Rupture. & Lucifa vs Nasty & Master Peace

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  1. NOBLE SOLDIER

    NOBLE SOLDIER Fireball Kid

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    Max 16 Bars Each (32 Per Team)
    Verses Due Monday March 8th (Midnight)
    The voting I will monitor.. and if i catch alias's, or any other Ignorant shady shit going on.. I will end you.. (trust that)

    If you have issues with anything PM me.. Keep the BS out of the threads..
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  2. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    Im in here...
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  3. N A S T Y

    N A S T Y Well-Known Member

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    nice.... in
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  4. Bomb Barred

    Bomb Barred Fly pelican!

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    i'm rup

    20 lines each team
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  5. Lucifa

    Lucifa Viva La Eva

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    ^ Rupture? ..

    I'm here anyways ..

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  6. Lucifa

    Lucifa Viva La Eva

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    Rupture.

    Hey Nasty...
    If we kept battlin constantly i'd always be harrassin ya rips..
    Cuz your losses would go from 0-60 so fast Ferrari would be askin for tips..
    Kids won't go mainstream or top 10, I can back my facts lame..
    With songs sooo Uncharted they could be the soundtrack for that game..
    Cuz my verses are inferno's that'll burn this cunts empty writes..
    I'll make ya Fleshlight up so much it'll resemble what you fuck every night..
    The fact - MP's wack with the freaky rep of a restless sociopath..
    The only Minor Details he's got involve childrens addresses & photographs..
    I'm killin these pussy hippy bitches with incredible restlessness..
    See i'm top of the Food Chain, they just the type to wear edible necklaces..
    This Master Peace is a lifeless & sexless nerd.. so still i've won..
    Cuz we all know U-A-V.. & hope ya get fuckin spotted then killed by one..
    God won't even help this faggot bitch, I know thats a coy trend..
    When he gets down he'll always turn to Luke: 22, his match.com boyfriend..
    Forget bein gangsta, he's never got guns & i'm on fire & blazin..
    Whats nasty shootin? you'd only Seychelles talkin about the Island nation..

    Lucifa:

    I'm not a movie buff so why are both these fools acting for me?
    Seeing these 2 win will be my 1st screening of Paranormal Activity
    Illmatic, Stillmatic? No. Freeposting, still at it. Why?
    A mockery of a GOAT, so take NaS out your name .. ty!
    Nasty's punches similar to his million posts - garbage or empty
    Like his balls .. after he unloaded in Master Peace's public entry
    Convinced he'd get into government by sticking his dick in an MP
    Making his leadership of the Fucking Lame Faggots - simply exemplary
    How you gonna diss, when satellites are needed to take your photo kid?
    This Texan's so fat he turned Upton to Hamford into his hopscotch grid
    These 2 homos be on AIM everyday saying "Yo, gimme that ass G"
    It's well known, since even Cleveland be saying "Oh, that's Nasty"
    MP taking gay mirror snaps to attract buff men - you fucking loser
    FLF never mention you .. thrown out the loop like a Georgian luger
    And there's simply No Limit to Master P's obsession - clearly
    I mean, just look, even his name begins and ends with Me
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  7. N A S T Y

