"Say My Name" 1st single from my demo...

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  1. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    You didn't listen to the who;e thing then....because its only a little choppy for about 18 seconds in the remainder of the first verse...And thats so people can catch up to my insanity. I did not fall off fella. I mean, the 3rd verse is the hottest thing ever invented since the dang cheeseburger.
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  2. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    Good lookin out kid.
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  3. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    Did you? Thanks.
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  4. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    ..................
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  5. emcee50killa

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    Extremely hott track here kid. You out-did yourself again.
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  6. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    Good lookin out kid.
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  7. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    .............
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  8. E. Fate

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    Your insanity was borrowed from someone else. Or atleast a bootleg version of it anyway.
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  9. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    Actually, I was probobly raised just as tough as almost anybody in the industry...Including whoever your referring to.

    Bottom line, Im just being myself on the mic...I was always A class clown (until I got hooked on crack, it depresses you), so If I rap funny, Great.
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  10. MC B-Dee

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    yo man, u gt nice multies in there,

    change ya voice, dnt create a voice 2 rap with, be urslef.

    and if that is ur natural voice, scrap what i sed above and create a better 1.
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  11. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    I assume that 'multi's' refer to multiple rhyme scheme's being intertwined simotaniously...If I am right then thank you.


    HOllA!!!
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  12. 4Dbling

    4Dbling Smoking weed > Shooting H

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    Eminem posts music on rapmusic.com????!?!?!?
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  13. Und3rw0rlD

    Und3rw0rlD two blunts and a mic

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    whack... you're not the real slim shady... realise this you fucking douche bag....
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  14. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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    1. stop saying my name in every single one of your fucking tracks, fucking christ

    2. who the fuck makes a "single" for a demo?

    3. do you write your rhymes with fucking finger paints? cuz they sound like some second grade shit, on the real


    give. up.
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  15. Syntax_Mastery

    Syntax_Mastery Emcee/Producer/Engineer

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    seriously....
    do you beleive yourself when you say BS like this?

    come on... dont post tracks if your just gonna disagree with everyone who says your not the illest ever.

    and wtf@mentioning DZK in a "single" for a "demo"... do you even know wtf your talking about or doing?


    dog... for real... wake the fuck up.
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  16. Madd'Aliu$

    Madd'Aliu$ Latin Girlz Luv Me

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    you sound like a white Genome


    quality real weak


    dis won't win you outside internet shine,unless you eminem or suntin


    i think dis is a bad choice for a single(just my opinion)


    but do you man


    PEACEN!


    flow needz some werk
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  17. DZK

    DZK DZKonline.net

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    hahahahaha

    yo i just fucking lost my shit, every which way
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  18. KamikazeLyricist

    KamikazeLyricist The Kamikaze Lyricist

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    hmmm I say DZ stfu and Face Me you sissy !!! and Eturnal up youre game a lil !!!
    Im out Pz !!!
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  19. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    Ok, ummm, check out my new single for my demo (as in the song Im gonna throw at my local radio stations to whatever outcome). Yo, syntax, any relation to syntax records?

    ...-To everyone thats been havin a good time with my music, thank you for your ears.

    ...-To everyone that does not like me, come here for a big group hug.
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  20. SpoonFull

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    eternal, i have no personal beef with you. You're not a bad rapper at all, honestly. You can flow on a beat and you have energy wit it. Those are good aspects, BUT you need to find your own style and start spitting and making music for the love of it. Being aggressive and cocky is good if you're real ill, and you and I both know you aren't that good. You're ok, but you are def. not good enough to be dissing people or talking shit. Take the advice people take the time to give you and USE it
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