Said and Done : Audio included.

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  1. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    Said and Done - Audio link.


    ^^^^AUDIO

    I hope you enjoy this... I was just flowin free.

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    To me... It doesn't matter where you're going.. What matters is... how you get there... When all is said and done..

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    I'm glancing... through a window of my soul,
    and it hits me like a brick through the window when it's cold.
    I'm feeling bitter and old, living as a soldier..
    Tell me that you've been through this, and it's over.
    The clock starts ticking, first breath, first step..
    Then the next one left leaves ya closer to death.
    So I guess that it's best, I seize the day..
    Live life by example... lead the way..
    So I can breathe today, and say made it through the rough shit.
    I'm busted from being accustomed to the tough shit.
    Trust it's a must kid I'm breaking the chains
    Making a change cause I've lived life escaping the pain
    From honesty so, I've walked the long road it seems,
    And I'm never sacrificing my hopes and dreams.
    I let go of my soul when I was overseas,
    Now all I crave is a place with an ocean breeze.


    When all is said and done..

    With every breath of my life..

    I'll seize the day..

    I've met death in disguise

    I'll lead the way..

    I'll be the best in my prime

    When all is said and done,


    I was struggling, the dumbest kid numb from the hate,
    that my parents put inside me, bearing some of the weight
    on my shoulders, so lately I've been juggling fate..
    tryna stay a few steps ahead like runnin a race..

    It's toxic,

    everyone I talk with

    is lost kid..

    I'm cautious

    to expose the emotion locked in .

    but here I am.. end of the day...

    making this music,

    Passing positive messages making it fluid.
    So put your mind to it, and do it..believe in yourself,
    We're humans...

    not sheep, stop seeking the wealth
    Forget the greed, and give to those needing the help

    Otherwise ya might as well be like the heathen in hell.


    When all is said and done, ya gotta hope you did right in life...

    Cause when it's over... Ya know, it's just done.
    test
  2. IAmBenT

    IAmBenT Eat a dick, faggot

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    Fantastic flow, the beat is really cool too man, my favorite part was the chorus, my only suggestion is dont be afraid of using more concrete images, at times your rhymes remind me of Mike Shinoda from linkin park, its real smart, deep writing but it could use a descriptive spice but you are definitely ill on the mic, beat was hot too

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    When all is said and done..

    With every breath of my life..

    I'll seize the day..

    I've met death in disguise

    I'll lead the way..

    I'll be the best in my prime

    When all is said and done,
    test
  3. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    I've gotten that comparison before to be honest. Which I'm flattered because I'm a huge fan of linkin park. I appreciate you checkin this out. Thanks for the suggestions too, I'll try to encorporate that into future writings I do.


    peace.
    test
  4. Slim Calhoun

    Slim Calhoun Perfected Hustle

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    really feelin this man..you flowed on the beat really well! real deep shit and i can relate man..i loved this piece..maybe one day, we can do a track together..peep my shit in the open mic as well bro
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  5. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    Any more feedback on this here?
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  6. Open Mic Kingz

    Open Mic Kingz T.a.C & JASON ANTHONY

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    Real shit.

    ^
    touched me for some reason... right on my penis.
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  7. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    Thx tac or ja whichever that was lol
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  8. Open Mic Kingz

    Open Mic Kingz T.a.C & JASON ANTHONY

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    It's killing you, isn't it?
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  9. dsp2k5

    dsp2k5 Dime Sack Pimp

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    Oh yeah ... killed it homie ... this was on the spot wit the way i been feelin lately .. i got something im dropping in a couple days but ima have to redo parts of it now lol ... great job man ..
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  10. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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  11. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    Word. Back from army operations. Had to up this again ;)
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  12. Chase Murda

    Chase Murda hostile enviroment

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    yo i gotta say ive seen alot of good tracks from u...much respect from the murda man haha
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  13. mrbeateater

    mrbeateater New Member

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    i liked it...the flow was consistent man...just me reading it...i didnt peep the audio yet(no speakers) but the lyrics were nice...this is sort of a topic that you can do what ever with and i liked what you chose to do with it...big ups
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  14. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    voice sounded good
    flow was pretty fluid
    concept was fresh and rare! sorta dark mood
    but i was feelin' the audio man real talk

    FUCKIN crazy how good rapper u R and what u look like.

    you totally don't look like you should be a rapper but u R A REAL RAPPER!

    thanx for finally blessin us here @ RM again brotha!
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  15. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    Thanks for the feedback, Lpree, I know what you sayin I get that alot
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  16. the omega man

    the omega man so, it goes

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    I didn't listen because I don't have speakers at work...your lyrics are decent and I like the message, good flow...I like a more methaphorical style of lyricism but this definitely gets the point across....i'm sure the shits sick in audio, I'll listen when I get home
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