    N A S T Y Well-Known Member

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    THE Corp vs an irrelevant douche and sensitive topical queer
    let's be honest here.... battling was the wrong choice for both of your text careers
    they entered this tourney thinking they'd make a quick bill and be gone
    what the fuck are you on?.... I'd be more worried facing Calibre and Revanon
    I'll bury rupture with one shot shit'll be off the richter scale
    because if the voters can't tell.... that's the only impact ever brought by this pile of fail
    me showing up to this was pointless Lucy
    cuz I'm clowning you in vein see.... your reputation, skill, and looks beat me to it
    I have a million posts I stay raping the quick submit
    but let's be honest for a bit..... my 'aaaaaaaaaa' eclipses any shit either of you ever spit
    Lucifa been droppin sad rhymes sin 99 we could name him Stan
    he look it's Dic, no Q, no GL? man.... oh wait it's just they're British pivot man
    and Rupture serious who are you? come up out of the shadows
    true you still won't matter.... but at least I'd have more than 'you're a faggot' for this battle
    this will be a blow out in all reality who the fuck would vote for you?
    I've seen Rupture write and Lucy's pic.... you niggas are wack and ugly too
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  8. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    I’ll hiccup a quick script, more than enough to kill these pansy’s
    Verses slick, make this Lucy bitch shit in his booty pop panties
    Rup aint nice…you see his vice is this undying love for me
    Posted his verse clutching his V in his Wendy Williams tee
    Lucy’s like Thabeet in this league…all hype but no show
    You’re a staggering disappointment, UConn’d your way to the pros
    That vocab won’t work here LuLu you should revise what you posted
    This team could’ve had a shot if Calibre wasn’t coaching
    Rup’s a hype-man, he can’t write his verse is filler and lies
    You know you’re desperate when you got Chase Murder feedin you lines
    Text aint for you fags, Lu betta call Jook to pick up the slack
    It’s either that or go back to being GL’s doormat
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  9. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Rupture

    If we kept battlin constantly i'd always be harrassin ya rips..
    Cuz your losses would go from 0-60 so fast Ferrari would be askin for tips..

    liked it.

    Kids won't go mainstream or top 10, I can back my facts lame..
    With songs sooo Uncharted they could be the soundtrack for that game..

    coo

    Cuz my verses are inferno's that'll burn this cunts empty writes..
    I'll make ya Fleshlight up so much it'll resemble what you fuck every night..

    ehh..

    The fact - MP's wack with the freaky rep of a restless sociopath..
    The only Minor Details he's got involve childrens addresses & photographs..

    lol, concept was good, the wording, not so much (the setup really).

    I'm killin these pussy hippy bitches with incredible restlessness..
    See i'm top of the Food Chain, they just the type to wear edible necklaces..

    coo..

    This Master Peace is a lifeless & sexless nerd.. so still i've won..
    Cuz we all know U-A-V.. & hope ya get fuckin spotted then killed by one..

    ?

    God won't even help this faggot bitch, I know thats a coy trend..
    When he gets down he'll always turn to Luke: 22, his match.com boyfriend..

    Setup was ass, but I liked the concept. A coy trend? lol wtf?

    Forget bein gangsta, he's never got guns & i'm on fire & blazin..
    Whats nasty shootin? you'd only Seychelles talkin about the Island nation..

    lol, kinda of a stretch, but it's alright.

    Lucifa

    I'm not a movie buff so why are both these fools acting for me?
    Seeing these 2 win will be my 1st screening of Paranormal Activity

    lol

    Illmatic, Stillmatic? No. Freeposting, still at it. Why?
    A mockery of a GOAT, so take NaS out your name .. ty!

    lol, I know it's a stretch, but I though this was funny.

    Nasty's punches similar to his million posts - garbage or empty
    Like his balls .. after he unloaded in Master Peace's public entry

    no..

    Convinced he'd get into government by sticking his dick in an MP
    Making his leadership of the Fucking Lame Faggots - simply exemplary

    no..

    How you gonna diss, when satellites are needed to take your photo kid?
    This Texan's so fat he turned Upton to Hamford into his hopscotch grid

    Seen it..

    These 2 homos be on AIM everyday saying "Yo, gimme that ass G"
    It's well known, since even Cleveland be saying "Oh, that's Nasty"

    lol..

    MP taking gay mirror snaps to attract buff men - you fucking loser
    FLF never mention you .. thrown out the loop like a Georgian luger

    damn..

    And there's simply No Limit to Master P's obsession - clearly
    I mean, just look, even his name begins and ends with Me

    ?

    Nasty

    THE Corp vs an irrelevant douche and sensitive topical queer
    let's be honest here.... battling was the wrong choice for both of your text careers

    ok..

    they entered this tourney thinking they'd make a quick bill and be gone
    what the fuck are you on?.... I'd be more worried facing Calibre and Revanon

    lol..

