~Seeking~ (my first poem on here)

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  1. YuNg WiZ

    YuNg WiZ aka L.O.G.I.C.

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    Intellectual
    Searching for life’s true meaning
    Spirit broken down

    Sometimes unsound in
    Judgment intentions blurry
    God grants wisdom quick

    To those who seek it
    Relief, momentarily
    Peace reached forever​
    test
  2. absolute zero

    absolute zero Among the living

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    Welcome.

    Nice haiku. Can always appreciate someone with a sense of structure. Please stick around.
    test
  3. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul I'm Pretty

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    First off welcome to the realm. It's always good to see new people coming in. I must say after all the years I've been here I never seen a new poet come in dropping a haiku lol. Really looking foward to seeing more work by you soon.

    One luv
    test
  4. YuNg WiZ

    YuNg WiZ aka L.O.G.I.C.

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    thank you, I hope to drop a poem every now and then
    test
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