shared thoughts: clarity

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  1. sagacious infant

    sagacious infant reflecting the sun

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    clarity came through masturbation
    clarity
    clarity came when i was masturbating and fantisizing and the person in my fantasy was me
    i was pleasing me
    and i cried cuz everything was so clear
    and i got me back
    i don't know where i was, but i'm here now
    purging came naturally
    i didn't have to force it
    the dead skin just fell away
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  2. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    Was this just nonsense and wanted a few laughs from it? Because this was simply idiotic and had no real meaning at all, except masturbation.
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  3. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    I disagree with that^^^ What it sounded like to me is you were masterbating and while you were fantasizing about pleasing someone, it occured to you that you wanted to please yourself before trying to please somebody else. We shouldn't be so quick to judge and write people off as writing "nonsense", because what we think is nonsense may actually be a major issue for them.
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  4. TuNed RooT

    TuNed RooT Love is introduction ..

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    Word@augee, I was quick to judge.
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  5. augee.ali

    augee.ali Lively Up Yourself...

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    It's all good...sometimes we only see things for face value instead of what they could be worth.
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  6. varentao

    varentao New Member

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    A fairly original concept in a way..

    ...i felt it's bluntness...though the 'subject' is what won me over...the depiction n writing being done to a certain medium-high standard...using as said before, bluntness..

    ..maybe putting less emphasis on the writing n what not was what you wanted? Then again, maybe not...i shall not dig any further for i believe my shovel need cleaning...(!)...and digging would be futile anyway...

    ...nice..

    ..resp..
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  7. MISSKEYdaQUEEN

    MISSKEYdaQUEEN Watch the black panther..

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    I feel Tuned initially a little on this...I mean..uh..masturbation...lol

    But I can feel what S.I. is saying to a certain extent. sometimes blunt reality takes people aback...but...the point came across.

    I can't say I'm feelin it..but do your thang ma!!lol
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  8. sagacious infant

    sagacious infant reflecting the sun

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    didn't really expect anyone to get it...it's called "shared thoughts" cuz i was just sharing my thoughts...it was three in the morning and i was having a conversation with someone...she was asking about a quote in my away message and asked if it related to me...i told her it didn't anymore because...

    clarity came through masturbation
    clarity
    clarity came when i was masturbating and fantisizing and the person in my fantasy was me
    i was pleasing me
    and i cried cuz everything was so clear
    and i got me back
    i don't know where i was, but i'm here now
    purging came naturally
    i didn't have to force it
    the dead skin just fell away

    i had taken so much away from sex in the past few years...i overlooked the spiritual aspect...ignored it completely just to please others...i wasn't doing it for myself...and it took someone to piss me off to remind me...to remind me what sex has been about for me since the beginning...and i had myself back...

    take it how ya wanna

    thanks for responding, but mostly for reading
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  9. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    I would read this but I won't because of two reasons:

    1. You refuse to read mine for whatever odd harbored reasons, and
    2. [dunno]I already know it's the shit. You don't write bad stuff...

    So consider this just a free "up"

    LEVITATE!
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  10. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    I had to read this a few times to get what you were saying. I was gettin different ideas. But since you came back and cleared it up i understand it bette. Nice concept. Mad Talent

    one luv
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  11. vinous

    vinous New Member

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    liked it when i first read it, more so with the explanation. everythings already been sed, but liked it muchly.
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  12. BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum

    BlackSoultan Ad Infinitum aka Billy Shoreview

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    Okay, I read it. As you likely know I find it disagreeable, but for art's sake [dunno] I already said it.

    You're good.

    At least at this.
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  13. it reminded me of desire taking over and the only way to end temptaion is by yeilding to it, the ending, kinda revived itself..
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