Runni from demons (chasing)

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  1. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    Running from demons (chasing)

    I don’t chase dreams no more, I only chase nightmares
    Im chasing love, because cupid never shined near me
    Im chasing that special someone, it’s like im runnin upstairs
    It’s like im always running from my demons

    I would chase a career, but I find nothing interests me now
    I want something to chase, but life to me is like a monotony
    Im chasing answers, but the question’s ain’t even there now
    It’s like I’m always running from my demons

    I’m chasing excitement, but the only thing received is boredom
    I’ve chased a rush in my life forever, now I only got memories
    I chased a real friend, got one now, im always there for them
    It’s like I’m always running from my demons

    Im tired of being hurt, stabbed in the back by partners and friends
    Im tired or running away from situations, tired of making amends
    The world only lies, so i always find myself tired nowadays
    Im tired of running from my demons

    Its time to face my demons



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    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=687399
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=692488
    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?p=8098719#post8098719
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  2. lpoet

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    sometimes it seems as if the pursuit to find oneself is not always the road to redemption...never know where one can find happiness...different for everyone iguess...there will always a be bumps in the road...nice piece...i'd like to read more

    welcome to the realm
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  3. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    thanx...much appreciated, and yeah, imma try release a bit, and do my bit for the community in the feed department
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  4. MarQuise*

    MarQuise* Can You Hear Me*

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    kyza, you know i'm feelin all ur drops, and again feelin this, not one of your strongest, like ive said before, but never the less, i still really like it, keep them coming...
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  5. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    hey hey babes...thanx for the feed...i should get a lot more feed here than b-boys huh
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  6. eatemup

    eatemup New Member

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    yeah this is very deep I wanted to read more tho but a very nice drop
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  7. illpoetical

    illpoetical raising the bar everyday

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    i like this alot it was tight. i can appreciate the subject of chasing things that you want in life, ill piece.

    1ne
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  8. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    thanx people, much appreciated, uppin
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  9. Mind~$oul

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    Welcome to the realm. Simple piece, feeling the structure mostly. Keep writing

    one luv
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  10. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    thanx for the feed and the welcomes...much appreciated
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  11. kyza soza

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  12. kyza soza

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    this was nice... your style is different which is always refreshing... Good Drop.. Hope to read more from you..
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  15. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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  16. 49th Prophet

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    I liked this..it was a good read.

    much love

    peace
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  17. iLL Script.

    iLL Script. ~Poetic~

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    Im tired of being hurt, stabbed in the back by partners and friends
    Im tired or running away from situations, tired of making amends
    The world only lies, so i always find myself tired nowadays
    Im tired of running from my demons

    ^favorite part. nice peace i was feelin' dis
    stay up
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  18. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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  19. Xero Satsujin

    Xero Satsujin OnLy gOd kNoWs oR Goes

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    OK, after reading this one, I figure that I liked the other one better. but seeing that I am replying to this one I might as well say what I have to say about it...Good way to go about the old cliche of chasing dreams. The poem itself has much potential, and in saying that, I think it could have been longer. But anyway, good shit...
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  20. kyza soza

    kyza soza This way up.

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    thanx alot, good to know my shit dont get slept on even tho it aint the strongest...like b-boys
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