RSTL MAG # 2 By: Lyricalpriest

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  1. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Table Of Contents:

    Intro-this weeks matchups
    Re-Caps and Outcomes
    Match of week
    best rhymes from all over

    Nostalgic and Infamous RSTL competitors!

    WELCOME to the third week of the RSTL 2012 season.

    This wraps up a whole week. We had a lot of competition this week,
    some close battles and some land slide victories. one thing is for sure the race to number one contender and champ is getting closer and closer to the finish. as the out comes present to us.

    J. Keeper(2-0)
    Kuja(2-0)

    are the closest to number one contender and champ

    Patrown(2-0)
    ShadowWarriorfs(2-0)

    in tie with patrown and shad with all 100% victories so far

    InsaneVillian(1-1)
    nO gOoD!(1-1)

    50% Insane and NG are fighting for 3rd place

    Coup d’etat(1-1)
    Lyricalpriest(1-1)

    as are these two,

    Galatea(1-0)
    Pent uP(1-0)

    but things could all change depending on the outcome of this week

    Cereal_Killer(1-0)
    DeadKing(1-0)


    nom(1-1)
    the omega man(1-1)

    breathless(0-2)
    Anaphora(0-1)

    TeKneeK(0-1)
    Blanco Ryno(0-0)

    Defcon_5(0-0)
    Katch Phraze(0-0)
    T.a.C(0-0)
    the line up this week will be interesting one to watch a lot of new sign ins, we welcome
    you here, and encourage your participation and I garuntee you will see an improvement
    in your writing with in a few weeks.. weclome a RSTL vet and mod back T.a.C.


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    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Recaps & Outcomes:


    Coup d’etat
    j. keeper = Keeper wins 7-2

    Kuja
    Lyricalpriest = Kuja wins 6-5

    nom
    Patrown = nom wins 4-0. after voting deductions, Pat wins 0 to -1

    ShadowWarriorfs

    the omega man = Shadow wins 7-2

    Breathless
    InsaneVillian = IV wins 6-0

    nO gOoD!

    5 Starre = NG wins by no show

    Anaphora
    Cereal_Killer = CK wins 6-2

    DeadKing
    FórmÅl LôGíc = Dead wins by no show

    Galatea
    Nu’maaN = Gal wins by no show

    Pent uP
    TeKneeK = Pent wins 11-1 in votes. 10 to -4 after deductions
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    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Match of week:


    Obviously has to go to Kuja and Lyricalpriest. this one was kneck and kneck with the votes
    up until the very end. it was pure emotion and rhymes -vs- pure imagery, setting, and perfect
    narrative skills, in a Dual to what seem'd to be a close battle.. Both writers gave it a good shot
    One thing I walk away with from this other then a Loss.. is I received votes from people I didn't
    even excpect and that they complimented me this week. thank you, and congrats to Kuja for really
    stepping it up and taking me DOWN for the WIN!!!