    I'll bury rupture with one shot shit'll be off the richter scale
    because if the voters can't tell.... that's the only impact ever brought by this pile of fail,

    too simple..

    me showing up to this was pointless Lucy
    cuz I'm clowning you in vein see.... your reputation, skill, and looks beat me to it

    lol, list punches.. it was cool though..

    I have a million posts I stay raping the quick submit
    but let's be honest for a bit..... my 'aaaaaaaaaa' eclipses any shit either of you ever spit

    ok..

    Lucifa been droppin sad rhymes sin 99 we could name him Stan
    he look it's Dic, no Q, no GL? man.... oh wait it's just they're British pivot man

    ok..

    and Rupture serious who are you? come up out of the shadows
    true you still won't matter.... but at least I'd have more than 'you're a faggot' for this battle

    eh..

    this will be a blow out in all reality who the fuck would vote for you?
    I've seen Rupture write and Lucy's pic.... you niggas are wack and ugly too

    eh..

    Master Peace

    I’ll hiccup a quick script, more than enough to kill these pansy’s
    Verses slick, make this Lucy bitch shit in his booty pop panties

    Eh, no..

    Rup aint nice…you see his vice is this undying love for me
    Posted his verse clutching his V in his Wendy Williams tee

    eh..

    Lucy’s like Thabeet in this league…all hype but no show
    You’re a staggering disappointment, UConn’d your way to the pros

    this was nice..

    That vocab won’t work here LuLu you should revise what you posted
    This team could’ve had a shot if Calibre wasn’t coaching

    boo..

    Rup’s a hype-man, he can’t write his verse is filler and lies
    You know you’re desperate when you got Chase Murder feedin you lines

    ehh..

    Text aint for you fags, Lu betta call Jook to pick up the slack
    It’s either that or go back to being GL’s doormat

    coo..

    Vote - Both teams for showing up.. free pass to the next round.

    Really though,

    Vote: Rup and Lucy, better punches. Though line of the battle came from the losing side.
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  10. Sin Skywalker

    Sin Skywalker #184 Gladiator.

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    Rupture / Lucifa - 4
    Nasty / Master Peace - 0

    let's get some votes on this match-up. winning team gets a first round bye when the tournament is revamped. losing team is out.
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  11. .:Pain:.

    .:Pain:. Futurely J. Keeper

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    Rupture: Your set-ups made this super tedious. Punches were there, but the set-ups were just so damn forced most of the time, that it made it annoying to read. It's not like the punches were all that overwhelming anyway, just a bunch of vague personals/punchlines.

    Luc: Started real strong, ended pretty weak. Master Peace doesn't begin and end with Me, it begins with M, and ends with e, so that line was pretty forced. Like I said, the opening 6 or so lines were dope as hell, but the rest kinda felt forced.

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    Nasty: Shit was up and down, not very consistent. The "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa" line was definitely LOTB in my opinion, but the rest of your verse was pretty lackluster. I know I've seen you do better than this, kinda disappointed.

    MP: Shit was pretty boring to be honest, nothing really hard-hitting, nothing that really stood out to me. You coulda been more clever, maybe spent more time on this verse, cuz it seemed a bit rushed.

    Vote - Luc and Rup, because Luc had the VOTB and Rup was solid enough...
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  12. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    i agree with Luci having the best verse.

    overall- vote Luci and Rup
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  13. N A S T Y

    N A S T Y Well-Known Member

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    I've been working nights.... sleeping 3 and 4 hours a day.... had no time.... and just read my verse again.... that shit was garbage
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  14. FreefaLL

    FreefaLL FreefaLL

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    vote - lucifa & rupture

    It's well known, since even Cleveland be saying "Oh, that's Nasty"

    did it for me
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  15. don killa

    don killa New Member

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    Lucy and Rup...I think these dudes actually took it seriously. I hope the 25 bills they strive for make a difference. Smooth flow, well structured but their punches were well placed and effective. A much better read overall. Enjoyable...no. Who can actually say after everything ALL of us has read is enjoyable anymore? L and R = My vote
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  16. Sin Skywalker

    Sin Skywalker #184 Gladiator.

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    Nasty & Master Peace are out.

    Rupture & Lucifa. advance & get a first round bye.
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