. I'd say touch up the flow for a little smoother delivery, but still it's nice man.

    I got a new song I'm droppin in the open mic real soon
    test
  3. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    I'll slaughter u regardless of ya skin tone
    Treat ya like romo n stab u in the lung wit ya rib bone

    dope ... lol good one homie
    test
  4. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    favorite part: "...avatar" good shit
    test
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