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    Alice


    Alice had a secret, she was young so innocent yet special
    For inside she harnessed great powers she had to wrestle
    But for this young wonder life was cruel,stuck In her room
    Knowing everything she stands for disobeys her fathers rule
    This day started like others sat alone feeling smooothered
    Until she heard screams out back emitting from her brothers
    Rushing to her feet, she lept and dashed to her brothers aid
    & what she did next led to her downfall,such a huge mistake
    A huge beast lay siege,thrashing its claws while devouring
    So Alice had no choice but to conjure magic to overpower it
    Her father grimiced with shock,his daughter was a witch
    All the love he had left him as he yelled 'grab the bitch'
    For days after Alice was locked alone,no sunlight was shown
    Everyone beliving she was just a shell for an old crone
    Nobody cared, she refused to use magic dispite been scared
    She knew what was coming & had to be metally prepared
    After days of darkness passed her prison opened..
    & Her father looked on in shame at his hearts old token
    She was bound & gagged, her eyes sagged
    Led to the lake as her legs dragged
    Villagers were seen carrying planks with snarling faces
    To an odd empty patch with burning traces
    Arriving at the lake gripped by fear,she faced the mayor
    Who proceeded to bound young alice to a wooden chair
    The lake was packed,all the townspeople had gathered
    To witness the demise of this witch that will happen
    A trio of priests stood forward in sequence they chanted
    All the townfolk yelled insults as they raved & ranted
    'Now let us rid this child of evil,may her soul be purged'
    & with that Alice went cold as her body slowly submerged
    The lake was agony the bitter cold cut into her flesh
    Her mind was distressed as water flooded her chest
    She closed her eyes and embraced her water filled prison
    After a while she felt relief as her body had been risen
    '5 minutes submerged she has been so what gives
    Water has failed to purge, look the witch lives'
    Alice was untied & led back to the empty patch with haste
    & bound to a wooden stake,surrounded by wood & tar paste
    The crowd went silent to witness this new act of violence
    As alice cried out alone,her shrieking breaking the silence
    The fire was lit, the flames flickered burning this young girl
    which in turn,Alice fell quiet in the midst of the crimson swirl
    The witch was dead, her charcoaled body was left to rot
    & the bitter story of Alice was never mentioned the town forgot
    Seeking ignorance in bliss which was no surprise
    becasue nobody even noticed the point...
    where Alice opened her eyes
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    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    Best Rhymes From All Over....

    Coup d'etat-

    "Tell me to shut up even, I'm very uneasy near you
    Your eyes, blood shot, sleepy in weird harmonic hue"

    J.Keeper -

    "Until you turn around and see what your verdant grounds have reaped,
    As the serpant shouts and flees with a cursive howl of greed,
    And a purse of dirt worth more than you are bound to see,
    From the depths of your caverns, the Earth you vowed to keep"

    Lyricalpriest -

    "Nothing comes close....... and could Rival the time
    When I could kiss, hope, n stare in them "smiling eyes"

    Kuja -


    "Seeking ignorance in bliss which was no surprise
    becasue nobody even noticed the point...
    where Alice opened her eyes"

    Nom -

    'With his grace now tarred and dreams distorted
    Arms pulled to the side like this thief was thwarted
    There’s no Christ on this hill just a doll floating
    A mouth filling with water like his souls spoken"

    Patrown

    "a political police chief discreetly fathered a child.
    led a typical life till his wife saw deceit in his smile."

    the omega man


    "their words obscure yet I endured their foul mouth manure
    their allure towards liqueur would lead to my death for sure
    so I sprinted through those broken branches and tore my azure velour "

    Shaddowarriorfs -

    "With semen in my mouth I was forced to stomach it
    They just watched me as my desire to live plummeted
    I was like a white dove before that dreadful day
    As my innocence now turns to ashes and fades away…"

    Breathlesss -

    "I was a genius in the ruining,
    so who are these people to decree that I'm doin' things stupidly?
    I'm a human being, to me, that's all that matters.
    Truthfully, I'm fallin' backwards, the view I see, walls and rafters,"

    Insane Villian -

    "the kid with the leakin bladder is dead in his fecal matter
    his brains a disaster, plastered on this day of weekend laughter
    im seeking after who would harm this child of innocence
    since hes ruined my neighbors picket fence he hasnt been wicked since"

    No Good-

    "till one morning he woke, to the sight he thought was a curse
    he peeked to see the villagers had dug a spot in the earth
    The town guards stormed his home, drug him to the street alive
    it was pitiful how they treated him as he shrieked and cried"

    Cereal-Killer -


    "To dream a dream held between the rebirth of queens
    And the thirst of thieves,
    Won’t thrive inside disturbing sleep
    Because I am defined and nursed by peace"

    Anaphora -

    "Some say we take creation to heart, and they're right.
    We spawn from sperm to earthly germ like squirming parasites,
    birthing and birthing more uncannily to eat up this paradise."

