Shadow Faces

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Predator INC, Feb 14, 2011.

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  1. Predator INC

    Predator INC New Member

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    i see shadows of your face upon the walll
    by the look in your eye i dont know you at all
    stop putting on a face

    when u utter you hide so comfortable in your lies
    ...you ask yourself why on illusions i thrive
    im trying to decide whats real n fake

    friends come n go so im still alone
    lost in their bliss people dont know the cold
    praying that god can squelch my hate

    old friends are strangers who lead me to danger
    their evil agendas their personal saviour
    but theirselves they cannot save

    so at the end of the day alone in your mind
    ...are you a conformer or one of a kind
    cuz nows the time to choose how youll live ur days
    test
  2. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    A bit general and generic in approach but I must say, I feel what you are saying. There is feeling in this, but just the tip of the ice burg. Perhaps you could have been specific, made it a point blank emotional war on some issue soly related to you, yourself, but also universally felt by others ?

    nice job.
    test
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