"Satan's Love" Produced by MC Botch - peep and drop links!!

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  1. psomonkey

    psomonkey Sin Ontology

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    www.myspace.com/vasino

    Satan= Women in this track, its metaphorical

    who's ta say what about tha gender of a spiritual being anyways?

    third song down, drop some feedback and a link and ill return tha favor
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  2. psomonkey

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    come on now.........
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  4. MgTheFuture

    MgTheFuture Music is my life

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    "Satans Love" - lmao @ the title. This beat goes hard. Your lyrics go hard. You got a nice flow and rhyme scheme on this first verse. A bit depressing though, everyone relates to this at some point..

    how does the hook tie into your message ? you and satan holding hands ? or you and satan (a chick) ???

    lol @ your 2nd verse...wow sicker then an aids child.

    You go hard...

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  5. psomonkey

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    haha yeah Satan is a chick in this one
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  6. /Da MaIn AvEnT\

    /Da MaIn AvEnT\ Active Member

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    ur voice is, eh... I think u could come better with it. the flow is nice rhyme scheme is cool. lyrics is nice, lol second verse was on some other shit, you fuckin satan huh? damn, that must be some "hot" pussy.... haha? yeah i fail at jokes.. cool track
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  7. psomonkey

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    yeah, its a metaphorical track dogg

    Satan is a women man cause women are tha most evil species on planet earth
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  8. ReTreaT

    ReTreaT reTreater

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    this - it was on some other shit, but I like the concept tho & damn @ all women bein evil kid
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  9. littleslimlocc

    littleslimlocc New Member

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    beats pretty ill, i think its a little too soft for this shit though, beat got me feelin all melodic, but comin hard on the mic - not fittin together too well - as seperate identities, the beat and the flow are both tight - just together, not meshin super well

    keep it movin
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  10. Jaiz

    Jaiz JaizMusic.com

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    Returning the favor

    I thought your flow was decent though it was a bit choppy at points. Lyrics are decent and you got a pretty grimey voice. For me the beat seemed pretty soft for a hardcore. Not hatin but I found it ironic that you said I have an awkward lisp while it sounds you have quite a lisp yourself. It might be production issues cause I know my S's used to be cut really low due to alot of noise reduction I used to put on vocals back in the day. Iight peace
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  11. Cop J

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    I agree with Instant Legend, beat seems kinda soft for this type of track. Lyrics are kinda crazy. Took me a lil to realize satan = a girl. Good concept. Good flow and delivery, voice is pretty unique but you worked it.

    Quality sounds solid, a little bit to much reverb though.

    Peep
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  12. psomonkey

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    lol I like makin hardcore tracks over soft beats!

    and I dont have a lisp at all

    thanks for peepin yah Ima hit that link cop J
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  13. psomonkey

    psomonkey Sin Ontology

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    fuckin lazy fucks
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  14. Hellboundmusic

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    i dig beat, sounds like some heatmakers shit, like dipset-diplomatic immunity shit....

    voice is alright, just normal generic, flow is good though i like it, its solid, words are descent, could be more unique but their descent fit in with mainstream sort of style, i like the sample on the hookkk

    words could use some work, i like the flow, voice grows on me, descent song, i like it actuallly , pretty coo

    check out mmyyyyyy linkk man.....

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1098605

    thx
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  15. Bad News™

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    wuts good bro...where perris at..u in cali i see...

    this beat is smooth...its hard to distinguish and understand the art of a genius...
    mann this shit grew on me..u a real dude...u cud tell by the lyrics...ur pretty fuckin polished....solid shit....like it a lot.
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  16. Raw_Blow

    Raw_Blow Addiction in the Flesh

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    returning the love

    getting back at u homie

    beat comes in, shit sounds good intro's interesting with the panning, shit comes in, I don't know if I like u behind this beat u sound like u should be on some crazy hardcore underground beats like Big Pun still but that's just me, either way your flow's on point with this, emotion and delivery are definitely polished u didn't break anywhere on it at all, lyrical content was on point as well, I can feel what u're saying as well going through this same shit myself but fuck it u go through it and learn from it, that's life fam, I'm feelin this ish though still second verse takes it and runs with it, overall u did really good on this but still think u needa deal with that underground ish, keep doin u regardless
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  17. psomonkey

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    fasho yah, good lookin out

    Bad News- Perris is in south Riverside County, in tha Inland Empire right next to San Bernadino County

    we in tha shitty lil place where tornado's touch down and knock over trains lol
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  18. Paranoid

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    word thanks for the feed dood, this tracks pretty cool, i love ya voice, but you could deliver it differently. seems like you have ya own style goin for ya man, keep wit it. nice lyrics and a smooth emotion. this beats sick as well. nothing really negative to say about. you have a sick flow as well. 2nd verse ya delivery sky rockets, dope shit son.
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  19. Jack McCrack

    Jack McCrack Somethin I gotta deal wit

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    metaphorical shit?
    i fucks wit it
    cool voice sample at the beginning, feelin the mic presence and rugged voice overall. "Spartans demeanor" and some of the other vocab is dope throughout. "Facin my family the face of insanity..." and everythin following that in the verse is on some sick real shit. Flow was ok, on point throughout. Lyrics were cool, got a little too vivid with the skull fucking but its all gravy. Dope dope song, even tho i think i was feelin "Not that fair" more.

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1098826
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  20. Red304

    Red304 iLL Tactics ENT

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    thx 4 the feed bro, u go hard on all songs ive peeped delivery and presence is where u shine wasnt really feelin the beat on satans love topic nice and sample was koo just too repeditive but u ripped it props bro keep em comin
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