"Say My Name" 1st single from my demo...

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  1. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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  3. P Stew

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    your voice was kinda annoying at parts on this shit....
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  4. KonceptSs

    KonceptSs New Member

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    You sound like a homosexual robot.


    Joint is kinda weak dude..your flow is too choppy...you have no charisma on the mic....maybe when you get it done in the studio - It'll sound much better - But for now...it's weak.
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  6. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    Thnaks kid, It is my single so its A good thing to be 'good for a single'.

    Holla, the less poppy stuff I don't feel like uploading on my dial up though. E-mail me for a copy of my demo if you want one.
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  7. Extreme Venom

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    omg.. [funny]


    *Presses Play*






    Listening...

    lol@start. what are you doing?....... Oh you are flowing ...lolol... Accaully your flow is type crazy... "Is that the guy from belly?"... lol@police line.. lool@ "where little kids SPORT the urban gear"... Pistol line was ehh... ehh Your a Eminem wanna be with that voice tho... This is Accually not that bad son... But your really biting em's style here... bleh the ending is wackness..
    lololol nizzle be dizzle...



    iight.. we find that The homo sexual robot voice does indeed exsist... BUT.. the jury finds that homie CAN indeed spit on some Methodman type: I'm-not-really-saying-shit-but-it's-delevered-with-entretainment-value type shit... he had the flow going & little lines in the joint that were type witty... sorta like Emenim did in "Hi My name is" which i mentioned before...

    Spit in a new voice(go lower maby?) to distance your delivery from em's.. then polish up your verses to insure those little quips keep comming line after line makeing people rewind like "ha i didn't here him say that b4"..
    Every thing esle is type good.. just Establish consistance in those quips you drop & try hiting it under another voice... Go low \/

    not bad tho.. not what I expected at all..

    Keep banigin :thumb:
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  8. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    You should Think about a name Change too.. eternal doesn't match your stiye.. your pretty witty tho.. i'm sure you can come up with somthing
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  9. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    My new name is: X-treme?
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  10. E. Fate

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    Um....no, how the fuck you gon mention DZK in a single? lmfao, you're really on that dude's jock with the amount of time you dedicate to him. As far as single material goes, it's been done, when EMINEM first dropped - you really think that a label is LOOKING for another Eminem? And that hook, is weak as all fuck. Try again.
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  11. Flow-Joe

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    I've heard Eminem biters before, but this has to take the cake. I mean, damn.

    At least old Eminem got you interested in hearing him spit. This is like, damn. I thought the others guys were hating for the sake of hating, but right now, they are exactly right.

    And you actually paid for a VIP site, god damn...
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  12. Terrible Twos

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    Listening...yea quality is ass...your flow is iight but you aint gonna get big with that cus you sound like a big rapper out right now *cough Eminem cough* ..except not as good...get your own style an you might have a chance of makin it..lol@dissin dzk...tha hottest trend right now... i give this a 5/10...
    do me tha same favor an critique my track when you get time
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=889936
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  13. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    Terrible two's....you don't get it; I will never look at your track based on those comments against me- period- ever
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  14. The Hex

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    i'm still gonna diss u.. waitin on recordin time now.. got my shit written already
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  15. Eternal1

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    ^^^ Let me know when it's done, I'll peep it. I always like a good laugh, so make some nice lines hop out at me.
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    kosmik Oz hip-hop Junkie

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    And you actually paid for a VIP site, god damn... - Flo Joe

    dats what i was thinking..................
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  17. irydeburton420

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    god...this is the worst track i have ever heard ...

    your voice is so goddman GOOFY...

    YOU SOUND LIKE KERMIT THE FROG ... fuckin douche

    go drown yourself
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  18. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    I love you man.
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  19. Eternal1

    Eternal1 Best White Rapper Alive

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    But I wonder what they'll think when they find out I cancelled that credit card
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  20. SpoonFull

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    honestly, i liked the first few bars


    after the big explosion, you fell off. Spend a little more time developing your voice and writing

    keep spitten
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