    DeadKing -

    "and i hated that you kept me cause your pride wouldn't falter
    so thank you for the opportunity to live a life without a father
    thank you for the chance to live my life in regret
    and having the opportunity of being a worthless piece of shit"

    GaLaTeA-

    "Petty bourgeois, the provincial intellectual and eternal pacifist,
    a friendly, warm person never raising his voice, nor fist,
    decided to rent a cottage in a village called Mist,"

    Pent uP -

    "The average, habitual, drinker is fuel to the engine.
    - Business is great
    the bus' movement's relentless
    There isn't a moment he's not in the mood to be reckless
    with push bars, spiked wheels and a buku of weapons"

    TeKneeK-

    "Broken up …loss of pride… the sun has grown cold…
    the guns finally calmed and the silence controlled
    The evil stench was lifted… theres nothing in mind…
    But a world grown so old with no beauty to find.. "



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  5. lyricalpriest

    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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  6. Nu'maaN

    Nu'maaN Anu'naki, Nuqqa.

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    correction.

    nu show.

    :numaan:
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  7. patrown

    patrown student for life

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    thanks for taking on this responsibility LP.

    I like the format.
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  8. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    Stickied....good work LP
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  9. Cereal_Killer

    Cereal_Killer no ESCAPE

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    nice read..

    thanx LP..
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  10. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    I know one shouldn't present a problem without a solution, I'm disappointed with the mag. I was hoping for predictions, an interview or something.. Maybe the regular mag "guy" couldn't do it and lp through this together last minute, but there was no style to the mag, no attitude, no pictures like we used to have, poking fun at random members .. There's a lot this mag was missing. Hopefully we all can start helping with the mag, and not leave people doing at the last minute.
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  11. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    T.a.C...^^^kick this guys butt
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  12. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    I wasn't trying to be rude, I just miss the mags that offered a little more to it.
    Biotch! You wish you had a phone like mine...
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  13. Shadow

    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    T.a.C. is on his way NG...hide yo kids, hide yo wife!
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  14. nO gOoD!

    nO gOoD! Life Music :: Press Play

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    fuck yo couch!
    Biotch! You wish you had a phone like mine...
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    Shadow Kotaro's Master

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    aww snap son!
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  16. Anaphora

    Anaphora was here

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    I think you meant to say "random lines from everyone's verses" as opposed to best lines, or maybe something like "lines from the beginning or end of verses" because of the ones I'd read, those definitely seem chosen randomly as opposed to being the better parts of verses...
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    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    actually it would seem like that to you, bc thats were i quoted your verse from.. its safe to say typically the opener and closers are the best parts of majority of verses. i went thru each verse and this took time.. and chosse my preferred bars.. they may not be everyones but they are mine. @ ana

    @ Ng

    dude it was thurs last minute, i got the mag up spur of the moment, in the past i did much more indepth mags. there was no structure this week b/c im not the rstl mag mod. but yawl deserved something so i did my best. for it being on the fly.. i left out pics. bc i felt that theres some in the league that griped about it in the past that they didn't care for that part.. i did what i felt was nessesary but by any means, this was a temporary thing next week you will get a much better mag..

    @ anaphora again, smh @ your preposterous claim, the lyrics i chose were prob the best lyrics from that said person if you could point out a better bar couplette from your self feel free.. if you feel the choice i made for yours didnt do you justice

    ty to all the members that appreciated my hard work in putting this mag together. it's harder then what it looks like believe that
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  18. Anaphora

    Anaphora was here

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    I guess it was mostly (the beginning or end) a quick judgement from me, CK, IV, you and Kuja, not sure about the others... I was also surprised that you picked that line for yourself, I'd have said something like:

    ..but instead I wanted to get high kick it all night
    ..come home late argue and fight until day light

    or for Coup:
    Tell me to lift higher to touch your metallic voice
    Let it rivet gold in me, bust up this dynamic noise

    To each their own I guess, just my opinion as well from what the first look, I really don't care to go back and reread all the verses from last week to pick out lines...
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  19. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    have no fear... the rstl hype machine is here...

    ill take care of the msg next week
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    lyricalpriest Rap Games Dawson Creek

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    that's fair enough anaphora. but ya i wasnt trying to pick random lines i was trying to pick the lines that stood out for the verse and also the ones that had the best rhyme or safest rhyme scheme when standing alone.
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