Santa Maria

Discussion in 'Poetry Realm' started by Chavvah, Dec 13, 2012.

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  1. Chavvah

    Chavvah New Member

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    Been gone for a minute...but here's a lil nugget!!


    I feel like poultry
    Defeathered and plucked of my glory...
    poetry....
    When Noah weeps
    the waters of the Euphrates speaks....
    in tongues...
    sheets spun into heavy turbans
    protecting His Crown...
    the familiar babble
    unknown to the weeping nuns of Babylon...
    the turbulent sound is that of them awaiting their journeys
    to reunite with their husband...

    AFRICA
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  2. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    hmm, I love the opening 3 lines...neat. Lot's of interesting lines, great structure. Just, I don't know how to interpret this piece. What inspired this written Chavvah?
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  3. Chavvah

    Chavvah New Member

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    Sup Coup!!! Inspiration behind this piece was just my silent cry for wanting to go back to my homeland away from the fuckery of this America place! Also seeing how cluttered the minds of most women I've brushed elbows with, cluttered with reality tv shows and junk!!!
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  4. Coup d'état

    Coup d'état Don't believe the hype

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    Giving the biblical content you want to go back to Israel (african?) Are you "african american"?
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  5. Chavvah

    Chavvah New Member

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    Precisely!!! Just getting to my roots has been such an amazing journey, I've decided there's no other place for me.
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