~Same Old Shit~ Random Verse On Engineer Beat...

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  1. Rhawfax

    Rhawfax Hold My Pocket

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  2. NobiProd

    NobiProd Registered Offender

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    Real emotional track, I was feelin this shit. Shoulda took it out and made a whole song out of it. Coulda been so much better with a fully devoloped concept. Other than that its just wasted talent. There are millions of rappers that have a good flow and good voice, just only 4% of them can make a good track. Keep up the good work though.
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  3. Rhawfax

    Rhawfax Hold My Pocket

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    I can make a good track...lol...thanks though...
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  4. NobiProd

    NobiProd Registered Offender

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    Haha I never really peeped none of your shit before. Im sure you can make a good track, I wish you woulda with this one though. Ill peep some of your other shit now.
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  5. Syntax_Mastery

    Syntax_Mastery Emcee/Producer/Engineer

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    this is some depressing shit... but the flow and delivery is nice, and the rhymes are dope.

    good work
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  6. Mike Hosea

    Mike Hosea New Member

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    been a while since i heard something from you

    the beats ok.

    flows pretty good delivery is nice too but your breaths kind of annoy me lol everytime i listen to you they annoy me lol immortal technique status. lyrics are crazy emo lol word @ tax depressing shit, they are good though

    this was a good verse not much else to say i was felling it even though its emo and im a happy type of fella

    *sings a camp fire song to you* lol

    return the favor
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=928892
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  7. Raptor

    Raptor New Member

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    yo rhawfax man you a ill ••••• man....thats all i gots to say man....thats all i gots to say....you a ill •••••....but...why you keep doing this shit man? you keep complaining about your life and shit!! GET OVER IT!!! try to do something with your life man!! dont just complain about it like a lil bitch
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