~Scared Romeo~

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  1. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    so i kept walking...

    i know soon i'll stumble
    across the answer...
    and things will be
    clearer...

    ^^^t'was clever, adding that lil bit more depth to it


    dayum, this piece was real nice...feelin the whole imagery and escriptive words of this...

    i totally agree with what E.poet said

    about not knowing where to go while you with her then once shes gone...you know what direction your headed...just one of tose things man

    this was dope....end of

    pz

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    test
  2. iLL Script.

    iLL Script. ~Poetic~

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    we went from
    sandbox kids to best
    friends...to lovers, now we are stuck
    at the next step...
    scared to lose me to
    the next bitch
    and death...
    i want to change this life
    with you, but I dont know where
    to begin...


    ::stands up n' claps:: excellent. tha above reminded me so much of my own life. keystyled or written whole thing was amazin' very glad ur back 2 writtin' n' blessin' us with ur talent
    stay up
    test
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