Shadows Edge 1-0 vs. Joey Donuts 1-0

Discussion in 'RBL TOP 20' started by The Second Comming, Feb 28, 2005.

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  1. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    RBL North Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due Friday night 12:00am Pacific time.
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm EST
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    All verses must be from 10-24 lines!(5-12 Couplets)
    A line is 1 length of the screen.

    -Voting-
    4 Votes per battler. 1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 100 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    First to 10 votes wins the battle, and it will be closed afterwards

    -General Rules-
    --No Extensions Whatsoever...Dont ask!
    --No editing after BOTH verses are posted
    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted will result in a 5 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
    --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

    -Mod AIM Contacts-
    Eyedill --- EyeDillTheReal
    Blackdef --- Yo Boi Curt
    Headless --- headlessverseman
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  2. Joey donuts

    Joey donuts Yeah yeah yeah

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    Hi im in it
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  3. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    I'm in this like the letter i.
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  4. Joey donuts

    Joey donuts Yeah yeah yeah

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    No show verse

    I pass fear dude, in your case i smack queers too
    I'll take advice from your custom text, your last year's news
    Your not a drug dealer man, let's get straight to the line
    He works at starbucks all day just to stay on his grind
    Far from loyal, he's probably a fat bastard...
    ...That picked the name shadow's edge cause he's a back stabber
    So your from illinois, known to bring the instruments our way
    Your the original college dropout that influenced kanye
    Stop talking all that jazz, i'll smack this bitch freely
    This battle is should be in the south, cause its a big easy
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  5. shadows edge

    shadows edge Red Sox, bitch

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    fuck this..

    folks just can't compare us, cuz i be droppin grisly writtens
    while all your verses are just so so... obviously bitten
    yeah won once, but win another, please
    when even ya closer admits your verses belong in the other league
    this faggot joey donuts, sees a guy & you know he go nuts
    stupid fuck would prolly lose even if i hadn't shown up
    know what? ill teach this slow fuck, even if my comments bore
    ^ cuz thats the type of flow you *shoulda* sacraficed your content for
    this bitches verses? they all miss me, please
    cuz if i see donuts coming fresh, you best know its at krispy kreme
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  6. J o o k

    J o o k Guest

    I pass fear dude, in your case i smack queers too
    I'll take advice from your custom text, your last year's news
    solid opener

    Your not a drug dealer man, let's get straight to the line
    He works at starbucks all day just to stay on his grind
    ok

    Far from loyal, he's probably a fat bastard...
    ...That picked the name shadow's edge cause he's a back stabber
    word

    So your from illinois, known to bring the instruments our way
    Your the original college dropout that influenced kanye
    koo

    Stop talking all that jazz, i'll smack this bitch freely
    This battle is should be in the south, cause its a big easy
    ok ender

    vs

    folks just can't compare us, cuz i be droppin grisly writtens
    while all your verses are just so so... obviously bitten
    okay opener

    yeah won once, but win another, please
    when even ya closer admits your verses belong in the other league
    koo flip

    this faggot joey donuts, sees a guy & you know he go nuts
    stupid fuck would prolly lose even if i hadn't shown up
    eh

    know what? ill teach this slow fuck, even if my comments bore
    ^ cuz thats the type of flow you *shoulda* sacraficed your content for
    o ... k

    this bitches verses? they all miss me, please
    cuz if i see donuts coming fresh, you best know its at krispy kreme
    word


    Joey had the more solid verse

    v/ joe
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  7. Yung Impression

    Yung Impression RBL Finest'.....

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    vote-Joey

    he had a more solid verse and his punches had hit harder than's Shadow's especially that Kanye line that u used in ya verse, Shadow's verse was nice also but it didn't make as much contact than Joey's
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  8. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    uppin over no shows
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  9. Complete Chaos

    Complete Chaos I'm Drugs.

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    v- joey

    shadow's verse wasn't bad, it just didn't appeal to me much. donuts line was soo basic though. joey's lines were all pretty good, i liked the last year's news.
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  10. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    i was kinda disappointed with this, was expecting more from both of you. Joey had a decent verse, nothing special...i was feeling the first 2 couplets the most. Shadow your verse didn't really appeal to me either, i expected better, only line i was feeling was the content line, rest was kinda weak, i know he's seen 4349903 donut flips before. Joey got this one.

    vote = Joey Donuts
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  11. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    4-0 JD no links (-1)-(-5) lol @ a negative score get yer links in peoples
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  12. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    Joey Donuts wins 2-0

    Shadows Edge loses 1-1
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