Discussion in 'Beats/Producers' started by WillieK, Oct 23, 2004.
i'mma goto sleep now
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intro i like so far.. nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
ah man i thought it would be some hard shit.. wasn't diggin the choppy melody.. drums are coo.. but not a fan on how u arranged/played the melody/keys.. this may be the bomb for other heads.. just not diggin it.. mixing could use some work.. keep growing.
lyke A Dubb said
I will please you someday [whipme]
its an ok beat, nice melody, but the beat is not banging hard enough... + i dont knw about this being a westcoast beat... overall, nice, but it needs little work
i wasnt really expecting this.. very interesting ideas... intro was dope tho i would have def played off that way more..
whoever said d12 thats exactly what iw as thinking.. eminem came to mind first then d12 definetly.. this jsut has that silly spit about some shit and make jokes kinda track...
either you liek it or hate it..
i persoannly like it i would say.. could see some changes but i like it its cool .. i think lol im still kinda like "????"
holler back at my thread..
i like how choppy this is but I don't like the keys you chose to use. Sounds bland. Drums is kinda week too.
Maetro Mind-- thankz manh, lol may be a bit too simple
Blazin Game-- yea hahah, now that u said it, i can hear hear D12 on dis too, lol so much for tryin to do westcoast beat
Skirm-- thankz manh, i mma try swtich the melody to different keyz later lol just to give it a try
Good morning ppl
beautiful day today
watsup wit the new layout???
Hmmm unique approach for sure....
First, Use another more grimey bassline for this... make it raunchy as fuck because this has potential.
Second, replace that melody with a different sound but the leave the keys as it is since that's the base of this all
Third...that piccolo sound I guess...not sure what it is...TAKE IT OUT...it doesn't fit in at all...it's just one key being played repeatedly...
And the drums are decent...maybe could be better with a hard hitting sub kick.
And then for that chorus...try making a correlating melody along with the main one instead of that piccolo ish...that is if u have an ear for it..
Solid overall peace
^^aite thankz for the advice manh
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